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Swordsmanship has always been our Main Character's passion. He got into this passion due to some of his favourite characters in anime and manga.
His favourite mangas? Bleach and One Piece. That's where swordsmanship plays a major role in the stories. And he loves it.
So imagine how he reacts when he gets the chance to get reincarnated into the world of Bleach as an SI with another template of his choice.
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By age 20(don’t forget he still has around 200 years till plot) is captain level and doesn’t even have his zanpakto yet plus broke his limiter which means even if its an extremely watered down version of saitamas, any thing that makes him struggle will barely even take effort not long after so if he continues his training… well there doesn’t seem to be a reason to read the story anymore might try it later but became frustrated over this. Other then that I pretty much only read the training arc but the little bits of other stuff I read were pretty good in my opinion, although now that the mc pretty much should never worry about power again, and I have the feeling he will anyways, I still don’t know what goals the mc actually has except which I personally find since every fanfic I have read recently seems to think no matter how strong you are more power should always, even when it doesn’t fit the character you described.
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Not a bad story lil bro. But I just can’t give you the full 5 Stars across the board. Sry about that. 😏
This fulfilled my desires on so many levels. Such a beautiful story. I hope the author never drops this.
Great take on the story. The pacing of the first 5 or so chapters is a bit off. But everything else is really good so far (12 chapters.) The chapters are longer than average and it's well written. My only complaint is that the author is releasing three fangics at the same time, which means that the chapter release rate is slow. It would be better if the author focused on a single story at a time, and released at least one chapter a day instead of 1 chapter every 2 days. Waiting two days takes the reader out of his immersion as one might forget what the last chapter was about. But 1-2 chapters a day would surely make this story very popular. There are no other flaws big enough to point out. 4.3/5 stars for this story!
Not Bad at all! Although it can get bland a bit, so you can make it more "alive", you know what I mean?
Where are the chapters man it always the good novel authors who drops the story . Give me chaptrerssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
There is not much to rate as this is a new FF. I will have to wait for more chapters but till now it's all good the character development is very vague. Good story keep up the good work.
fantástico, tengo un problema de que la historia va muy rápido en algunos momentos pero es una gran historia
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A very good concept for the story. I have never seen anyone make a story with flashy flash as a character, even if it's just a template. Overall a good read. Keep up the good work!!!!!
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Loving it so far! Like the templates chosen. Glad that the mc isn’t a copy of byakuya. Not a fan of his law above all mentality lol. Hope you don’t drop this!
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- 1 Byakuya Kuchiki 1 years ago
- 2 Childhood I 1 years ago
- 3 Childhood II 1 years ago
- 4 Childhood III 11 months ago
- 5 Childhood IV 11 months ago
- 6 Senmanzakura- Ten Million Cherry Blossoms 11 months ago
- 7 End of the Academy 11 months ago
- 8 A new Kenpachi 11 months ago
- 9 Cleaning up 11 months ago
- 10 Reactions 11 months ago
- 11 Time skip 11 months ago
- 12 Time skip II 11 months ago
- 13 Rukongai 11 months ago
- 14 The passing of time 10 months ago
- 15 Hollowification 9 months ago
- 16 Framed? 9 months ago
- 17 On trial 4 months ago
Its not a bad story. It has a lot of potential. I like the ideas and the character himself. Its pretty good. If there were any problems, it would be that you tell more than show. If you improve on that then the story would be even better. The ideas are there. Its a fanfic so five stars i guess.