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摘要
Waking up in the middle of space with no memories and a strange body will throw anybody for a loop, especially if you happen to be in the world of DBZ.
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It's my first ever story, and I don't have a solid plan on where to take it or how the characterization will go. It will be a slower story and is mostly just for my own practice, but if I start developing something I enjoy, I will plan things more extensively. Please leave any and all feedback!
Image credit: KevMD11 on Deviant Art
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寫檢討
I know this is late but I have to say the author is trying so hard to nerf his majin abilities and magic it’s not even funny he’s semi-fear of changing canon which doesn’t matter in the long run forgets cell or gero can steal dna/data if he goes to earth best place to go is yardrat to train his body and mind for more move skills. ……………just a review……………….
卷 1 : A New Life
- 1 Chapter 1: What’s my name? 1 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2: The Armored Man 1 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3: First Kill 1 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4: Hard Days Work 1 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5: Freak of Nature 1 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6: Memory 3 months ago
- 7 Chapter 7: A New Recruit 3 months ago
- 8 Chapter 8: A Brooding Durian 3 months ago
- 9 Chapter 9: Family Matters 3 months ago
Author Review: Hey, guys! I hope to get great feedback and grow as a writer during this story. Any comments, ideas, or criticisms are welcome!