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Unleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel Universe
4.38 (26 評分)
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John finds himself transmigrated to the world of Marvel. John must navigate the Marvel universe, encountering various superheroes and villains along the way. As he confronts numerous challenges, John's strength and abilities make him a formidable force in this new world.
Before you start the fanfic, here's a little heads up:
1) The MC will start as a normal guy who will have to train in order to have strength as strong, or even stronger, than Whitebeard.
2) It's not a harem. I apologize to my dear harem readers. I am not a good enough writer to blend a harem into my story and make it natural enough.
3) This fanfiction will be a cross between the MCU movies and the X-Men movies. I will follow the timeline of the MCU movies, and as for the X-Men movies, it will be a little off from the original as I have to properly merge both the MCU and X-Men worlds.
Well, have a good read then.
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more pleasethere haven't been any interesting marvek stories lately that aren't filled with debauchery
The cake is a lie . If you've come here expecting a MC that works for his abilities ( as I did and I was pretty excited to read this story) , that's too bad. The MC starts with a system and it boots and gives him a bunch of knowledge and a Devil Fruit, that's still OK . Then, the MC is kidnapped???? in the second chapter randomly and his parents left him a super soldier serum, he proceeds to drink it in the 2nd or 3rd chapter ... . What I was expecting was the MC waking up with the quake-quake fruit next to him, but what I got was a MC getting info downloaded in his brain followed by a super soldier serum in the second chapter.. so much "work" haha. DROPPED 3rd chapter.
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Hope u will not drop this and hope it's not a Chinese fiction.... otherwise it's a good story...wants to see either Natasha,jean,storm, captain marvel as a single love interest...and mc growth story should be describe along with known marvel elements gods,demons, villians...try not to make a mess of organization like shield, hydra,etc....just leave the story of shield arc 10 to 20 chaps max....u can't waste 50 chaps solely on shield alone for example
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This fanfic is really not that great. The MC just gets whatever he wants right off the bat, the very definition of a silver spoon. Free system? okay, that's fine. But he literally gets the super soldier serum in the first chapters to cut the amount of training he has to do. House gets wrecked? Lucky Tony is a real estate agent! but that's not all... the characters are way off: the author treats Iron Man like a maid. Tony Stark is a friend of the MC's family, and he'll bend over backwards to spoonfeed him exposition and give him everything he wants for free. The MC even feels comfortable ordering him around, and Tony just takes it. the writing is mostly fine apart from a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but the character interactions are just so robotic it's not fun at all to read. 20 chapters at the time of review
well written and no huge redflags (like other people in the story knowing that he is not from this universe like the ancient one). the mc himself hasn't seemed to create goals outside of getting more powerful, which is fine albeit a little boring. I like the character interactions, conversations are written in a way that is interesting. so long as the stability of updates remains consistent than it should shape up to be a good novel.
5 star given even before i read a single word cuz i liked the description nice and precise 💪💪💪🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Nearly no grammar mistakes so far. The plot is pretty good from what i read and mc works to get stronger. A 4.9 out of 5. Its very good for a marvel fanfic. Probably around top 10 best.
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good proposal I read some chapters and there are some cliché ideas but I don't hate the "cliché" I just hate it when it's done wrong. but I must say that you missed the chance to make a unique character with Whitebeard's characteristics, "ah but he's giant" simple make a plot of him being a genetic mutation, there is also the question of the name, I could use Whitebeard's name, it's very unique and cool. (I wrote using the translator on my keyboard)
Ty for the novel we need more every thing is fantastic all I can say that is every thing is perfect balanced
Well written with very negligible grammatical errors. The plot is good. Updates are stable. Story development sometimes staggers, but it's ok. Keep up the good work.
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I'm only giving it one star. I've heard it's a thing now.