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really excited to read more! one of the few twilight fanfic's that adds to the wold.
It's quite good even I like the set up at the start and he seems pretty realistic as a person. I saw some people saying that oh he has no ambition and why did he learn to fight only after fighting a vampire. Well it's plain and simple, he can't die and it isn't even the start of the original twilight series we are still in old times and right now he is just enjoying life and what is currently happening is just the set up. Now for the fighting, that was the first vampire he fought and everything before that he could just one shot since he can't die. Like you can't tell you need something until you experience failure that shows what needs to be improved and how you can improve your weaknesses. All in all very good and I want more chapters.
Aku tahu penulis membuat dia semangkin pintar seiring berjalannya waktu, dan bro 3000 tahun tanpa perkembangan nyata selain dapat mengalah beberapa vampir. dan lebih buruknya lagi dia seperti tidak melakulan apapun tentangnya, ya dia belajar dan belajar tapi itu seperti omong kosong. penulis memaksa dalam 3000 tahun tanpa perkembangan selain kekeh ingin mengikuti alur cerita canon.
I loved it the history 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜😃💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜😃💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜😃💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜😃💜💜💜💜
Mr Author don't listen to anyone's bullshit. Just write what you like and your initial intention. It's very relaxing to read about him just living his life. There are many novel there about ambitious mcs, world domination, being a god, etc. But yours is unique. So keep it up.
всё нравится! дерзай дальше. и смешно и местами грустно, но интересно попасть в сумерки за 6 тыщ лет до канона)) я еще такого не читала.
This story was so good that I couldn't stop and binged the whole thing in practically one go. Then I spent half an hour looking for something, anything like this to scratch the same itch and found nothing. It was torture. Amazing story, love the premise and the idea of the mc's small changes throughout history. The pacing is perfect. I can imagine that pacing would be the most difficult part of writing a story like this, one that covers such a long period of time but it was well done. I never felt bored. 10/10 would recommend!
One of the best Twilight Fanfic out there. Genuinely love how Adam has grown throughout the story. I genuinely hope that the author can complete this story.
Great Story, Author really shows the passage of time and how it affects our MC: he becomes much more mature, but also distant, mot wanting to form relationships with ppl that only live a fraction of his time. The normal plot is just starting now with 100 chapters in, but its definitely worth to read everything MC did throughtout the centuries, from ancient rome to the independence of the usa, all the while having to play around with the different vampire covens and politics.
This is really a breath of fresh air among all the other twilight clichè plots. What's more, this is a fantastic fanfic in and of itself. Writing quality is easy and smooth. Characters are so vividly portrayed, one can't help but be drawn into them and live their lives as if one is living them himself. And the world background, Just wow. From the limited and cramped story line that is the twilight, Author has created such a work of art from those tiny details, with originality marring the entirety of the story. Sometimes you can't help but feel this is an entirely different novel, not just a twilight fanfic. Such a good story, and every thing connects, things from millennia old moments to the latest ones. The story has literally no plot holes. At least I didn't see any. This is a must read for every Supernatural and twilight fan.
Overall it’s a good fic and it’s worth it to read it, it really wasn’t what you’d expect from a twilight fan fic but in a good way. I can’t wait to see what the author does with the story and how it ends.
Every day I wake up, I open this stupid app to check up on this stupid story to see if there’s any new chapters released because I can’t stop thinking about reading it. I would highly recommend this fanfic. It is a slice of life story about an immortal living through life just chilling, and it is a very comforting story to read. I think the world is well built up. Can’t wait to see how everything is gonna fit in when we come to the main storyline. 10 out of 10 would highly recommend.
Awesome story! Really enjoyed how it's progressing so far. We're finally getting to the main storyline and I can't wait to see how Adam deals with the Cullen family's teenage vampire drama. Good luck!🤞
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This is undoubtedly the best fanfiction I've ever read. I started the story only a day ago and I'm already at chapter 97. God bless this author, I'll glace you for as long as you are still writing
ok i forgot to rate this fanfic lol 😂, i read this from started early and its one of the best twilight fanfic, hope u healthy always author
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Although I only read the first 10 Chapters I really enjoyed the story the only reason I am dropping is because I read the comments saying Rosalie was the FMC. I don't have a dislike for Rosalie per say, but I also don't really care for her and feel like this was missed chance to make a vampire OC for his lover. Would have been interesting since she could've been like a warrior princess type that is nearly as old as the MC.
Buena historia 👍🏻. Espero que siga de esa manera y los capítulos puedan ser más constantes y largos pero lo recomiendo mucho leerlo y es una historia fascinante
great overall, but since the author is only human the updates take a long time
I love the story, it really doesn't focus much on twilight at all, it's all about Adam starting in the year 4,000 bc as he lives his life as an immortal, the stories he has and all the things he does. The story is wonderful and unique.
It's OK except the character should be about a couple hundreds of millions years old of He's going to be the oldest human and he should be learning everything possible like being a king soldier politician warrior doctor etc and have a storage ability to store away alot of ancient books worth of libraries and more instead he acts like a coward and hides because he's scared to mess with history when he could be apart of it he should be the perfect reinassance man/ polymath.
ok, this is definitely one of the best stories I've ever read, of course there are certain parts I don't like, but all in all it's definitely a fanfic that needs to be read
Great book I really enjoyed reading it and imagining the character grow through your words, really he finds his mate soon and I hope it's Alice Cullen. 🙏 Really love the character growth, although I almost stopped reading just because it was to long but I powered through and it was worth it I like how you made your mc be apart of human history and not that guy that doesn't do anything. And last but not list I love the character design} -GENIUS -STRONG -ACTUALLY HAS SYMPATHY WHEN NEEDED -NOT WEAK MINDED -DON'T THINK POWER IS EVERYTHING -RICH AS F##K -GOOD LOOKING -FUNNY REMEMBER ALICE THE MATE RUUUUUUUUULES!!!!!!! 💯👑
I got to say this is definitely one of the best Twilight I think I've ever read, although there are some grammar mistakes here and there and sometimes quite a lot, but the fanfic is still very much understandable so it's okay. I very much enjoyed reading how the MC reincarnated at 4, 000 BC and his adventures for thousands of years. Unfortunately when it got to the year of about 1,000 AD (chapter 56 til chapter 71) werewolves started to get into the picture and the quality of the story dropped fast and sharp that I kinda lost interest. From that point the story progressed at turtle speed and was completely boring. But finally it all ended in one time skip at chapter 71. since then it started to progress at the normal pace of this fanfic and got back to being a good read, in my opinion. Just a shame that there aren't more chapters to read. Anyhow, I rate this fanfic as five stars!
I really like the concept of the story, as well as the character. The only negative point is the update stability, because I want more chapters.
I like It a lot especially the damper emotions, what type of mate for Adam? Im waiting to see the development, i cant wait to see the Next :)
Beat twilight fanfic on Webnovel. I really hope it covers all books In the end
Bro you introduced a big Bank very early this aligns for a major possibility of a universal currency, Collapse of Rome happed way before collapse of Roman Empire, like 100 years before at least Rome was part of western Roman Empire which collapsed in 475AD but it's eastern counterpart was around till 1453
This story is awesome, is original and plot makes sense, right amount of time skip w/o leaving unexplained gaps. It keeps you engaged in every chapter...
really excited to read more! one of the few twilight fanfic's that adds to the wold.
It's quite good even I like the set up at the start and he seems pretty realistic as a person. I saw some people saying that oh he has no ambition and why did he learn to fight only after fighting a vampire. Well it's plain and simple, he can't die and it isn't even the start of the original twilight series we are still in old times and right now he is just enjoying life and what is currently happening is just the set up. Now for the fighting, that was the first vampire he fought and everything before that he could just one shot since he can't die. Like you can't tell you need something until you experience failure that shows what needs to be improved and how you can improve your weaknesses. All in all very good and I want more chapters.
Aku tahu penulis membuat dia semangkin pintar seiring berjalannya waktu, dan bro 3000 tahun tanpa perkembangan nyata selain dapat mengalah beberapa vampir. dan lebih buruknya lagi dia seperti tidak melakulan apapun tentangnya, ya dia belajar dan belajar tapi itu seperti omong kosong. penulis memaksa dalam 3000 tahun tanpa perkembangan selain kekeh ingin mengikuti alur cerita canon.
I loved it the history 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜😃💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜😃💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜😃💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜😃💜💜💜💜
Mr Author don't listen to anyone's bullshit. Just write what you like and your initial intention. It's very relaxing to read about him just living his life. There are many novel there about ambitious mcs, world domination, being a god, etc. But yours is unique. So keep it up.
всё нравится! дерзай дальше. и смешно и местами грустно, но интересно попасть в сумерки за 6 тыщ лет до канона)) я еще такого не читала.
This story was so good that I couldn't stop and binged the whole thing in practically one go. Then I spent half an hour looking for something, anything like this to scratch the same itch and found nothing. It was torture. Amazing story, love the premise and the idea of the mc's small changes throughout history. The pacing is perfect. I can imagine that pacing would be the most difficult part of writing a story like this, one that covers such a long period of time but it was well done. I never felt bored. 10/10 would recommend!
One of the best Twilight Fanfic out there. Genuinely love how Adam has grown throughout the story. I genuinely hope that the author can complete this story.
Great Story, Author really shows the passage of time and how it affects our MC: he becomes much more mature, but also distant, mot wanting to form relationships with ppl that only live a fraction of his time. The normal plot is just starting now with 100 chapters in, but its definitely worth to read everything MC did throughtout the centuries, from ancient rome to the independence of the usa, all the while having to play around with the different vampire covens and politics.
This is really a breath of fresh air among all the other twilight clichè plots. What's more, this is a fantastic fanfic in and of itself. Writing quality is easy and smooth. Characters are so vividly portrayed, one can't help but be drawn into them and live their lives as if one is living them himself. And the world background, Just wow. From the limited and cramped story line that is the twilight, Author has created such a work of art from those tiny details, with originality marring the entirety of the story. Sometimes you can't help but feel this is an entirely different novel, not just a twilight fanfic. Such a good story, and every thing connects, things from millennia old moments to the latest ones. The story has literally no plot holes. At least I didn't see any. This is a must read for every Supernatural and twilight fan.
Overall it’s a good fic and it’s worth it to read it, it really wasn’t what you’d expect from a twilight fan fic but in a good way. I can’t wait to see what the author does with the story and how it ends.
Every day I wake up, I open this stupid app to check up on this stupid story to see if there’s any new chapters released because I can’t stop thinking about reading it. I would highly recommend this fanfic. It is a slice of life story about an immortal living through life just chilling, and it is a very comforting story to read. I think the world is well built up. Can’t wait to see how everything is gonna fit in when we come to the main storyline. 10 out of 10 would highly recommend.
Awesome story! Really enjoyed how it's progressing so far. We're finally getting to the main storyline and I can't wait to see how Adam deals with the Cullen family's teenage vampire drama. Good luck!🤞
hope this hasn’t been dropped ………………………………………………………………………………………………….………………………………………………………………………………………………….………………………………………………………………………………………………….
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This is undoubtedly the best fanfiction I've ever read. I started the story only a day ago and I'm already at chapter 97. God bless this author, I'll glace you for as long as you are still writing
ok i forgot to rate this fanfic lol 😂, i read this from started early and its one of the best twilight fanfic, hope u healthy always author
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Although I only read the first 10 Chapters I really enjoyed the story the only reason I am dropping is because I read the comments saying Rosalie was the FMC. I don't have a dislike for Rosalie per say, but I also don't really care for her and feel like this was missed chance to make a vampire OC for his lover. Would have been interesting since she could've been like a warrior princess type that is nearly as old as the MC.
Buena historia 👍🏻. Espero que siga de esa manera y los capítulos puedan ser más constantes y largos pero lo recomiendo mucho leerlo y es una historia fascinante
great overall, but since the author is only human the updates take a long time
I love the story, it really doesn't focus much on twilight at all, it's all about Adam starting in the year 4,000 bc as he lives his life as an immortal, the stories he has and all the things he does. The story is wonderful and unique.
It's OK except the character should be about a couple hundreds of millions years old of He's going to be the oldest human and he should be learning everything possible like being a king soldier politician warrior doctor etc and have a storage ability to store away alot of ancient books worth of libraries and more instead he acts like a coward and hides because he's scared to mess with history when he could be apart of it he should be the perfect reinassance man/ polymath.
ok, this is definitely one of the best stories I've ever read, of course there are certain parts I don't like, but all in all it's definitely a fanfic that needs to be read
Great book I really enjoyed reading it and imagining the character grow through your words, really he finds his mate soon and I hope it's Alice Cullen. 🙏 Really love the character growth, although I almost stopped reading just because it was to long but I powered through and it was worth it I like how you made your mc be apart of human history and not that guy that doesn't do anything. And last but not list I love the character design} -GENIUS -STRONG -ACTUALLY HAS SYMPATHY WHEN NEEDED -NOT WEAK MINDED -DON'T THINK POWER IS EVERYTHING -RICH AS F##K -GOOD LOOKING -FUNNY REMEMBER ALICE THE MATE RUUUUUUUUULES!!!!!!! 💯👑
I got to say this is definitely one of the best Twilight I think I've ever read, although there are some grammar mistakes here and there and sometimes quite a lot, but the fanfic is still very much understandable so it's okay. I very much enjoyed reading how the MC reincarnated at 4, 000 BC and his adventures for thousands of years. Unfortunately when it got to the year of about 1,000 AD (chapter 56 til chapter 71) werewolves started to get into the picture and the quality of the story dropped fast and sharp that I kinda lost interest. From that point the story progressed at turtle speed and was completely boring. But finally it all ended in one time skip at chapter 71. since then it started to progress at the normal pace of this fanfic and got back to being a good read, in my opinion. Just a shame that there aren't more chapters to read. Anyhow, I rate this fanfic as five stars!
I really like the concept of the story, as well as the character. The only negative point is the update stability, because I want more chapters.
I like It a lot especially the damper emotions, what type of mate for Adam? Im waiting to see the development, i cant wait to see the Next :)
Beat twilight fanfic on Webnovel. I really hope it covers all books In the end
Bro you introduced a big Bank very early this aligns for a major possibility of a universal currency, Collapse of Rome happed way before collapse of Roman Empire, like 100 years before at least Rome was part of western Roman Empire which collapsed in 475AD but it's eastern counterpart was around till 1453
This story is awesome, is original and plot makes sense, right amount of time skip w/o leaving unexplained gaps. It keeps you engaged in every chapter...