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Man can't get enough of this..One of my favourite ongoing fics...Did you know I have been following this fic since you had posted 15 chaps only? Been here till that day man...I have no complaints about this story...Its going brilliantly wether pacing,updates,your english.... So yeah keep it up!till the happy ending of this fic
Great fic hope you stay with margot as the fml ..................................................................................................................
I don't know how to describe this story. I started reading because I thought it would be like the rest of the modern family fanfictions, light hearted and comedy. But reading this feels like I am reading a chinese novel just one more focused on politics, I say this because this story is realistic and fun at times but can be very involved in conspiracies. Even tho I am having mixed feelings about this ff I am still craving for more. I do not know how other ff of this author are like because they do not catch my interest. But I would love to read more of this ff.
This is a a story about a man who's making his media empire where modern family characters are just awkward put in it. It's a good story .Writing and background are done well. Though I don't agree with making the first film of the studio black and white. That'd never work for box office. It'd maybe work just for the sake of the story.
I'm in love. That's it. No other way to describe how I felt after finishing it in 4 hrs. I don't think any more words are needed. this one is truly phenomenal.
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I am going to give you five stars before reading because i believe this will be good like your other stories.......................................
Normally I would happily read it, but it draws me in. I don't know exactly why but I didn't like it. It is neither a modern family fiction nor a Reincarnator novel. very interesting.
please drop more of this more often because this one is a gem can't keep waiting for chapters.
Great work, the pacing of story seems good. As usual, a protagonist with mental trauma (although it's not much in this story) for modern family fanfiction, I only read few which doesn't follow this troupe. I didn't quite like the love interest and their relationship, it seems like something's off, or a bit rushed idk, maybe I'm biased. It's your story and good work. Good luck...
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The story is really good. It’s extremely engaging and well written. The only critique that I have is that It took a long time to insert the modern family cast into the story. Their minimum participation is a bit discouraging for those readers who were expecting more of the MC participating the modern family show. However, in the last chapters it shows that the author added the character to the modern family story by making him have a decent sized interaction with the cast. If possible the author could make sure that this interaction is significant and consistent throughout the whole story.
This is definitely a great story to read. The MC is an amazing character and stroywise it is great. Only reason I quit is due to the relationships, the friendship and future intimate ones. I do not like the choices made there and the ones eatablished feel slightly awkward, for the lack of a better word. There is definitely an audience that likes this, just not me.
currently at chapter 28 and the story is great and well written I can only advise you to read it and make up your own mind. [img=recommander]
great story so glad the mc isn't some genius in everything from movie star, rock star, Olympic athlete. its nice that he's focused on once niche thing and is improving it and being somewhat more realistic.
support ! hope you don't quit ......................................................................................................................................................
Bro just keep up the good work..i wont say you can be a great writer But i absolutely love this work...just dont drop it man...can anybody recommend me novels like this where mc becomes a famous author?
grear fan-fic, mc dose alot of stuff realistcly, its not just turn off ur brain n read, thought one MAJOR complaint is that the way u set alex up as the FML only to say its haiely, it bother me alot n i hope u can reconsider
Muito bom. Estou gostando como está focando no desenvolvimento do personagem e não fazendo dele um personagem de fundo de família moderna Até agora está ótimo
Love everything you are doing till now (the golden globe shenanigans). The problem is I want more and it's update speed is kinda slow for me otherwise it is a 5 star fic for me. I know people have fantasies of going on adventurous world facing dangers and doing wonderful things but if I have the chance I would rather be doing just like the MC is doing with no danger to myself whatsoever and live life in peace.
Okay, I haven't read it at all but imma give it five due to the high reviews I saw. For now, this 'gem' will be stored in the library until it gathers enough chapters for me to binge.
This story is very new and unique . I love how you simply did’t cramed mc in plots
so far it's pretty good, hopefully the author doesn't drop it otherwise it will be a waste as there are hardly any good modern family fics out there
This is a very good start. i really need u to continue this. Keep it grounded like you are. and you can even add more slice of life stuff later on when he's in high school. add a little Romance later, and this will be a joy to read while relaxing.
Why am I finding such jems recently this story is so good it feels natural and it focuses on the Mc rather then his interactions with the modern family cast rather showing times when it makes sense for them to interact. Pls continue updates
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Im happy I found this gem. I've become a fan of the mundane world, entertainment path fanfics. This seems like one ill be hoping is updated every time I open this app. keep up the good work!
Man can't get enough of this..One of my favourite ongoing fics...Did you know I have been following this fic since you had posted 15 chaps only? Been here till that day man...I have no complaints about this story...Its going brilliantly wether pacing,updates,your english.... So yeah keep it up!till the happy ending of this fic
Great fic hope you stay with margot as the fml ..................................................................................................................
I don't know how to describe this story. I started reading because I thought it would be like the rest of the modern family fanfictions, light hearted and comedy. But reading this feels like I am reading a chinese novel just one more focused on politics, I say this because this story is realistic and fun at times but can be very involved in conspiracies. Even tho I am having mixed feelings about this ff I am still craving for more. I do not know how other ff of this author are like because they do not catch my interest. But I would love to read more of this ff.
This is a a story about a man who's making his media empire where modern family characters are just awkward put in it. It's a good story .Writing and background are done well. Though I don't agree with making the first film of the studio black and white. That'd never work for box office. It'd maybe work just for the sake of the story.
I'm in love. That's it. No other way to describe how I felt after finishing it in 4 hrs. I don't think any more words are needed. this one is truly phenomenal.
[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
I am going to give you five stars before reading because i believe this will be good like your other stories.......................................
Normally I would happily read it, but it draws me in. I don't know exactly why but I didn't like it. It is neither a modern family fiction nor a Reincarnator novel. very interesting.
please drop more of this more often because this one is a gem can't keep waiting for chapters.
Great work, the pacing of story seems good. As usual, a protagonist with mental trauma (although it's not much in this story) for modern family fanfiction, I only read few which doesn't follow this troupe. I didn't quite like the love interest and their relationship, it seems like something's off, or a bit rushed idk, maybe I'm biased. It's your story and good work. Good luck...
.................................................................................................................................Goodyear...................... .............. ..........................
The story is really good. It’s extremely engaging and well written. The only critique that I have is that It took a long time to insert the modern family cast into the story. Their minimum participation is a bit discouraging for those readers who were expecting more of the MC participating the modern family show. However, in the last chapters it shows that the author added the character to the modern family story by making him have a decent sized interaction with the cast. If possible the author could make sure that this interaction is significant and consistent throughout the whole story.
This is definitely a great story to read. The MC is an amazing character and stroywise it is great. Only reason I quit is due to the relationships, the friendship and future intimate ones. I do not like the choices made there and the ones eatablished feel slightly awkward, for the lack of a better word. There is definitely an audience that likes this, just not me.
currently at chapter 28 and the story is great and well written I can only advise you to read it and make up your own mind. [img=recommander]
great story so glad the mc isn't some genius in everything from movie star, rock star, Olympic athlete. its nice that he's focused on once niche thing and is improving it and being somewhat more realistic.
support ! hope you don't quit ......................................................................................................................................................
Bro just keep up the good work..i wont say you can be a great writer But i absolutely love this work...just dont drop it man...can anybody recommend me novels like this where mc becomes a famous author?
grear fan-fic, mc dose alot of stuff realistcly, its not just turn off ur brain n read, thought one MAJOR complaint is that the way u set alex up as the FML only to say its haiely, it bother me alot n i hope u can reconsider
Muito bom. Estou gostando como está focando no desenvolvimento do personagem e não fazendo dele um personagem de fundo de família moderna Até agora está ótimo
Love everything you are doing till now (the golden globe shenanigans). The problem is I want more and it's update speed is kinda slow for me otherwise it is a 5 star fic for me. I know people have fantasies of going on adventurous world facing dangers and doing wonderful things but if I have the chance I would rather be doing just like the MC is doing with no danger to myself whatsoever and live life in peace.
Okay, I haven't read it at all but imma give it five due to the high reviews I saw. For now, this 'gem' will be stored in the library until it gathers enough chapters for me to binge.
This story is very new and unique . I love how you simply did’t cramed mc in plots
so far it's pretty good, hopefully the author doesn't drop it otherwise it will be a waste as there are hardly any good modern family fics out there
This is a very good start. i really need u to continue this. Keep it grounded like you are. and you can even add more slice of life stuff later on when he's in high school. add a little Romance later, and this will be a joy to read while relaxing.
Why am I finding such jems recently this story is so good it feels natural and it focuses on the Mc rather then his interactions with the modern family cast rather showing times when it makes sense for them to interact. Pls continue updates
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Im happy I found this gem. I've become a fan of the mundane world, entertainment path fanfics. This seems like one ill be hoping is updated every time I open this app. keep up the good work!