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摘要
Rias’s older brother and middle child of the Gremory clan born without even a trace of magic in his body.
A dissatisfying child compared to his eldest brother and youngest sister.
A child abandoned by the heavens.
Such a disgrace to his clan that his own mother couldn’t bare to look at him.
Why was he born? In world of gods and goddesses demons and devils Why was he born with not a trace of power born to the strongest of devils? An outlier like him.
Will he get revenge for their failure? or will he realize the world he was born in needs change? needs revolution?
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no harem and very little romance more darker elements to the dxd show and less playful also MC will have more powers then just heavenly restriction.
Btw the MC isn’t reincarnated my own OC born into DXD, Also the MC isn’t going to be extremely intelligent or crazy op, He’ll be strong but like not a super devil in 20 chaps.
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PLEASE don't drop this amazing novel author I'm begging you please don't drop this 😭😭😭
Well, the writing is Good. But personally, just dislike the sypnosis and the overall story. Is it revenge driven? Read and you'll see. All in all, it just not for me.
hey author there are some stories like yours but they are stopped in middle... I hope you will not abandon this story. It's good.
Please don’t drops even though it only have 7 chapters it’s a very good fanfic
This seems pretty interesting and could be pretty good. Tho, the way they act seems really forced cause they are acting way to stupid for how old they are. Although this has a lot of promise and is a very interesting concept! Also after the last chapter the mc better either hate his parents or not even care about them anymore. If mc tries to make it back to "his home" or forgive his parents then imma have to give this a 1 star.
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I like the original story better so far. this is good but still would've been better with the original storyline.
Considering so far the story leaves many empty spaces in the plot and inconsistencies such as almost falling while carrying her and feeling sorry for her out of nowhere.Nata a supposedly almost middle class street demon and he hurts himself when he falls
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 Chapter 1: Brith 9 months ago
- 2 Chapter 2: Odd 9 months ago
- 3 chapter 3: Ajuka 9 months ago
- 4 Chapter 4: Lose 9 months ago
- 5 Chapter 5: Disappointed 9 months ago
- 6 Chapter 6: Olympus 9 months ago
- 7 Chapter 7: Heracles 9 months ago
- 8 Chapter 8: Training 9 months ago
- 9 Chapter 9: Beginning 9 months ago
- 10 Chapter 10: Too special 9 months ago
- 11 Chapter 11: Yamato 9 months ago
- 12 Chapter 12: This isn’t fun 9 months ago
- 13 Chapter 13: Years 9 months ago
- 14 Chapter 14: Evil (rewrite) 9 months ago
- 15 Chapter 15: Chipped wings 9 months ago
- 16 Chapter 16: Super 9 months ago
- 17 Chapter 17: Nova 8 months ago
- 18 Chapter 18: New Birthday 8 months ago
I've only read four chapters, but each chapter has been thrilling, making me excited to read the next one. The story progression is really good. I just hope the main character doesn't become vengeful, like saying, 'I will kill every devil for this humiliation.' Overall, I like the story; it's different from other DxD fanfiction where the MC is a god from birth. Please don't drop it, author.