Harry Potter: I&#39;m James Potter.

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SwordDomainGod1

A below average story. There's a bunch of mistakes in it as if the author didn't bother to research before writing or just changed it. The later wouldn't be too bothersome if there was a warning of AU (alternative universe) in the synopsis, but since it doesn't, I can only assume the author doesn't know much about the canon, the power system and every other thing he messed up. The characters aren't very interesting, there is a carbon copy of Draco and his two goons and the protagonist is very inconsistent with how he was portrayed in the introduction. He's supposedly a genius capable of breaking the power system right at the first few chapters, controlling his accidental magic, but doesn't ask his family to learn wandless magic because it's supposedly too difficult even though he has five years to learn before Hogwarts. I have no idea how he wishes to become stronger than Dumbledore when he doesn't put anything more than the average effort. I'm honestly very disappointed. I expected more given the set up at the beginning, but honestly, the author could have just as easily cut the first chapter cause it's really irrelevant so far given the inconsistency of genius who doesn't think when he has such a clearly defined goal of being the strongest. Overall: 2.4

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10mth 22

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Sid_Nite

it's an rare find , this is pretty good. hope it doesn't get ruined by harem's and full dark mode

11mth 19

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DaoistOfSI

i thought it would be good but it seems like harry potterstory by jk with lily replacing hermoine,james replacing harry,rabastan lestrange replacing draco

10mth 18

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Napstar_Craig2

Honestly the start was great but since meeting with Sirius the character changed entirely. Doesn't even feel like it's a new story but rather the Golden Trio adventures with additional friends. Kinda disappointed with how the character just nosedived from being a cool calculated person to a absolute bullheaded guy. Just because he is Gryffindor doesn't mean he has to portrayed that way.

8mth 16

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malhiharjot

Why is the writer crazy about quidditch game and broom , why not make his own with the freaking all knowledge about modern physics or other business stuff and make his family strong with other strong warding or enchanting something.

11mth 13

LV 4

twerp22

it started good and interesting, but then it took a left turn. went from an mc who controlled himself and was a genius wanted to get really strong to beat voldemort, then he gets to hogwarts and can't seem to control himself or his emotions never went to the library to learn anything and pretty much seems almost exactly like harry potter but just different names. Started pretty good but ended up being a disappointment

6mth 8

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Sentinel_Saga

starts's good looks like the character will be an OC and ends up just like what we know James Potter behaved in the books, the only difference is he has a slight power up.

10mth 7

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STEVIOL_GLY

Good beginning, a new concept, hope he thinks I should fall in love to whomever I want and ends up with lily nonetheless . . . . . . . . . . .

11mth 6

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hizer0778

Good start and I am already looking forward to chapters ahead.

11mth 5

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Darkiling

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11mth 4

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Worldofimagination

Pra mim é uma das melhores fanfic de Harry potter, até agora tudo se encaixa perfeitamente, tava cansado daquelas fanfic que o mc só fica na biblioteca, criando feitiço, fica algo monótono e sem graça, mas essa fanfic me surpreendeu, é engraçado e divertido, espero que o autor não abandone 🙌🏻

10mth 3

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Gabriel_4110

For now this fanfiction is very good. I just hope James Potter doesn't get too strong too quickly. Obviously it's fine for him to become the strongest wizard, but I wouldn't want him to become one when he's still young and I wouldn't want the difference between him and Voldemort to be too much.

10mth 3

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Yogurt_Cereal

entertaining and fun, I like that the rhythm of their first years as children are neither too short nor too long, it is entertaining to see how they grow and form friendships, the writing is also good, I have my power stones reserved for this story

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11mth 3

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jhonor1

good story so far ! [img=recommend]

11mth 3

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DaoistElxnbZ

the mother of James Potter belongs the Black family .................. .................. .... .............................................................................. . . . . . .

11mth 3

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Abhijith_Vc

I have had the pleasure of reading many HP Book; Good and Bad with different tropes and mc reincarnating into James Potter is a rare one. So Kudos to the author for that. And i liked the story as well the only thing it's lacking is a good flow of conversation. Right now it feels too mechanical to me not much emotion in sentences it's not very engaging even though the content is very good.So I hope you get better at writing make this a good fic. And i also hope that you won't drop this fic and continue till its completion.All the best

11mth 3

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PokemonJoker

Definitely a rare find to see a James Potter fic hopefull there is a harem to make it even better

11mth 3

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Worldofimagination

Gosto muito dessa fanfic, tem a capacidade de se tornar a melhor fanfic de harry potter, autor foi muito criativo ao fazer com que o personagem principal fosse Thiago Potter, espero que não deixe cair… Espero que não coloque o Snape como vilão, ele é um dos meus personagens favoritos

11mth 3