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love the story and the buildup. The backstory of all the characters is mixed into the story itself and gives the character development a nice touch. absolutely would recommend reading
Updated review after catching up to the most recent chapter 292! (spoiler free) Everything's improved so much since the start, I fall more in love with every single one of them the more I read their story, so much has happened yet youve managed to consistently make the story engaging, 10\10 recommended, still, wonderful stuff man🤭. I'd love to see more of your art too, drawing your own characters and so beautifully, massive W😍
Another good one in the sea of madness and chinese hiveminds The only frustrating element was the mc acting like a wet dog while hiding his strength for a while (even though it was supposed to be somewhat comedic, it was not, for me at least). Also, some of the dialogue seems npcish at times (the usual “dont touch my goddess” type of coments from the sidelines).
All was well until around chapter 102. One of the things that really made me like the novel was Sol and Akiris. The way they only loved each other and f everything and everyone else. Even tho the author stated multiple times this would be single fl, I can tell by the recent chapters I’ve read it’s going to be a sisterhood. I got over that massive disappointment only for the author to showcase the queen and her daughter messing with each other while spying on Sol and Ikaris’s intimate time together. That dark tag is def there for a reason aside from all the deaths—which I still haven’t forgiven the author for 😭. The writing is good, grammar could be improved (sometimes I think the author is starting their own language 😂), just started reading so I can’t say anything about writing stability. If the things I pointed out earlier doesn’t faze you, I would def recommend giving this book a try. While I won’t be reading any further, I do wish the author great success on their writing journey 😁✌🏾
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I am not going to complain or do anything else major Overall the story is kind of good but I just wish that the author showed more instead of telling The lore and world-building could use some reconstruction, and the back story of the MC could be inserted here and there. Overall it's a good story that needs more investment, The skills being used don't need to be explained but I would like to see their fundamentals, I am a big fan of world-building and lore and the story does not focus on that too much that's why my rating is low
this is the only story on this platform that i skip the 18+ scenes to read the story itself great story .would recommend
I love it, thought it'd be cliche fantasy but it's a really warm and wholesome story with interesting and explorable characters 👍👍 Solid read so far!
I've been so immersed in reading incompletely forgot to comment, this book is ball-to-the-wall amazing, W plot, W characters, I know that reviews help you grow so here's my contribution dear author, you deserve it
It's been a long time and many platforms since I've come across a book that has such solid character building, everyone feels real and relatable even while they're basically gods at this point, their intentions come across, their motivations are clear, and nobody (except Bruce) gets left out, this is amazing 10\10 recommended.
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nice work man i like story like this so keep up the work man im waiting for more chap
So I hardly find any writing mistakes at all, the story keeps pace, the characters get their own development whenever author-kun feels like it, and updates seem steady, plus it feels like each chapter gives more info about the worldbuilding side of things ... I love it!
love the story and the buildup. The backstory of all the characters is mixed into the story itself and gives the character development a nice touch. absolutely would recommend reading
Updated review after catching up to the most recent chapter 292! (spoiler free) Everything's improved so much since the start, I fall more in love with every single one of them the more I read their story, so much has happened yet youve managed to consistently make the story engaging, 10\10 recommended, still, wonderful stuff man🤭. I'd love to see more of your art too, drawing your own characters and so beautifully, massive W😍
Another good one in the sea of madness and chinese hiveminds The only frustrating element was the mc acting like a wet dog while hiding his strength for a while (even though it was supposed to be somewhat comedic, it was not, for me at least). Also, some of the dialogue seems npcish at times (the usual “dont touch my goddess” type of coments from the sidelines).
All was well until around chapter 102. One of the things that really made me like the novel was Sol and Akiris. The way they only loved each other and f everything and everyone else. Even tho the author stated multiple times this would be single fl, I can tell by the recent chapters I’ve read it’s going to be a sisterhood. I got over that massive disappointment only for the author to showcase the queen and her daughter messing with each other while spying on Sol and Ikaris’s intimate time together. That dark tag is def there for a reason aside from all the deaths—which I still haven’t forgiven the author for 😭. The writing is good, grammar could be improved (sometimes I think the author is starting their own language 😂), just started reading so I can’t say anything about writing stability. If the things I pointed out earlier doesn’t faze you, I would def recommend giving this book a try. While I won’t be reading any further, I do wish the author great success on their writing journey 😁✌🏾
揭示劇透 I am not going to complain or do anything else major Overall the story is kind of good but I just wish that the author showed more instead of telling The lore and world-building could use some reconstruction, and the back story of the MC could be inserted here and there. Overall it's a good story that needs more investment, The skills being used don't need to be explained but I would like to see their fundamentals, I am a big fan of world-building and lore and the story does not focus on that too much that's why my rating is low
this is the only story on this platform that i skip the 18+ scenes to read the story itself great story .would recommend
I love it, thought it'd be cliche fantasy but it's a really warm and wholesome story with interesting and explorable characters 👍👍 Solid read so far!
I've been so immersed in reading incompletely forgot to comment, this book is ball-to-the-wall amazing, W plot, W characters, I know that reviews help you grow so here's my contribution dear author, you deserve it
It's been a long time and many platforms since I've come across a book that has such solid character building, everyone feels real and relatable even while they're basically gods at this point, their intentions come across, their motivations are clear, and nobody (except Bruce) gets left out, this is amazing 10\10 recommended.
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nice work man i like story like this so keep up the work man im waiting for more chap
So I hardly find any writing mistakes at all, the story keeps pace, the characters get their own development whenever author-kun feels like it, and updates seem steady, plus it feels like each chapter gives more info about the worldbuilding side of things ... I love it!
very good man it's so relaxing and peaceful to read