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hi dude. will you be writing a story MC is in The Gentleman the netflix show or movie? hope to hear from you dude.
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He ends up with a heram. And the plot is going ridiculously slow. I am personally not a fan of harems. However I do respect the auther for the amount of words he puts in each chap. Still i fell like is pretty meh
Pretty good if author can update every week once or twice maybe every wednesday and friday or even the weekends and set up a power stone achievement so that way you can earn more money my only concern for this story besides updates is that so far (chapter 2) he has really decided how far his powers can go and it limitations.
Really good story and somewhat decent lemon ( although I would love more depth, detail and length in the lemon . I would love more updates, please.
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good Very good, I like the way the protagonist thinks, He is doing everything anyone would do if they were in that situation. Goodddddddddddddddddddddd
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This novel is a type of collection of objects in movies and TV series (really anything he can put on full screen) even though this type of novel is not completely to my type I understand why it would be liked by many other people. There is a point at which the main character's greed ruins a novel's ability to evolve. After 7 chapters, the MC is already a Sorcerer, immortal, with a universally powerful alien tool such as the Omnitrix, fully unlocked and against face of all this suddenly gets an Xbox. I'm not saying this is bad for any story, but in the background in which the story is read for now, the world is basically the same as ours, so all this power seems dull to me. I sincerely hope I'm wrong, but I think history has no clear future. Other than that I wish the author good luck.
Here I am once again, and I can only ask that you write like the others! Thanks for the story and don't forget, Mass releases muahahhahahaahaahahahaha.
Thrilled to finally dive into the rewritten story! As a dedicated reader of your past works, anticipation levels are high.
yess finally thank you author. Ur the best author-san, hope u the best on this novel coz there's rarely any kind of novel which depicted these kind of genre. Thank u for bringing it back.
This was one of my favorite stories on webnovel and things were going well up until the Star wars universe and after the MC had Anakin win the race. It started going downhill after the Star wars arc was finished and then completey went off the rails to the point of being unreadable when he went to HOTD universe. I don't know if author is bored and I personally have no issues with reading crack fics from time to time. But, this isn't even a crack fic. It feels like the author is purposefly sabotaging the story for his own amusement. At this point its just better to take a break from the story and rewrite things again after the star wars arc and or even put some limitations on his main ability like a time limit on the objects or the number of objects from each universe or even have the story focus on other things other than gaining new powers and just have him trave to make new friend and help save worlds or even take over a couple of worlds. Marvel, DC, Naruto, One piece, HXH, full Metal Alchemist, Harry Potter, MHA, Ben 10 and many other fascinating worlds with fascinating characters and powers. I don't personally like star wars but I liked the arc because it was well written. Imagine if that same writing quality was applied to worlds I actually liked. It would be amazing. To wrap things up I'm not trying to insult the author and I actually think he is a good writer. I just feel kind of disappointed with how things went down and I'll be sure to stay tuned to whatever new story he decides to write.
hi dude. will you be writing a story MC is in The Gentleman the netflix show or movie? hope to hear from you dude.
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He ends up with a heram. And the plot is going ridiculously slow. I am personally not a fan of harems. However I do respect the auther for the amount of words he puts in each chap. Still i fell like is pretty meh
Pretty good if author can update every week once or twice maybe every wednesday and friday or even the weekends and set up a power stone achievement so that way you can earn more money my only concern for this story besides updates is that so far (chapter 2) he has really decided how far his powers can go and it limitations.
Really good story and somewhat decent lemon ( although I would love more depth, detail and length in the lemon . I would love more updates, please.
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good Very good, I like the way the protagonist thinks, He is doing everything anyone would do if they were in that situation. Goodddddddddddddddddddddd
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This novel is a type of collection of objects in movies and TV series (really anything he can put on full screen) even though this type of novel is not completely to my type I understand why it would be liked by many other people. There is a point at which the main character's greed ruins a novel's ability to evolve. After 7 chapters, the MC is already a Sorcerer, immortal, with a universally powerful alien tool such as the Omnitrix, fully unlocked and against face of all this suddenly gets an Xbox. I'm not saying this is bad for any story, but in the background in which the story is read for now, the world is basically the same as ours, so all this power seems dull to me. I sincerely hope I'm wrong, but I think history has no clear future. Other than that I wish the author good luck.
Here I am once again, and I can only ask that you write like the others! Thanks for the story and don't forget, Mass releases muahahhahahaahaahahahaha.
Thrilled to finally dive into the rewritten story! As a dedicated reader of your past works, anticipation levels are high.
yess finally thank you author. Ur the best author-san, hope u the best on this novel coz there's rarely any kind of novel which depicted these kind of genre. Thank u for bringing it back.
This was one of my favorite stories on webnovel and things were going well up until the Star wars universe and after the MC had Anakin win the race. It started going downhill after the Star wars arc was finished and then completey went off the rails to the point of being unreadable when he went to HOTD universe. I don't know if author is bored and I personally have no issues with reading crack fics from time to time. But, this isn't even a crack fic. It feels like the author is purposefly sabotaging the story for his own amusement. At this point its just better to take a break from the story and rewrite things again after the star wars arc and or even put some limitations on his main ability like a time limit on the objects or the number of objects from each universe or even have the story focus on other things other than gaining new powers and just have him trave to make new friend and help save worlds or even take over a couple of worlds. Marvel, DC, Naruto, One piece, HXH, full Metal Alchemist, Harry Potter, MHA, Ben 10 and many other fascinating worlds with fascinating characters and powers. I don't personally like star wars but I liked the arc because it was well written. Imagine if that same writing quality was applied to worlds I actually liked. It would be amazing. To wrap things up I'm not trying to insult the author and I actually think he is a good writer. I just feel kind of disappointed with how things went down and I'll be sure to stay tuned to whatever new story he decides to write.