Hi there Mr Lion I wrote a book called the ASCENSION OF THE FORSAKEN it's a cultivation novel a fresh take if i May say , please check it out
"Hmm, I'm Mu Rufeng." Offering a hand doesn't hit a smiling face, so Mu Rufeng introduced himself as well.
Eastern · Lonely Xiaowen
The story is fleshed out well with good narration that overcomes minor flaws, pacing wise it's good but world building wise it could be better 👍
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'You got balls girl. Walking into a witch's hut takes a lot of bravery, and to think you could even make it to mine. Your spell proficiency must be quite high. Tell me, what school do you go to? Patagonia? Vorca?' The witch laughed to herself while lighting a cigar, but she waited for an answer that never came.
Fantasy · FreylyTheAcolyte
me right now
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nicely done, no need for a revenge arc
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huh?
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i know it's sad... but
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i read many cultivation novels and some don't make sense in terms of levels I want each level to really matter and have an impact on the story
9) MAHAYANA REALM
Fantasy · THE_ARCHITECT
thanks for the review I didn't notice the punctuation errors, THE INCEPTION OF MAYHEM story i made before is about Abaddon or a fragment of his history but i dropped it after a while
Are you Mr Lion
"Hmm, I'm Mu Rufeng." Offering a hand doesn't hit a smiling face, so Mu Rufeng introduced himself as well.
I Slaughtered Through the Dungeon Worlds with My Cheats
Eastern · Lonely Xiaowen