In Da Beninging

This is my first book, so yeah. My description of the book is bad, I'm quite sure about my idea and grammar (I hope that I'm right, even thought it might be a false hope) but my writing might still leave a lot to wish for. If anybody comments about correction of the book, and it makes sense I will do it. I hope that people will provide some ideas about writing better (and that people like my book and enjoy reading it (those are some outrageous wishes, and I know it...)...)...