Playing With Magic

LV 3

Kacper_Cwajda

I don't know if it's your writing style or if you're using ChatGPT, but it's too flowery for me. The system and MC seem alright, I guess, but I didn't read past three chapters because of the writing.

LV 4

Grim_Ignotus_LWG

this story has potential. The author just needs to write more chapters

LV 4

Guri_01_09

Could not read past chapter 2. Chatgpt is way too annoying. MC says he is an adult but act and thinks like a lost naive child.

LV 4

noobody

cyoa is very rare in ff's and thats what i like about it wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

LV 4

suikofan

So far so good. The pre-Hogwarts setup is over. Story is well written well above the normal level of what is found on Webnovel. Can’t wait to see where this goes.

LV 4

Lightest_Reader

Hello there! Just wanted to thank you guys for reading. You guys are awesome!💯 Enjoy the rest of your day!😁

LV 1

Daoist0RgBqt

CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's a great fanfic I love it 😍

LV 1

Chaddts

Much of the story feels off an unnatural. There are also missing commas, and incorrect sentences that can easily lead to misunderstandings, are all over in just the first chapter alone. And the biggest, most relevant issue is the authors use of the annoying [-]-[P]-[W]-[M]-[-] Like what the freak is that? Why is that all over the place for? I can't read this story even if I wanted to with this being pasted in-between every single paragraph. It's ruins the experience and is blatantly in the way.