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It's suppose to be a combination of a modern person who has watched/read naruto and Danzo, but it's just Danzo. Upon waking up he's already contemplating how he's going to brainwash children in root and manipulate people. I mean if you want to read about Danzo as the mc then sure.
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It’s a good story, Mc is danzo but actually smart and not making dumb decisions only problem is it’s not a lot of chapters and that’s not that much of a problem, pace is fast when it needs to be and slow when looking over a character and their development.
Danzo is an unexplored character in fanfiction, this fic is a breath of fresh air. Even though author hasnt updated much recently it will still make you wait patiently for the next chapter.
This is great! The only thing I don’t like about this is that Danzo isn’t really getting developed much. However in chapter 16, the author is kinda moving forward towards that. Other than that, the ff is pretty good and is gold. I was expecting a trash Naruto Chinese ff where everyone is out of character, but what I found was gold
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a very original and interesting fanfic that shows what happened if Danzo(which MC possessed) wasn't totally consumed by his greed and use his position and influence to further his own force(root) and power(for now he has a unique sage mode) and increase his influence (such as in Uchiha clan that was historically hostile to him).
This is promising. But I don't want to see him be consumed by desire,like the OG. So please keep that in mind. So far it looks good, interesting premise and good character, grammar is good.
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excited for this new fic, your other the sword one if also a good one, hope you make regular updates and continue the story as well as it started
I was pulled in even though there was 1 chapter. Im ready to stay up all night reading please give me more!!!!!
Shameless review by the authors hehehehehe. You guys will love this if you like kingdom building and would love to see your fav characters duke it out with someone they would never fight with in the original
It's suppose to be a combination of a modern person who has watched/read naruto and Danzo, but it's just Danzo. Upon waking up he's already contemplating how he's going to brainwash children in root and manipulate people. I mean if you want to read about Danzo as the mc then sure.
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It’s a good story, Mc is danzo but actually smart and not making dumb decisions only problem is it’s not a lot of chapters and that’s not that much of a problem, pace is fast when it needs to be and slow when looking over a character and their development.
Danzo is an unexplored character in fanfiction, this fic is a breath of fresh air. Even though author hasnt updated much recently it will still make you wait patiently for the next chapter.
This is great! The only thing I don’t like about this is that Danzo isn’t really getting developed much. However in chapter 16, the author is kinda moving forward towards that. Other than that, the ff is pretty good and is gold. I was expecting a trash Naruto Chinese ff where everyone is out of character, but what I found was gold
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a very original and interesting fanfic that shows what happened if Danzo(which MC possessed) wasn't totally consumed by his greed and use his position and influence to further his own force(root) and power(for now he has a unique sage mode) and increase his influence (such as in Uchiha clan that was historically hostile to him).
This is promising. But I don't want to see him be consumed by desire,like the OG. So please keep that in mind. So far it looks good, interesting premise and good character, grammar is good.
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excited for this new fic, your other the sword one if also a good one, hope you make regular updates and continue the story as well as it started
I was pulled in even though there was 1 chapter. Im ready to stay up all night reading please give me more!!!!!
Shameless review by the authors hehehehehe. You guys will love this if you like kingdom building and would love to see your fav characters duke it out with someone they would never fight with in the original