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It's a story about a boy being reborn as a descendant of Ravenclaw family,
Even though he can't feel any emotions he looks for hapinesss,
I don't know how it will go, but I hope well
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It's my first time writing so don't bring up your hopes too much...
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Also if you have a better idea for the title let me know in the comment section in chapter 0. It would be much appreciated.
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Chaos_Evil_Daoist

Almost a shameless review, but I didn't want to go too far. The book just started and I hope it will go far, but you never know. My writing quality is well... not the worst but still. I hope that readers can tell me what's wrong since even thought I'm also a reader I can't see my own book from that point of view...

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jimimthepinguim

gostei bastante e espero que vc continue escrevendo ansioso por um novo cap

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