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摘要
HUMANS ARE NOT TO GIFTED WITH MAGIC.
HUMANS ARE NOT BLESSED WITH A STRONG BODY.
BUT ONE THING THEY DO HAVE.
IS THE POWER OF THE MIND.
THE POWER TO DREAM.
THE POWER TO CREATE.
LOOK AROUND THE WORLD AND THEIR CREATION.
LET ME SHOW YOU THE POWER OF INNOVADE.
A/N: INSPIRED BY SOUL CALIBER THE AUTHOR OF ANNIALATION MAKER DXD.
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寫檢討It's good but it degrades angels, devils, and fallen angels. It feels like the author is just using the character as a way to badmouth everyone. The main character is too serious for me. Also I hate the position he is in where he is targeted by all the big shots at the very beginning. Even if the quality of this fanfiction is way above the others, it's still not for me but others would probably like it.
this is truly one of the few legendary fanfics on webnove, i hope you dont drop it and keep the vibe of the story as it is.
I am liking it so far, but every so often you dose us with cold water ruining key moments; for example, turning the mc into a girl even temporally he should had checked everything out with his base iq and no defined time limit, along with other things
The story till know has been hella interesting with the developments of the mai n portage and. seeing what as of chapter 10 but he pulled an epic moment where he broke the chackels of humanity and it so hype
揭示劇透a very incredible story that is extremely gripping, i really hope author is only on hiatus and continues it ..... it is great
I like this fanfic very well made I hope you to always update it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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You have an awesome story and idea bro . But I suggest please write in proper paragraph's than in lines bro . That way it would be more awesome to read the story .