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Toji Fushiguro, the sorcerer killer, dies in battle at the hands of the powerful Satoru Gojo, leaving behind a dark legacy and a son he barely got to know. However, his story doesn’t end there. When Toji opens his eyes again, he finds himself trapped in a strange and unfamiliar world, one where abilities are different and people possess "quirks" instead of cursed energy. With no memory of how he got there but retaining his physical abilities and Heavenly Restriction, Toji discovers he has been reborn into a world where there are heroes instead of sorcerers.
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Guys, I cannot stress enough that this is a rare fanfic to find. This is not a gem, It is diamond. • No Harem • No trophy waifu • No "average-MC-predatory-gaze" of an anime girl • No overly sexualized description of female • Interaction is organic • No unrealistically ambitious MC • No arrogant MC • No holier-than-thou MC • No thinking with his 'd' MC • MC is not an SI stealing body • MC is actually Toji Fushiguro • Toji being Chad • Grammar is above average • Is a pure Gen(General) fanfic
Overall, I'd say this is a decent fanfic. There are quite a few points I did not like, but the plot direction and storytelling are not bad. The grammar is above average and very much so readable given all the mid fics and trashy TLs, so that point is fine. Although I did say the plot direction is fine, I did not like how the plot itself was developed thus far. There were too many time skips that any relationships that could've been thoroughly built have been rushed and thus decreasing the quality of the characters individually, overall. I understand skipping the early stages of childhood, but the author skipped a bit too much. Even if you didn't show his life in school given Toji's personality and approach to education, the author could've spent at least 1 chapter to flesh out the family dynamics and show his change in view of his new mother over time. Cus, let's be honest, when Toji was born, he wouldn't give a f**k about his mother, I'll just say that and nothing more to not spoil too much. One good method of doing time skips was to segment the time skip into fragments, say 1 year intervals. So you can skip a year, give a few paragraphs of dialogue depicting core interactions between relevant characters ot the story or even just a PoV from the mc seeing his mother's struggles in more detail and his change in thought over time. In terms of character design, this category lost points due to what I stated above. I get that we are using some canon characters, but when you introduce rather important and quite relevant characters to the story, i.e., mother and grandmother, but don't show character DEVELOPMENT it is a minus in my book. Given how the author depicted it, it was more as if a relationship bar, as in games, just jumped multiple times instead of rising gradually. I do understand this is incredibly difficult to portray, which is why I don't want the author to feel discouraged from this. The update rate seems pretty solid overall so nothing to say there. Lastly, the world bg. It's BnHA, not much to say. The biggest complaint would be how tf the mc even met up with Momo. I get she's probably the FL but the story development to that doesn't make much sense, especially given how rich the yaoyorozu family is. How the mc's mother met mom's mother is probably one of the weirdest things. The mc's first meeting with momo can be chalked up to momo wanted to experience normal life a bit more but given mc's mom either worked as a hostess or some form of prostitution it doesn't make much sense. Overall, not bad of a read. It has it's flaws but that's just the author needing more experience writing. And I have seen far more ridiculous plot points written by other authors so this is by no means bad. Keep up the work, author-kun. Ah, and if curious: Writing Quality: 5 Story dev: 2 Char design: 3 Update: 5 World Bg: 4 Overall: 3.8
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ohhh, interesting. Dark end, Dark beginning, Toji getting his character fleshed out, and Povs of mother who is struggling to adapt to a mother's life. Watched with interest, please update, and godspeed.
It's just the beginning but it looks really promising. The Author got the personality of Toji right and the world building is pretty fleshed out and soulful for sure, most stories fail at that.
Ok so first things first this IS Toji from jjk reincarnating in mha, not some guy who met God and wanted to look like Toji with his abilities. With the way the story is going so far, it's portrayal of Toji is quite poor. Given how Toji usually acts and views his own life and the lives of others, he's very out of character the whole FF. Especially with who you decided to choose as the love interest, which seems to be Momo. Just a quick reminder, Toji was a grown ass man with a dead wife and abandoned his child in his last life. The mental age difference between Toji and Momo is making Toji look real creepy, the 'pull up to the playground in a white van and start offering little kids candy' creepy. Truthfully I believe the best way would have been no romance at all, for her truly loved his dead wife to the point he couldn't bring himself to love again after her death. Also, his relationship with his 'mother' is another thing that feels quite forced. The way that they interact would definitely cause Toji to run away from home just like he did from the zenin clan in jjk, family doesn't mean shit to him. We all know that Toji ALWAYS puts himself first, the needs of others are irrelevant to him. So him willingly choosing to go to U.A all because of Momo's hurt feelings is just really off putting. To put it simply, it's really just forced plot for Toji to interact with the main cast of mha. I just feel like Toji would literally want nothing to do with heroes given the difference in mindsets, and Toji would be a pretty shitty hero given how well he took care of his own child. He wouldn't like not being able to kill, that would be a thing of conflict between him and the actual heroes of Japan. Going through all the capture and arrest procedures would be too much of a hassle when he would rather shoot all his problems away. He would literally only care about the paycheck after all, what others think of him doesn't matter as long as he could gamble his life away like a bum. Overall the story is decent, but it could be better if things went differently and if Toji was more in character to his canon counterpart in jjk. It probably would've been better if you just chose to make a guy that wanted to be Toji in mha type fic instead of actually choosing Toji.
Excellent writing, The author has an exceptional understanding of toji's character. which allows him to give him some really tasty character development. and it completely reflects his new upbringing in the MHA world, like for example how he doesn't like getting gifts and money for his poor mother, but he is still money-hungry toji with everyone else. and him learning from his past mistakes from his past life in JJK to the point, he wants to give being a hero a try. (though he is only doing it because the people he cares about want him to.)
12 chapters so far but really good, characters are actually kind of fleshed out and not like other fics, Toji actually keeping up his personality and not some completely different person.
Take the dialogue with a grain of salt. I understand the Author wants character growth from Toji and growing up in a new life and being affected by hormones but some of it just feels like an OC with how they talk. Like, everything Toji does I can see that Toji in some fashion he would do but he wouldnt talk about or go about it that way. Like giving Uraraka a pep talk or how 'vocal' he is about certain things. Toji is doing alot of talking instead of showing. He may do those things but he wouldn't have voiced it so blantantly. a few examples like how he shouts at Uraraka and threw her towards Midoriya. Toji was an assassin, he has shown that he doesn't trust anything but his own strength in the past. But in this he trusts an untested gauntlet because its a gift from Momo and a examinee he barely spoken to. He also voices thoughts like "Can't they see they might injure themselves or worse have causalities??" or other thoughts like "Heh, I'm a genius" things that could be conveyed in a tone alot more in tune with his character such as "Are they mad?" and just "Heh." with a smug grin. It's just like, make him more subdued even if it's because of character development. Theres also a fact that he shouts "He's going to kill himself if we dont do something can you still use your quirk?" As if didn't blitz Dagon. So Toji is abit nerfed, maybe because he's younger but he's still been training alongside his heavenly restriction.
твердые пять звезд!! я бы поставил больше если бы мог:) продолжай в том же духе это шедевр!!!
Peak stuff for wn,Tojis devil may Care Attitude is pretty entertaining and autenthic and he slowly becomes a better Person as the time movies in, highly recomended.
All in all this is a an average fanfic nothing to really be upset about but there is also nothing to get that excited about so Writing Quality: 2 Updating Stability:4 Story Development: 2 Character Design: 3 world background:2
I like it. Toji is very in character, and is experiencing some nice growth from his old self, only gripe I have is updates but that's just me being greedy 😅 All in all, pretty good!
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I found it quite weak at first but then it caught my attention and I really enjoyed it....................................6..............................................
卷 1
- 1 Chapter 1: Punishment 1 months ago
- 2 Chapter 2: Childhood 1 months ago
- 3 Chapter 3: Quirk 1 months ago
- 4 Chapter 4: News 27 days ago
- 5 Chapter 5: New Page 23 days ago
- 6 Chapter 6: Problems 19 days ago
- 7 Chapter 7: Curious Friendship 16 days ago
- 8 Chapter 8: Visit 11 days ago
- 9 Chapter 9: Friends? 8 days ago
- 10 Chapter 10: Decide 7 days ago
- 11 Chapter 11: Momentum 6 days ago
- 12 Chapter 12: No Turning Back 6 days ago
- 13 Chapter 13: Study 5 days ago
- 14 Chapter 14: Entrance Exam 4 days ago
- 15 Chapter 15: Entrance Exam II 3 days ago
- 16 Chapter 16: Entrance Exam III 2 days ago
- 17 Chapter 17: Gift 1 days ago
- 18 Chapter 18: U.A. 8 hours ago
Hi! This is a new project I’m working on. I wondered: what if Toji Fushiguro were reborn in a world full of heroes and villains? I’m trying to develop this idea and see how far it can go. I hope you like it