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No, I don't like Meliodas in the first place. Reading him in my favourite novel is outright no. But if only would you let me know if there is going to be a harem in the story, I may read it. Tell me, okay?
is he going to be in the child-like body of Meliodas? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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A frequência dos capítulos está demorando muito, tô ficando 😢😢😢 Força aí, Autor. 🤯🤯🤯💪🏻💪🏻 Ajuda nós aí!😢🥺💪🏻 Tô aqui todo dia esperando um capítulo na esperança de ver uns 100 cap, tô me iludindo demais😢😢💔💔
this is the first fanfic of tbate I'll be reading so be grateful human your are the first hmmp!
I like this novel, this novel has something different and i like it. I cant wait to see more chapter. Hope this novel not drop :) Can i get a Full Counter? SATE SATE SATE~~
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No, I don't like Meliodas in the first place. Reading him in my favourite novel is outright no. But if only would you let me know if there is going to be a harem in the story, I may read it. Tell me, okay?
is he going to be in the child-like body of Meliodas? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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A frequência dos capítulos está demorando muito, tô ficando 😢😢😢 Força aí, Autor. 🤯🤯🤯💪🏻💪🏻 Ajuda nós aí!😢🥺💪🏻 Tô aqui todo dia esperando um capítulo na esperança de ver uns 100 cap, tô me iludindo demais😢😢💔💔
this is the first fanfic of tbate I'll be reading so be grateful human your are the first hmmp!
I like this novel, this novel has something different and i like it. I cant wait to see more chapter. Hope this novel not drop :) Can i get a Full Counter? SATE SATE SATE~~
don't drop please finish this. I might cry if you don't 😭