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bluds not even Shazam.And author uses weakest excuses to give MC the randomest powers.like how does "wisdom of Solomon", "WISDOM" turn into telekinesis, psychometry, and flight, and talking to the earth😭.
Hard to recommend for anybody for any reason so far. Feels insanely clickbait sense there is nothing even shazam reminiscent in this story at all as of Chapter 44. They try to do this system thing in the beginning that sort of just stop doing, although not that much was coming of it to draw interest or anything else in any way.
Bad title it should be “in marvel with Shazam system” your story isn’t just “slow” it’s boring af man. We are trying to read something exciting not fall asleep. Just should have given him normal Shazam powers but I feel like you don’t know how to write that and make it fun so you made…this…
I should of read the comments first. I started this fic looking forward to one of my favorite characters from DC in Marvel, but all I got was some half-ass system novel that nerfed Shazam hard. Please don't be like me, Read the comments first.
Una gran historia 😁👏👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁
4.4 star: (5 stars writing quality, 4 stars stability updates, 5 stars story development, 4 stars character design, 4 stars world background) A lot of people hating on the story because the title is misleading, which is understandable. But the story is, nonetheless, good. The mc's power are different yet similar of SHAZAM and gains it's powers progressively, which I like. It's not an OP from the start MC, but rather a story that isn't rushed. I recommend the story and sugest that you aren't led to conclusions simply by the reviews. GOOD STORY!
Good story #####################################################################################################################################################################
why couldn't you just choose an orphan boy from the Marvel universe and beat the plot of getting Shazam's powers____________&&&&______________________&&&&_________&&&&_______________&
Way better than other counterparts on the app. Above 4 star maybe not 5 but hey I'm being encouraging here
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Why is it every story involving Shazam the authors nerf him to the point of barely super soldier. He is literally the embodiment of several godly powers, yet here we have this one who can't even take a hit.
Giving someone amazing power then feeding it to them piece meal while watching them struggle not to die is not a story that interest me. He has power but cant use it is very weak. Its give a sense of falseness to his struggle. Like he could fight and be a hero but whoops he has no power then right before he die HE HAS POWER so f-king lame.
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Fantastic, keep up the good work! The story is enticing and keeps me coming back!
People can be stupid of course it's not going to be Shazam all of a sudden otherwise the story would suck and be boring, and of course it's better to have something to support progression like a system for smoother reading it relies more on training than the system. In short, think long term, what can I say lol, it's not Shazam!
I hate clickbait like this... With that title I expected him to actually have the powers of Shazam. You should really change it, if you don't want to get review-bombed by people annoyed by your clickbait.
It’a snail paced with a misleading name. It’s not interesting enough for me to immerse myself fully at this rate of story telling.
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bluds not even Shazam.And author uses weakest excuses to give MC the randomest powers.like how does "wisdom of Solomon", "WISDOM" turn into telekinesis, psychometry, and flight, and talking to the earth😭.
Hard to recommend for anybody for any reason so far. Feels insanely clickbait sense there is nothing even shazam reminiscent in this story at all as of Chapter 44. They try to do this system thing in the beginning that sort of just stop doing, although not that much was coming of it to draw interest or anything else in any way.
Bad title it should be “in marvel with Shazam system” your story isn’t just “slow” it’s boring af man. We are trying to read something exciting not fall asleep. Just should have given him normal Shazam powers but I feel like you don’t know how to write that and make it fun so you made…this…
I should of read the comments first. I started this fic looking forward to one of my favorite characters from DC in Marvel, but all I got was some half-ass system novel that nerfed Shazam hard. Please don't be like me, Read the comments first.
Una gran historia 😁👏👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏😁😁😁😁
4.4 star: (5 stars writing quality, 4 stars stability updates, 5 stars story development, 4 stars character design, 4 stars world background) A lot of people hating on the story because the title is misleading, which is understandable. But the story is, nonetheless, good. The mc's power are different yet similar of SHAZAM and gains it's powers progressively, which I like. It's not an OP from the start MC, but rather a story that isn't rushed. I recommend the story and sugest that you aren't led to conclusions simply by the reviews. GOOD STORY!
Good story #####################################################################################################################################################################
why couldn't you just choose an orphan boy from the Marvel universe and beat the plot of getting Shazam's powers____________&&&&______________________&&&&_________&&&&_______________&
Way better than other counterparts on the app. Above 4 star maybe not 5 but hey I'm being encouraging here
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Why is it every story involving Shazam the authors nerf him to the point of barely super soldier. He is literally the embodiment of several godly powers, yet here we have this one who can't even take a hit.
Giving someone amazing power then feeding it to them piece meal while watching them struggle not to die is not a story that interest me. He has power but cant use it is very weak. Its give a sense of falseness to his struggle. Like he could fight and be a hero but whoops he has no power then right before he die HE HAS POWER so f-king lame.
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Fantastic, keep up the good work! The story is enticing and keeps me coming back!
People can be stupid of course it's not going to be Shazam all of a sudden otherwise the story would suck and be boring, and of course it's better to have something to support progression like a system for smoother reading it relies more on training than the system. In short, think long term, what can I say lol, it's not Shazam!
I hate clickbait like this... With that title I expected him to actually have the powers of Shazam. You should really change it, if you don't want to get review-bombed by people annoyed by your clickbait.
It’a snail paced with a misleading name. It’s not interesting enough for me to immerse myself fully at this rate of story telling.