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Most of the reviews here are true and not exaggerated. I would categorize this as a slice of life novel where the mc transmigrates to a parallel Earth and gets a check-in system. He will sometimes get money, buildings, or even schematics of technology not known in this alternative earth. It's really just about a guy eating, drinking, visiting tourist places, enjoying life in general. There will be a mix of him starting businesses and consolidating businesses and meeting new people within those businesses. There's not much growth or progression and not much excitement. It's definitely a wish-fulfillment novel, very little arrogant people and face slaps, and you do keep waiting for something exciting to happen but it never does. It's okay to pass the time.
there is no substance to the story. actually, there is no story at all. things just happen
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umm he isn't a magnate when he starts check-in system. the system check-in is meant to be tied to the convenience store, yet can check-in at other places now. also has gotten racing God ability(wtf is that even. I know a manga where that was relevant but to get that as a reward for a convenience store owner is weird AF)
Just a travelling novel disguised as Urban, System nov3l. No plot development, inconsistent characters personality, occasional nonsense nationalism for no reason, most of all, even its travelling plot is no different than a review copy pasted from handout pamphlets.
You would think that a story about a guy becoming super successful and being able to live how he wants would be fun. But EVERY character in this story seems bland and uninteresting. like if milk was given human form. With this kind of novel, character interactions are VERY important as they are the basis of the novel. And while I love that there is no face slapping as of chapter 55, there is also no real character interactions. Even when the MC meets a girl he likes, it just says they have a conversation and laugh. This could be the girl he marries, and it doesn't say what they talk about. what interests they share. no, just that they talked. Then they make sure that this love interest can't actually interact with the MC too much cause she has a job in a whole other city, then the MC. The longer the novel gets, the more boring it gets.
It is a good novel but it's completely plain and the mc is like a goody goody guy like having a girl only if there is feelings and wasting money without knowing it's worth so it's not for me but there is some wholesome element if any is interested in this type of sissy mc then it's for u
As of now, I'm on ch 24. I can understand why others have given this novel a low rating, as the Mc is just collecting resources without any further plot or reason. However, that's the reason I like it so much. It always annoys me with these system novels when the MC gets a system and all of a sudden there's an alien civilization or some cultivation plot. It's fine, but I've been looking for a more simple slice of life type of sign-in novel, and this is perfect. It's not ridiculously cliché, and even the female characters are written well and aren't just typical 1D dolls that fall all over the MC. As a female reader, that's one of the things I'm pickiest about. Overall, I really enjoy this novel!
If you are looking for a cookie cutter shenhao novel filled with face slapping, action, and a harem. Than this is not what you are looking for, at least for the first 58 chapters I've read so far. Currently it has been about how the mc has been using his check in rewards to live his life in leisure and luxury while traveling around China. If you're looking for a change of pace from all the copy paste shenhao novels on here then by all means take a look at this novel. [img=recommend]
I was interested in the title of this novel but the reality of it was this fell flat in my eyes. The story basically has NO relationship to the convenience store bar him walking into the place. It is revealed the store is inherited by the MC for his deceased parents and was being run by his 3rd Aunt and that’s it. MC gets a check in system and from there is no substance. I read the free 39 or 40 chapters hoping for something of interest but there was nothing. MC checks in gets money and some goods. Usually it’s a car but seriously how many cars can one have? So that is the story in a nutshell. Simple wish fulfilment that gives the reader nothing back. Overall this novel is not worth the time. Sure, read the free chapters, but do not spend anything on this as the novel is not worth investing in. Tl;dr: hard pass.
Male lead does nothing but sign in. the woman he met on th plane was also a gold digger.Did not want to talk to him and ignored him until she saw him in a car.
like this novel because i have become tired of all the face slapping in similar Novel
Need more of this book please. Very interesting. Want to follow more and see how story developes. Also, what else does he get signing in. The flow of the story is really good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's a great start to the novel, yes, it's just signing in and getting freebies and yes it seems to be a similar trope to all the other bs sign-in novel BUT, this is fun to read, as I'm tired of reading so many similar novelsss. I appreciate the author reducing the face slapping and making the novel quality. Keep going author and ignore the haters, I came because I was bored but your writing style tells me I'll enjoy other novels written by you
It is a really interesting story so far Iblove the the content. please add more chapters
Pretty solid usually this genre puts me to sleep that was not the case here.
I like these types of stories, I love system stories this one is different than the usual system story.
generic shenhao system, mc doesn't do anything noteworthy, no harem, no arrogant young second generation masters, it is different than other shenhao novels but at the same time the story doesn't seem to progress, very boring tbh.
Someone tried to defile his sister, and record while doing it. And MC just slapped one out of three perpetrators, and that's it, nothing else. That's how pathetic MC is.
Most of the reviews here are true and not exaggerated. I would categorize this as a slice of life novel where the mc transmigrates to a parallel Earth and gets a check-in system. He will sometimes get money, buildings, or even schematics of technology not known in this alternative earth. It's really just about a guy eating, drinking, visiting tourist places, enjoying life in general. There will be a mix of him starting businesses and consolidating businesses and meeting new people within those businesses. There's not much growth or progression and not much excitement. It's definitely a wish-fulfillment novel, very little arrogant people and face slaps, and you do keep waiting for something exciting to happen but it never does. It's okay to pass the time.
there is no substance to the story. actually, there is no story at all. things just happen
Experience the awe-inspiring tale penned by an exceptional author. Are you seeking a captivating trailer video that befits your remarkable book? Connect with me on FB at "TRANMAXX PRO" for more info
umm he isn't a magnate when he starts check-in system. the system check-in is meant to be tied to the convenience store, yet can check-in at other places now. also has gotten racing God ability(wtf is that even. I know a manga where that was relevant but to get that as a reward for a convenience store owner is weird AF)
Just a travelling novel disguised as Urban, System nov3l. No plot development, inconsistent characters personality, occasional nonsense nationalism for no reason, most of all, even its travelling plot is no different than a review copy pasted from handout pamphlets.
You would think that a story about a guy becoming super successful and being able to live how he wants would be fun. But EVERY character in this story seems bland and uninteresting. like if milk was given human form. With this kind of novel, character interactions are VERY important as they are the basis of the novel. And while I love that there is no face slapping as of chapter 55, there is also no real character interactions. Even when the MC meets a girl he likes, it just says they have a conversation and laugh. This could be the girl he marries, and it doesn't say what they talk about. what interests they share. no, just that they talked. Then they make sure that this love interest can't actually interact with the MC too much cause she has a job in a whole other city, then the MC. The longer the novel gets, the more boring it gets.
It is a good novel but it's completely plain and the mc is like a goody goody guy like having a girl only if there is feelings and wasting money without knowing it's worth so it's not for me but there is some wholesome element if any is interested in this type of sissy mc then it's for u
As of now, I'm on ch 24. I can understand why others have given this novel a low rating, as the Mc is just collecting resources without any further plot or reason. However, that's the reason I like it so much. It always annoys me with these system novels when the MC gets a system and all of a sudden there's an alien civilization or some cultivation plot. It's fine, but I've been looking for a more simple slice of life type of sign-in novel, and this is perfect. It's not ridiculously cliché, and even the female characters are written well and aren't just typical 1D dolls that fall all over the MC. As a female reader, that's one of the things I'm pickiest about. Overall, I really enjoy this novel!
If you are looking for a cookie cutter shenhao novel filled with face slapping, action, and a harem. Than this is not what you are looking for, at least for the first 58 chapters I've read so far. Currently it has been about how the mc has been using his check in rewards to live his life in leisure and luxury while traveling around China. If you're looking for a change of pace from all the copy paste shenhao novels on here then by all means take a look at this novel. [img=recommend]
I was interested in the title of this novel but the reality of it was this fell flat in my eyes. The story basically has NO relationship to the convenience store bar him walking into the place. It is revealed the store is inherited by the MC for his deceased parents and was being run by his 3rd Aunt and that’s it. MC gets a check in system and from there is no substance. I read the free 39 or 40 chapters hoping for something of interest but there was nothing. MC checks in gets money and some goods. Usually it’s a car but seriously how many cars can one have? So that is the story in a nutshell. Simple wish fulfilment that gives the reader nothing back. Overall this novel is not worth the time. Sure, read the free chapters, but do not spend anything on this as the novel is not worth investing in. Tl;dr: hard pass.
Male lead does nothing but sign in. the woman he met on th plane was also a gold digger.Did not want to talk to him and ignored him until she saw him in a car.
like this novel because i have become tired of all the face slapping in similar Novel
Need more of this book please. Very interesting. Want to follow more and see how story developes. Also, what else does he get signing in. The flow of the story is really good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's a great start to the novel, yes, it's just signing in and getting freebies and yes it seems to be a similar trope to all the other bs sign-in novel BUT, this is fun to read, as I'm tired of reading so many similar novelsss. I appreciate the author reducing the face slapping and making the novel quality. Keep going author and ignore the haters, I came because I was bored but your writing style tells me I'll enjoy other novels written by you
It is a really interesting story so far Iblove the the content. please add more chapters
Pretty solid usually this genre puts me to sleep that was not the case here.
I like these types of stories, I love system stories this one is different than the usual system story.
generic shenhao system, mc doesn't do anything noteworthy, no harem, no arrogant young second generation masters, it is different than other shenhao novels but at the same time the story doesn't seem to progress, very boring tbh.
Someone tried to defile his sister, and record while doing it. And MC just slapped one out of three perpetrators, and that's it, nothing else. That's how pathetic MC is.