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Se le olvidan a muchos personas de los cuales ya había hecho mención o pequeños detalles, pero en General está bien. Me faltó un poco más de desarrollo de Eris, Roxi, Elinalise tengo dudas de cómo llegará Nanahoshi, Cliff y la interacción con Pursena y la chica Gato (se me olvidó el nombre)
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It's a good story and I was curious what would have happened if Rudius had correctly traveled back in time and corrected his mistakes that led to his tragic future.
Muy bueno, triste lo de Sara pero obviamente es otra realidad, se agradece que vaya tan bien y siga publicando, de lo mejor q e leído en cuanto a fanfic
Lo vuelvo a repetir este es de los mejores fanfic q e leído y lo mejor el autor aun trabaja en ello, la historia está muy buena el enfrentamiento con kalman III esta epico
Genial, de todos los fanfic q e leído hasta ahora este es lejos el más interesante y lo mejor es que el autor lo sigue publicando, lejos de los mejores lo recomiendo a todos no se arrepentirán de leerlo
It's pretty rare to see a fanfic centered around Oldeus, but it's always nice to see. The story is pretty good; the only major issue with the story, in my opinion, is Rudy's character. In the Oldeus timeline, Rudeus suffers horrific trauma after horrific trauma and becomes a depressed, homicidal, womanizing alcoholic (albeit a very powerful alcoholic) that's hellbent on revenge and becoming stronger. So, you'd expect after he time travels these things would deeply affect him, but said events feel to have little impact on his character. That being said, the story isn't finished, and the author may very well be planning to address this concern. On a more positive note, in almost everything else I can think of, the author does very well, especially in his writing of Paul and Rudy's interactions. Sometimes it honestly feels like how Rifujin would write the two.
This story is great, I really didn't have faith in it at first, but after the third chapter you get hooked. Well I don't know what else to put XD
The story is very interesting and very well written, I didn't notice any writing errors or anything like that. My only problem with it is that Rudeus is very cautious about showing his powers, he is already one of the 7 strongest in the world but he is entering the academy as a normal student, and in addition doing everything in the most discreet way possible. For me, Mc being so discreet made me drop the story
this book is the "goat" Hope it continues for thousands of chapters 👍 if possible
When i read mt i thought what if rudeus went back to past and survived . it took that idea and turned it into an quite a fascinating fic. although it lacks in emotions and suspense it is really enjoyable. you would always wait for next chapters once read. it also disappoints in updating stability but we need to understand that this writers are not paid for this work so the delay is acceptable.Hope it continues and fans keep supporting it. Best wishes
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W. Literally what I had in mind for my novel. Wanted to write a a story where future rudues was transmigrated to the past upon his death. Read a couple chapters, Very well detailed, superb writing style, amaxing plot progression overall. I look forward to what you do in the future!
It's a rare Mushoku Tensei fanfiction, with an even rarer setting of featuring Future Rudues, and of course the quality of writing is good. It's worth a read!
Cela avance trop vite mais ce n’est pas réellement déplaisant. Comme déjà dit ce n’est pas révolutionnaire, mais c’est très plaisant à lire……………………………………………………
Seeing how I have fully read the web novel it is actually pretty relevant to what I think Rudeus would've done! Amazing work on this! I can't wait for the future arcs to be redone as well.
Although it’s nothing particularly groundbreaking, this is a pretty solid read that I would recommend to any fans of Mushoku Tensei (especially LN readers)
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una gran obra , para decirlo en pocas palabras un joya que tiene que recibir más reconocimiento , es muy god y agradezco cada capiítulo
Se le olvidan a muchos personas de los cuales ya había hecho mención o pequeños detalles, pero en General está bien. Me faltó un poco más de desarrollo de Eris, Roxi, Elinalise tengo dudas de cómo llegará Nanahoshi, Cliff y la interacción con Pursena y la chica Gato (se me olvidó el nombre)
揭示劇透 It's a good story and I was curious what would have happened if Rudius had correctly traveled back in time and corrected his mistakes that led to his tragic future.
Muy bueno, triste lo de Sara pero obviamente es otra realidad, se agradece que vaya tan bien y siga publicando, de lo mejor q e leído en cuanto a fanfic
Lo vuelvo a repetir este es de los mejores fanfic q e leído y lo mejor el autor aun trabaja en ello, la historia está muy buena el enfrentamiento con kalman III esta epico
Genial, de todos los fanfic q e leído hasta ahora este es lejos el más interesante y lo mejor es que el autor lo sigue publicando, lejos de los mejores lo recomiendo a todos no se arrepentirán de leerlo
It's pretty rare to see a fanfic centered around Oldeus, but it's always nice to see. The story is pretty good; the only major issue with the story, in my opinion, is Rudy's character. In the Oldeus timeline, Rudeus suffers horrific trauma after horrific trauma and becomes a depressed, homicidal, womanizing alcoholic (albeit a very powerful alcoholic) that's hellbent on revenge and becoming stronger. So, you'd expect after he time travels these things would deeply affect him, but said events feel to have little impact on his character. That being said, the story isn't finished, and the author may very well be planning to address this concern. On a more positive note, in almost everything else I can think of, the author does very well, especially in his writing of Paul and Rudy's interactions. Sometimes it honestly feels like how Rifujin would write the two.
This story is great, I really didn't have faith in it at first, but after the third chapter you get hooked. Well I don't know what else to put XD
The story is very interesting and very well written, I didn't notice any writing errors or anything like that. My only problem with it is that Rudeus is very cautious about showing his powers, he is already one of the 7 strongest in the world but he is entering the academy as a normal student, and in addition doing everything in the most discreet way possible. For me, Mc being so discreet made me drop the story
this book is the "goat" Hope it continues for thousands of chapters 👍 if possible
When i read mt i thought what if rudeus went back to past and survived . it took that idea and turned it into an quite a fascinating fic. although it lacks in emotions and suspense it is really enjoyable. you would always wait for next chapters once read. it also disappoints in updating stability but we need to understand that this writers are not paid for this work so the delay is acceptable.Hope it continues and fans keep supporting it. Best wishes
Good.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
W. Literally what I had in mind for my novel. Wanted to write a a story where future rudues was transmigrated to the past upon his death. Read a couple chapters, Very well detailed, superb writing style, amaxing plot progression overall. I look forward to what you do in the future!
It's a rare Mushoku Tensei fanfiction, with an even rarer setting of featuring Future Rudues, and of course the quality of writing is good. It's worth a read!
Cela avance trop vite mais ce n’est pas réellement déplaisant. Comme déjà dit ce n’est pas révolutionnaire, mais c’est très plaisant à lire……………………………………………………
Seeing how I have fully read the web novel it is actually pretty relevant to what I think Rudeus would've done! Amazing work on this! I can't wait for the future arcs to be redone as well.
Although it’s nothing particularly groundbreaking, this is a pretty solid read that I would recommend to any fans of Mushoku Tensei (especially LN readers)
VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!VERY GOOD!!!
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una gran obra , para decirlo en pocas palabras un joya que tiene que recibir más reconocimiento , es muy god y agradezco cada capiítulo