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4.07 (14 評分)
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Death, ROB, OP Wishes, Reincarnation
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寫檢討I am unable to comprehend why some author's created a ff based from harem novel/manga/anime without a harem nor i am hoping to them having same thinking as am I, if it is romance anime i am fine with it without harem but a ff based from harem novel/manga/anime without harem meh.... I give this 4 cause this is my first isekai anime i watch
i don't know why but i just can't imagine in another with smartphone fanfic without an harem. It's just shocking. I'm not reading the story i wouldn't be able to read a single female lead with that cringe princess but loved that someone took the initiative to write a fanfic on this. you get 5 stars from me.
Kinda bland, the mc has no real impact with the story and just let it go with the flow, although he does have some influence being one of the richest and famous person in the world. Good enough to pass time but don't expect much for a plot. Just an advice or just suggestions for the author, if you won't change much on the plot, or you won't add something I advised you to turn the story into multiverse travel so his abilities wont go to waste. Cause as of now, the mc is doing nothing at all and has no real danger and everything is just going with the original flow
Harem story without a harem is just weak this world has nothing special about it besides that you should've chosen a different anime to do. --------------------------------------------------------‐--------------------
It’s bland and boring to read. Also very generic it’ just as generic as the actual anime which author keeps defending. Author also contradicts himself by making the mc say stuff like I’ll never do something if someone insults me or blah blah blah but then right before that gives the guys 100 curses so if you want a good fanfic don’t read this story
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Good job man... Going great so far. Really like how you add fantastical touches in the story as well as how you fit certain events little tidbits together that actually kind of makes sense... Anyway. Don't drop 'cause you're doing a great job.
It would be so wrong for me to give a review below 5 stars to my own book