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This author doesn’t not miss,bro just keeps giving banger after banger,author you might not be pregnant but you always deliver ( i can fix that problem).
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The name, synopsis and concept are already enough for atleast 4 stars, but the story is also quite good. Go read it right now.
Its wonky, it's chaos but it's the fun kind, if you can get through and enjoy that slightly chaotic story telling it's a very fun 😊 read.
read it because I saw the name found it quite interesting then saw the book cover liked it and then I read the summary and loved it and now I'm reading it and loving it even more
Before I even read the story, Author-san, your hypnosis has captured my heart and I have great expectations for this story
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I simply CANNOT put in words how reading this brightens my day. It is illogical, yet miraculous the way the author writes the interactions between the MC and the rest of the characters makes me so profoundly contented and wishing for more. Truly lovely.
Oh god, I really regret not reading this sooner! I've only read the first few chapters and I'm already incredibly entertained! Thanks for making such an awesome fic dude!
a pretty funny fanfic, the mc really is a nice idiot guy, he made me laugh a lot........■■|■●■●■●■♤●♤●■■●■●■●■●■●■●■♤●■●♤■●■●■●■■●■●■●■■●■●■●■
i'm writing this because i turned the weekly power stone number from the holy number 777 to 778 because i demand you must collect all the saints and punch god that is all
A really interesting and funny take on the fate grand order series, I enjoy the banter the Mc generates and the reactions of the other characters to his shenanigans. I hope this fic will have a more mature tone when needed but overall I enjoyed reading this work so far. Keep up the good work author or I will punch you!
It's very interesting to read. Thanks, although I think we could have done a better job on the quality of the text. I really liked the main character of the story. He's just a breath of fresh air.
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This novel is great, the MC's interactions with the FGO cast carry it so hard. The fact that the mc is just in saber alters word "built different" is just *chefs kiss* just wish updates were more frequent. Can't have good food everyday thou.
I like the store..............................................................................
I'm not really that far in the fic but I really like it as of now, Author knows how to write an interesting(at least compared to the generic fanfictions protagonists) mc and can easily illustrate his personality, be it by his action or the way he talks. I find it to be more of a comical book dedicated to people who are knowledgeable about the Type-Moon series albeit with some elements of story here and there(again I'm not far in the book, about ten or so chapters in so it might not actually be that the further we go). Overall it'll give you a solid laugh and brighten your mood if you appreciate these kind of books. Don't come here expecting someone who has been played by fate or is miserable due to whatever kind of background they may have. This has a light mood to it and doesn't seem to be that serious(again) so if you're not in that you can go.
lo comencé y las referencias que vi son buenas , la historia es de mi agrado 👍👍
it occurred to me, that I've never reviewed any of this Author's story despite being a fan of his works so let me correct that. the story pretty great, good humor and nice character interaction, the mc is a bit abnoxious and rude but he's not too bad and is likeable to an extent, he's isn't a complete jackxss and is enjoyable to read. this is a good read.
Thus I was summoned by Author in chapter 25 to do some review upon this another fanfiction about heroes fanfiction of history heroes that genderbended to waifu. honored by this, it's my duty to respond the request that's been given by them. After reading, reflecting and looking at thousands of books. this book. is WORTH to read. they have such as: "I cast Fist" cranked to extreme. "You're shady. so you must be someone bad." "We do trolling here." 'Rest in peace side character that give lightsaber. your worth may be higher than generic main character.' and shenanigans known as Nasuverse.
100000/10 should be part of the school curriculum/ on the level of the Bible(Not really but as close as anyone will ever get).
To be honest, this is freaking brilliant. I cant remember the last time i laughed so much.
This author doesn’t not miss,bro just keeps giving banger after banger,author you might not be pregnant but you always deliver ( i can fix that problem).
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The name, synopsis and concept are already enough for atleast 4 stars, but the story is also quite good. Go read it right now.
Its wonky, it's chaos but it's the fun kind, if you can get through and enjoy that slightly chaotic story telling it's a very fun 😊 read.
read it because I saw the name found it quite interesting then saw the book cover liked it and then I read the summary and loved it and now I'm reading it and loving it even more
Before I even read the story, Author-san, your hypnosis has captured my heart and I have great expectations for this story
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This is Gold ,,,,,, Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold Gold
I simply CANNOT put in words how reading this brightens my day. It is illogical, yet miraculous the way the author writes the interactions between the MC and the rest of the characters makes me so profoundly contented and wishing for more. Truly lovely.
Oh god, I really regret not reading this sooner! I've only read the first few chapters and I'm already incredibly entertained! Thanks for making such an awesome fic dude!
a pretty funny fanfic, the mc really is a nice idiot guy, he made me laugh a lot........■■|■●■●■●■♤●♤●■■●■●■●■●■●■●■♤●■●♤■●■●■●■■●■●■●■■●■●■●■
i'm writing this because i turned the weekly power stone number from the holy number 777 to 778 because i demand you must collect all the saints and punch god that is all
A really interesting and funny take on the fate grand order series, I enjoy the banter the Mc generates and the reactions of the other characters to his shenanigans. I hope this fic will have a more mature tone when needed but overall I enjoyed reading this work so far. Keep up the good work author or I will punch you!
It's very interesting to read. Thanks, although I think we could have done a better job on the quality of the text. I really liked the main character of the story. He's just a breath of fresh air.
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
This novel is great, the MC's interactions with the FGO cast carry it so hard. The fact that the mc is just in saber alters word "built different" is just *chefs kiss* just wish updates were more frequent. Can't have good food everyday thou.
I like the store..............................................................................
I'm not really that far in the fic but I really like it as of now, Author knows how to write an interesting(at least compared to the generic fanfictions protagonists) mc and can easily illustrate his personality, be it by his action or the way he talks. I find it to be more of a comical book dedicated to people who are knowledgeable about the Type-Moon series albeit with some elements of story here and there(again I'm not far in the book, about ten or so chapters in so it might not actually be that the further we go). Overall it'll give you a solid laugh and brighten your mood if you appreciate these kind of books. Don't come here expecting someone who has been played by fate or is miserable due to whatever kind of background they may have. This has a light mood to it and doesn't seem to be that serious(again) so if you're not in that you can go.
lo comencé y las referencias que vi son buenas , la historia es de mi agrado 👍👍
it occurred to me, that I've never reviewed any of this Author's story despite being a fan of his works so let me correct that. the story pretty great, good humor and nice character interaction, the mc is a bit abnoxious and rude but he's not too bad and is likeable to an extent, he's isn't a complete jackxss and is enjoyable to read. this is a good read.
Thus I was summoned by Author in chapter 25 to do some review upon this another fanfiction about heroes fanfiction of history heroes that genderbended to waifu. honored by this, it's my duty to respond the request that's been given by them. After reading, reflecting and looking at thousands of books. this book. is WORTH to read. they have such as: "I cast Fist" cranked to extreme. "You're shady. so you must be someone bad." "We do trolling here." 'Rest in peace side character that give lightsaber. your worth may be higher than generic main character.' and shenanigans known as Nasuverse.
100000/10 should be part of the school curriculum/ on the level of the Bible(Not really but as close as anyone will ever get).
To be honest, this is freaking brilliant. I cant remember the last time i laughed so much.