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What can i say? This book was the best fanfic about Avatar that i ever read. (Sorry if my grammar was so bad, I was Indonesian not American)
This is an insanely interesting work, with very good character development of the main hero and the rest of the characters. Some expressions make you think, it's impossible to stop reading. The world is well-balanced and intriguing, even considering that the time of Aang has not yet come. It saddens me to realize that the last chapter was three months ago, I really hope for a continuation, but I understand that, with a high probability, the author has already abandoned writing. Yet, this is one of the best fanfics about Avatar, and this story is definitely a 10/10.
I'll give it 4 because I ike this the sTory is to my liking and its pretty well made I ike the back story of the characters and things actually makes sense not like the other ff, also the romance is very interesting and somewhat realistic and not forced I see no plot holes or what so ever and this story teachd me a litttle bit of realizationn, every thing is great (at least for me )just hope that this isn't dropped or else I'll be crying in my bed for a whole week
Do what you gotta do. Even though it definitely deserves a 5 star rating, cant break authors rules... Give it a go, it is worth reading. ..........................
Гениальный фанфик,....................................... ...........................................................................................................
a wonderful example of avatar fanfic and, in general, an example for all fanfics where the author, instead of a stupid retelling of the plot with minimal changes, creates his own story that expands the universe of the original 5 звезд от сердца 💗💗💗💗💗
Bro why u want 1 star review haha. This is good guys, have a read tho it feels like we undergoes iroh’s journey a lil bit but i kinda liked it
I was so confused at first why this story got only 1 stars since I never bothered to check the ratings and thought this was a copy of the one I had in my library, hence the bad rating. Anyways here's the bad rating.
i wanted to rate 4 stars but since the author want 1 stars here... as for the story, I like the way the mc's struggle to keep himself sane is shown...
MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!
I do not like avatar fics in general, but this one is heavily OC AU, and very good writing. So I give you your desired one star review, which I think is mean as it does not let newbie readers try this masterpiece
As per the Authors Command, A Star Shall be granted to this Unblemished, untainted, beautiful work of Art. I must say I dutifully enjoyed every moment of the story and can not wait for thy all powerful author to update..
Nose porque quieres una estrella, pero te daré una estrella. Bro tu historia es buena sigue así. ..............................,...m...........
Since everyone is giving one star, let me do it too. Btw this fic is one of the best
This fic is perfect. Completely encapsulate the spirit of the original series, bringing our main character onto a journey of self-discovery marred with struggles against madness, bloodlust and guilt, without being edgy, even staying mature. The 31 chapters I've read were beautiful and I enjoyed them very much.1 Star would read again.
If you like ff with elements of realism of this kind, you should read it. I don't like that kind of fanfic, so I'll pass. If you like ff with elements of realism of this kind, you should read it. I don't like that kind of fanfic, so I'll pass.
bro y do u only want 1 star? anyway, based on the reviews it seems to be an at least "ok" story so imma give it a try
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This review is five stars. (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
just finished chapter 20, its all a fresh and new perspective on the ATLA fics, most fics are... very dependent on bending power and relationships between characters while this fic introduces more complex things, the author is expanding on the world of avatar and I'm all for it.
as always, 1 Star Review only, then say your review, if you're just spamming, then might as well not do it. Warning: This story is inherently Anti-War, and a bit of Anti-Violence. I've become tired of reading Last Airbender fanfics that doesn't truly respect the theme of the original story or sometimes simply giving a middle finger towards it, and either just want to look cool by killing a lot of people and look sadistic because 'it's a chad move', banging underage girls, or both. So this is an attempt at me writing ATLA, probably going to go wrong at some point...
What can i say? This book was the best fanfic about Avatar that i ever read. (Sorry if my grammar was so bad, I was Indonesian not American)
This is an insanely interesting work, with very good character development of the main hero and the rest of the characters. Some expressions make you think, it's impossible to stop reading. The world is well-balanced and intriguing, even considering that the time of Aang has not yet come. It saddens me to realize that the last chapter was three months ago, I really hope for a continuation, but I understand that, with a high probability, the author has already abandoned writing. Yet, this is one of the best fanfics about Avatar, and this story is definitely a 10/10.
I'll give it 4 because I ike this the sTory is to my liking and its pretty well made I ike the back story of the characters and things actually makes sense not like the other ff, also the romance is very interesting and somewhat realistic and not forced I see no plot holes or what so ever and this story teachd me a litttle bit of realizationn, every thing is great (at least for me )just hope that this isn't dropped or else I'll be crying in my bed for a whole week
Do what you gotta do. Even though it definitely deserves a 5 star rating, cant break authors rules... Give it a go, it is worth reading. ..........................
Гениальный фанфик,....................................... ...........................................................................................................
a wonderful example of avatar fanfic and, in general, an example for all fanfics where the author, instead of a stupid retelling of the plot with minimal changes, creates his own story that expands the universe of the original 5 звезд от сердца 💗💗💗💗💗
Bro why u want 1 star review haha. This is good guys, have a read tho it feels like we undergoes iroh’s journey a lil bit but i kinda liked it
I was so confused at first why this story got only 1 stars since I never bothered to check the ratings and thought this was a copy of the one I had in my library, hence the bad rating. Anyways here's the bad rating.
i wanted to rate 4 stars but since the author want 1 stars here... as for the story, I like the way the mc's struggle to keep himself sane is shown...
MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!
I do not like avatar fics in general, but this one is heavily OC AU, and very good writing. So I give you your desired one star review, which I think is mean as it does not let newbie readers try this masterpiece
As per the Authors Command, A Star Shall be granted to this Unblemished, untainted, beautiful work of Art. I must say I dutifully enjoyed every moment of the story and can not wait for thy all powerful author to update..
Nose porque quieres una estrella, pero te daré una estrella. Bro tu historia es buena sigue así. ..............................,...m...........
Since everyone is giving one star, let me do it too. Btw this fic is one of the best
This fic is perfect. Completely encapsulate the spirit of the original series, bringing our main character onto a journey of self-discovery marred with struggles against madness, bloodlust and guilt, without being edgy, even staying mature. The 31 chapters I've read were beautiful and I enjoyed them very much.1 Star would read again.
If you like ff with elements of realism of this kind, you should read it. I don't like that kind of fanfic, so I'll pass. If you like ff with elements of realism of this kind, you should read it. I don't like that kind of fanfic, so I'll pass.
bro y do u only want 1 star? anyway, based on the reviews it seems to be an at least "ok" story so imma give it a try
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This review is five stars. (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
just finished chapter 20, its all a fresh and new perspective on the ATLA fics, most fics are... very dependent on bending power and relationships between characters while this fic introduces more complex things, the author is expanding on the world of avatar and I'm all for it.
as always, 1 Star Review only, then say your review, if you're just spamming, then might as well not do it. Warning: This story is inherently Anti-War, and a bit of Anti-Violence. I've become tired of reading Last Airbender fanfics that doesn't truly respect the theme of the original story or sometimes simply giving a middle finger towards it, and either just want to look cool by killing a lot of people and look sadistic because 'it's a chad move', banging underage girls, or both. So this is an attempt at me writing ATLA, probably going to go wrong at some point...