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Very good, the idea behind it is good, and you knew how to develop it well, I think the atrocities he committed in his previous life should have more weight, but there is still time for that.
bro its been years since i read that chapter-after story (i dropped it cause i hate after stories, but thats fine since its technically finished), i barely remember anything after the teleportation incident. i dont wanna re-read, will it be fine to just read it.
Very good, the idea behind it is cool, and you knew how to develop the story so far in a very interesting way, you could show more how he feels about the countless heinous mistakes he made in his previous life, but it's good so far, keep going like this!
The prose could definitely be improved, you can tell it's written by an amateur, but the story itself is pretty decent.
Juggling by the new book cover. This would mean that Sylphy still has her iconic green hair in this Mushoku Tensei fanfiction story.
I just wanted to say that I love the new book cover for Mushoku Tensei: A Second Chance.
THIS IS MUSHOKU TENSEI WE DESERVE. Better than original. Agora review em portugues, a historia realmente é muito boa se voce leu até o volume 15 da novel original não vai ter nenhum problema em seguir a historia, ela amarra pontas soltas que até mesmo o autor deixou passar e se mantem solida 'pelo menos até onde eu estou'. Em especial o evento da hidra e a forma como o autor trabalhou foi algo que eu sempre esperei ver acontecendo, ele realmente faz um trabalho digno do titulo MELHOR QUE O ORIGINAL
Since its OldRudeus i will asume that its still a hârêm... As no sane man would not marry his future wife again and let them be alone or with someone else... So the hârêm is AT LEAST Roxy, Sylphy and Eris... But I would like spoilers... Does he includes anyone else?
Truly a great novel, i have always wanted to read something like this, te story from the perpective of Future Rudeus. I look forward to see how things will change from now on, specially family related issues since that was his main regret he should focus a lot on it this time. Can't wait to see little Lucy and the other kids.
Very good, you can allso see the writers progression throughout the progression of the story, allso a huge fan of anything related to rudeus.
Great spin off of Mushoku Tensei, I continue to enjoy the authors writing style and look forward to reading more about the fantasy world he creates
This is one of the better Mushoku Tensei Fanfictions. I definitely recommend reading it.
literaly the best mushoku tensei fan fic ever i never tough this can be so good in the begining was very slow but now is just so perfect kudos for the autor of this fan fic
I think this is an amazing fanfiction, and I will admit I was a bit hesitant at the beginning of the story, but it vastly improved as I got further through the story. Please continue writing this and don't abandon it like many others have with their fanfictions, and I can say that I honestly enjoy reading this.
Great fanfiction. This is one of the best fanfiction novels I've read in a long time amd certainly the best one of mushoku tensei that I've read. Highly recommended. I hope the chapters resume soon. Keep up the good work.
I enjoyed the writers take on this "what-if" within the Mushoku Tensei universe. Each decision the protagonist will have a cascading effect on how the story deviates from the original timeline. Despite a few questions on how certain things should have come to pass, such as why is Arial and her mage are still alive without "silent-fitz", and how will/or will Norn end up with Ruijerd if they never meet in her childhood. I think this Fan-Fiction is so far a wonderful addition to the Mushoku Tensei collection of stories. I look forward to reading further chapters.
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best mushoku tensei fanfic so far please don't stop posting there are no other fanfic that worth my time so keep going
GODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGOD
Muy buena historia lleva muy bien los capítulos la recomiendo Wsta padre ver la historia del que hubiera pasado si reinicia la historia algo que a muchos les gustaría en forma ideal muy buena historia
I like it, it's on the right track so far. Hopefully find a way to prolong your Rudius life. It is possible. I suppose. Well keep this good story. I love this quite powerful rudius. Known as world power: the magical god.
una gran obra , para decirlo en pocas palabras un joya que tiene que recibir más reconocimiento , es muy god y agradezco cada capiítulo
Very good, the idea behind it is good, and you knew how to develop it well, I think the atrocities he committed in his previous life should have more weight, but there is still time for that.
bro its been years since i read that chapter-after story (i dropped it cause i hate after stories, but thats fine since its technically finished), i barely remember anything after the teleportation incident. i dont wanna re-read, will it be fine to just read it.
Very good, the idea behind it is cool, and you knew how to develop the story so far in a very interesting way, you could show more how he feels about the countless heinous mistakes he made in his previous life, but it's good so far, keep going like this!
The prose could definitely be improved, you can tell it's written by an amateur, but the story itself is pretty decent.
Juggling by the new book cover. This would mean that Sylphy still has her iconic green hair in this Mushoku Tensei fanfiction story.
I just wanted to say that I love the new book cover for Mushoku Tensei: A Second Chance.
THIS IS MUSHOKU TENSEI WE DESERVE. Better than original. Agora review em portugues, a historia realmente é muito boa se voce leu até o volume 15 da novel original não vai ter nenhum problema em seguir a historia, ela amarra pontas soltas que até mesmo o autor deixou passar e se mantem solida 'pelo menos até onde eu estou'. Em especial o evento da hidra e a forma como o autor trabalhou foi algo que eu sempre esperei ver acontecendo, ele realmente faz um trabalho digno do titulo MELHOR QUE O ORIGINAL
Since its OldRudeus i will asume that its still a hârêm... As no sane man would not marry his future wife again and let them be alone or with someone else... So the hârêm is AT LEAST Roxy, Sylphy and Eris... But I would like spoilers... Does he includes anyone else?
Truly a great novel, i have always wanted to read something like this, te story from the perpective of Future Rudeus. I look forward to see how things will change from now on, specially family related issues since that was his main regret he should focus a lot on it this time. Can't wait to see little Lucy and the other kids.
Very good, you can allso see the writers progression throughout the progression of the story, allso a huge fan of anything related to rudeus.
Great spin off of Mushoku Tensei, I continue to enjoy the authors writing style and look forward to reading more about the fantasy world he creates
This is one of the better Mushoku Tensei Fanfictions. I definitely recommend reading it.
literaly the best mushoku tensei fan fic ever i never tough this can be so good in the begining was very slow but now is just so perfect kudos for the autor of this fan fic
I think this is an amazing fanfiction, and I will admit I was a bit hesitant at the beginning of the story, but it vastly improved as I got further through the story. Please continue writing this and don't abandon it like many others have with their fanfictions, and I can say that I honestly enjoy reading this.
Great fanfiction. This is one of the best fanfiction novels I've read in a long time amd certainly the best one of mushoku tensei that I've read. Highly recommended. I hope the chapters resume soon. Keep up the good work.
I enjoyed the writers take on this "what-if" within the Mushoku Tensei universe. Each decision the protagonist will have a cascading effect on how the story deviates from the original timeline. Despite a few questions on how certain things should have come to pass, such as why is Arial and her mage are still alive without "silent-fitz", and how will/or will Norn end up with Ruijerd if they never meet in her childhood. I think this Fan-Fiction is so far a wonderful addition to the Mushoku Tensei collection of stories. I look forward to reading further chapters.
揭示劇透 best mushoku tensei fanfic so far please don't stop posting there are no other fanfic that worth my time so keep going
GODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGOD
Muy buena historia lleva muy bien los capítulos la recomiendo Wsta padre ver la historia del que hubiera pasado si reinicia la historia algo que a muchos les gustaría en forma ideal muy buena historia
I like it, it's on the right track so far. Hopefully find a way to prolong your Rudius life. It is possible. I suppose. Well keep this good story. I love this quite powerful rudius. Known as world power: the magical god.
una gran obra , para decirlo en pocas palabras un joya que tiene que recibir más reconocimiento , es muy god y agradezco cada capiítulo
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