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while i think the story is good the writing quality is not as good as it could be
I was excited for another SCP Novel, given the abandoned state of current ones, and the storyline involving base building and systems is promising. However, the reading experience is hindered by confusing language, a journal-like writing style for some of the main character's experiences, a few overly long paragraphs, and numerous poorly-worded sentences. The prevalence of grammar mistakes is overwhelming, with one chapter containing over 50 on a single page. It's evident the author lacks proper proofreading, neglecting tools like Grammarly or ChatGPT. This oversight detracts from the immersive quality of the story, forcing me to give it a disappointing 2.5 stars, despite its potential for a higher rating if not for the numerous errors.-S.M.
luckily this isn't a week day other wise i would be sleep deprived due to how much i loved this, i would say one of the things to improve on is character description like a picture (ai generation is ok) other than that i shall now get sleep... cuz i need it it's mid night. other than that i love this ill be supporting this whenever.
best scp fic I've seen in forever rest is to send ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
not bad but not for me. I feel like this is not written to be a 'novel' it is more of a 'journal', which makes it really hard for me to keep reading.
amazing book quality isn't the best but I'm here for the story and it delivers I recommend it to everyone who likes SCP and thank you for the work author.
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I like SCP and find that for such a huge world it dosen’t get enough love. The book is set up with plotpoints that will be adressed if even 100 chapters later, I’m in it for the long haul.
while i think the story is good the writing quality is not as good as it could be
I was excited for another SCP Novel, given the abandoned state of current ones, and the storyline involving base building and systems is promising. However, the reading experience is hindered by confusing language, a journal-like writing style for some of the main character's experiences, a few overly long paragraphs, and numerous poorly-worded sentences. The prevalence of grammar mistakes is overwhelming, with one chapter containing over 50 on a single page. It's evident the author lacks proper proofreading, neglecting tools like Grammarly or ChatGPT. This oversight detracts from the immersive quality of the story, forcing me to give it a disappointing 2.5 stars, despite its potential for a higher rating if not for the numerous errors.-S.M.
luckily this isn't a week day other wise i would be sleep deprived due to how much i loved this, i would say one of the things to improve on is character description like a picture (ai generation is ok) other than that i shall now get sleep... cuz i need it it's mid night. other than that i love this ill be supporting this whenever.
best scp fic I've seen in forever rest is to send ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
not bad but not for me. I feel like this is not written to be a 'novel' it is more of a 'journal', which makes it really hard for me to keep reading.
amazing book quality isn't the best but I'm here for the story and it delivers I recommend it to everyone who likes SCP and thank you for the work author.
I like this xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx
I like SCP and find that for such a huge world it dosen’t get enough love. The book is set up with plotpoints that will be adressed if even 100 chapters later, I’m in it for the long haul.
Great SCP Story, it's been a while since I read one.