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章節 515: Ramen Ichiraku

Earth Land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, the Village Hidden in the Leaves.

 

January, x787.

 

After leaving the Hokage Tower, Alfonzo once again began levitating the Escalade. Meanwhile, he, Elicia, Ikaruga, and Irene engaged Kakashi in conversation while they walked through the village.

 

"So, how long have you been active as a shinobi?" Elicia asked curiously.

 

On a side note, Kakashi, as soon as he left the Hokage Tower, pulled a small book with an orange cover from his ninja backpack, a small pouch worn on his lower back that usually holds throwable weapons such as kunai and shuriken. In Kakashi's case, however, he added another pouch specifically for the book he was reading.

 

"Hmm… For about nineteen years, I think." Kakashi replied in a lazy tone.

 

"And just how old are you?" Irene asked curiously. "From the little bit of your face I can see, I would guess you are in your early to mid-twenties. So, nineteen years would mean you started taking missions as a shinobi before you were even ten years old."

 

"That sounds about right." Kakashi replied in the same tone. "I graduated from the ninja academy pretty early due to my talent and the fact that there was a war going on at the time."

 

"If I had to guess, that was the Third Great Ninja War, right?" Alfonzo asked. "I heard a little bit about that from Anko and Guy."

 

To that, Kakashi finally looked up from his book.

 

"So, you've met Guy, huh?" Kakashi asked curiously. "I hope he wasn't too hard for you to get along with. He's quite…"

 

"Youthful." Alfonzo and Elicia replied simultaneously.

 

"Yeah, that's one way to put it." Kakashi replied. Though, the smile in his visible eye made it clear that he was fonder of the Green Beast of the Hidden Leaf than his tone let on.

 

"Yeah, He was on my team when the Magic Council ordered us to find those two rogue scientists." Alfonzo replied.

 

"Oh, that's right." Kakashi replied with a nod. "I forgot about that. I haven't talked to him since he got back from his time with Quatro Cerberus. So, I haven't heard the details."

 

"Does that mean that all Shinobi spend some time with the Legal Guilds of Fiore?" Elicia asked curiously.

 

"Not all." Kakashi replied while shaking his head as he returned to reading his book. "I never spent any time in a guild."

 

"I see." Irene replied. "What did you do instead?"

 

"I can't go into detail, but I worked as a part of a certain division in the village."

 

'He's definitely talking about the Anbu.' Alfonzo and Elicia thought to themselves. 'Probably to keep his mind free of the thoughts of his teacher, best friend, and other team mates' deaths.'

 

Like that, the group of five continued to chat while they walked through the village. All the while, the Fairy Tail wizards, Alfonzo, Elicia, and Irene, made sure not to ask any questions that would dig too deeply into the villages secrets.

 

Ikaruga, on the other hand, simply followed the group at a respectful distance without saying a word.

 

Eventually, the group walked through what seemed to be one of the busier districts in the village. AS they did, they happened to see the blond-haired, blue-eyed boy from before. And when they did, they noticed he was walking into a shop.

 

"Ramen Ichiraku." Elicia said while looking up at the sign on the shop the blond boy just entered.

 

Elicia's words drew the rest of the group's attention to the store she was looking at.

 

"Hey, Fonzie, can we stop here?" Elicia asked as she grabbed Alfonzo's arm with a smile on er face. "After smelling the scent coming from this shop, I'm feeling a little hungry."

 

Instead of answering Elicia's question directly, Alfonzo glanced at Kakashi, who shrugged his shoulders care-freely. Then, Alfonzo smiled at Elicia as he replied.

 

"Sure." Alfonzo replied with a smile. Then, he turned to the rest of his companions. "What do you think, Irene, Ikaruga?"

 

"I don't mind." Ikaruga replied politely.

 

"What kind of food do they serve?" Irene asked curiously.

 

"Judging by the name, I would guess it's ramen." Alfonzo replied. "A type of noodle soup with toppings."

 

"I see." Irene said while bringing her hand to her chin. "I guess I don't mind trying it. I doubt it will be better than your cooking, though."

 

Hearing that, Kakashi looked at Irene skeptically. However, he kept his thoughts to himself.

 

"We'll just have to see about that." Alfonzo replied with a smile. "There's always someone better, after all."

 

Shrugging her shoulders, Irene took the lead as the group walked into the ramen shop. As they did, they saw the same blond boy waiting for his order. And as they noticed the kid, Kakashi seemed to flinch for a moment. Though, no one other than Alfonzo and Elicia noticed, as they were paying attention to his reaction.

 

'*Sigh* So, he's being neglected just like in the canon, huh?' Elicia asked herself as she watched Kakashi's reaction to seeing the blond boy. 'I wonder if Fonzie would be against us taking care of him for a while, while we're here. At least until he graduates and joins a team of Genin.'

 

"Welcome to Ramen Ichiraku." A middle-aged man with nearly closed eyes and wearing a white bandana said in greeting after noticing the new arrivals. He then continued when he noticed Kakashi. "Oh, Kakashi, it's been a while since you've come to visit. Howe have you been?"

 

"I've been well, Teuchi." Kakashi said as he put away his book.

 

"And it looks like you've brought some new faces." The middle-aged man, Teuchi said as he scanned the faces of the four people Kakashi brought with him.

 

However, when Teuchi made eye contact with Alfonzo, he froze. Alfonzo froze as well while maintaining eye contact. After a few moments, Teuchi snapped back to his senses. Then, he took a deep breath and his entire aura changed.

 

"It looks like I have a chef of quite the amazing caliber gracing my shop." Teuchi said as he tightened his bandana. "I'd better get serious so as to not embarrass myself. May I take your orders?"

 

Like Teuchi, Alfonzo could also feel Teuchi's culinary level. Because of that, he was looking forward to trying the ramen even more than before.

 

"Spicy Tonkotsu Ramen with two boiled eggs and Char siu." Alfonzo said confidently.

 

"I'll have Miso Ramen with pork." Elicia added.

 

When Elicia gave her order, the blond boy looked at her as if she had good taste.

 

Meanwhile, Ikaruga, Iren, and Kakashi also gave their orders. Then, they waited for their orders to arrive while chatting casually.

 

Eventually, the blond boy's order was the first to arrive. And when it did, he began eating as if he hadn't eaten for days. While Elicia, Irene, and Ikaruga looked on in curiosity, Kakashi continued to chat with Alfonzo while occasionally stealing glances at the boy.

 

A few minutes later, Naruto finished his bowl of ramen. And when he did, he stared into the bottom of the bowl as if he had lost his greatest treasure. At the same time, Elicia's motherly instincts kicked in. So, she glanced at Alfonzo with puppy dog eyes.

 

Luckily, Alfonzo did not have to even think about resisting the puppy dog eyes Elicia shot in his direction, as he was also thinking of helping the boy, as well.

 

"Hey, Kid." Alfonzo said in a casual tone. "You look like you haven't had enough."

 

*Growl!*

 

Instead of responding directly, the boy's stomach took care of that for him, causing him to cover his stomach with his hands while wearing an embarrassed expression.

 

"Hey, Mr. Teuchi, mind whipping up another serving for the kid?" Alfonzo asked without giving him a chance to reject. "It'll be on me."

 

Seeing that someone was showing kindness to the boy, Teuchi smiled while he worked.

 

"Sure thing." Teuchi replied.

 

Meanwhile, Kakashi looked at Alfonzo skeptically. In the village, the young man Alfonzo was being kind to was basically ignored. And in some cases, bullied. Helping him like that might bring Alfonzo some trouble.

 

"I don't know if that's such a good idea." Kakashi said.

 

"What are you talking about?" Alfonzo asked, seemingly not understanding what Kakashi was talking about.

 

In response, Kakashi explained the kid's situation and how it might bring Alfonzo trouble.

 

"And?" Alfonzo asked while looking at Kakashi as if he were an idiot. "I don't know why the kid is mistreated. And to be honest, I don't give a damn. But I do know that the only reason he plays all those pranks is because he needs attention. And I'll be damned if I'll let a child suffer just because I'm afraid of what people think of me."

 

Not only Kakashi, but even the blond boy was shocked by Alfonzo's declaration. Even Teuchi, who was still cooking, threw a thumbs up in Alfonzo's direction.

 

"*Sigh* I know you're right." Kakashi said while his impression of Alfonzo improved as he did so. "But this could cause you some issues. People who are either afraid or have bad intensions for Naruto might try to make things harder for you."

 

"Hmph! I wish a nig--- *Cough* I mean I'd like to see them try." Alfonzo said, correcting himself along the way after receiving a glare from Elicia. "And if they do, I'll show them why it's a bad idea to mess with an S-Class wizard from Fairy Tail."

 

'*Sigh* If I wasn't a member of the shinobi forces of the village, I would be so bold, too.' Kakashi said to himself with some melancholy. 'Still, at least Naruto will have someone who will show him some kindness for his last year at the academy. Sensei, I'm sorry I couldn't do more for your son.'

 

"Hey, Kid." Alfonzo said, not paying attention to Kakashi, who was internally monologuing. "Kakashi here said your name was Naruto."

 

"That's right, I'm Naruto Uzumaki." The blond boy, Naruto said. "I'm gonna be Hokage someday, you know! Then, everyone in this village will have to respect me. And they won't bully me or ignore me anymore."

 

"Damn if you don't aim high." Alfonzo said with a bright smile on his face. "But I like it. So, I tell you what, any time you find yourself hungry and don't have enough money, you can come to me. I promise, with me around, you'll never find yourself hungry again."

 

Hearing that, Naruto's eyes and mouth opened wide in surprise. A moment later, he lowered his head to hide the tears that were forming in his eyes. Then, he replied in a small, shaky voice.

 

"Thank you…"

 

In the next instant, Naruto found himself wrapped in a warm embrace, something he had never experienced before. And when he looked up, he made eye contact with a smiling Elicia.

 

"And since you're aiming to be the Hokage, we'll take care of training you, too." Elicia said. "Although we're not shinobi, I bet we can at the very least make you physically stronger. WE could probably help you with your chakra control, too. OH, and I'll make some new clothes for you, too. A bright orange track suit isn't exactly what I'd call stealthy, you know."

 

"Huh? But orange is my favorite color." Naruto said in a whiny tone.

 

"Oh, we can tell." Irene said while rolling her eyes. "You should just trust er, though. Her fashion sense is off the charts. I'm sure you'll have all the little ninja girls fighting over your attention when she's done with you."

 

"Really, does that mean Sakura will like me, too?" Naruto asked excitedly.

 

"I'm not sure who this Sakura girl is, but there's a chance." Elicia said awkwardly, even though she knew there was no chance of that happening.

 

"Orders up!" Teuchi said as he began placing the different orders in front of his customers.

 

"We can talk about that later." Alfonzo said with a smile. "For now, let's eat."

 

With that, everyone, other than Naruto, used their chop sticks to dig into their ramen. And while Kakashi did not react much, Elicia, Ikaruga, and Irene wore thoroughly flabbergasted expressions.

 

'It's just as good as Fonzie/Alfonzo/ Master Alfonzo's cooking.' Elicia, Irene, and Ikaruga thought simultaneously.

 

'If this [Soul Armament] Experiment doesn't work, then I'll kidnap this Teuchi, as well.' Irene thought to herself with a dangerous glint in her eyes.

 

Meanwhile, Alfonzo was wearing a solemn expression while he ate. Then, when he eventually swallowed his first bite, he nodded at Teuchi.

 

"Teuchi, you really are amazing." Alfonzo said in a sincere tone. "If I could hire you, I would do so in a heartbeat. But my instincts are telling me that you'd never leave this place."

 

"*Sigh* And your instincts would be right." Teuchi replied in a proud tone. "This shop is my life's work. And I would never be willing to give it up. Still, I'm curious to know… just where would you like to hire me to?"

 

Instead of replying verbally, Alfonzo reached into his pocket and pulled out a business card before handing it to Teuchi. And when Teuchi saw what it said, his perpetually closed eyes opened wide. Then he looked at Alfonzo in surprise.

 

"Anyway, I would love the opportunity to talk shop with you in the future, Teuchi." Alfonzo said with a smile. "We might be able to push each other to new heights."

 

"Yes, I think I'd like to take you up on that offer." Teuchi replied as he stored away the business card.

 

With that, the conversation came to an end. Then, Alfonzo and the others continued to eat. Naruto eventually received his second bowl of ramen, as well. Then, after everyone was done eating, the group, including Naruto, left the shop and started travelling towards the Fairy Tail wizards' lodgings.


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章節 516: Team Guy

Earth land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, the Village Hidden in the Leaves.

 

January, x787.

 

After their trip to Ramen Ichiraku, Kakashi led Alfonzo, Elicia, Ikaruga, and Irene through the village to their residence for their stay in the Hidden Leaf Village. And that residence turned out to be a luxurious two-story Japanese Style mansion in the heart of the village.

 

On top of that, Naruto followed the group, as well. They even stopped at a few shops to buy ingredients for dinner.

 

When the group eventually arrived at the mansion, Alfonzo lowered the Escalade to the ground just outside the mansion's front door. And when Elicia released her [Hiding in Plain Sight] spell, both Kakashi and Naruto widened their eyes.

 

After that, the group of six entered the house. While Kakashi continued to chat with Elicia and Irene, Alfonzo explored the mansion and quickly found the kitchen. And although he was not intending on cooking immediately, familiarizing himself with the kitchen was quite necessary for when he decided to cook.

 

Ikaruga, on the other hand, took it upon herself to take the luggage from the Escalade and moved it to the rooms she thought Alfonzo, Elicia, and Irene would like the most. Meanwhile, Naruto, who was still overwhelmed by the kindness he had received, helped Ikaruga, despite her telling him that it was not necessary.

 

Eventually, Kakashi left the mansion, stating that he had something to take care of. However, thanks to the group deploying [Magic Power Detection], they all knew that he headed back to the Hokage Tower. And they were all sure that he was reporting on everything he saw and heard while leading the group to their accommodations.

 

Despite the report Kakashi was giving to the Hokage, no one paid it any mind. As outsiders, they were expecting as much, after all. Instead, the group decided to make themselves at home, seeing as they would be spending a few months in the village.

 

Then, over the next few hours, the group did what they enjoyed to relax. For example, Alfonzo spent his time creating a magic item. Something he thought would come in handy when the next time he or the ladies had to deal with Danzo. At the same time, Iren was reading a book about magic. Meanwhile, Elicia took Naruto's measurements before starting to create some clothes for him. And once Elicia finished taking measurements, Ikaruga took Naruto outside to start training his body.

 

Eventually, Kakashi, who had been invited to have dinner with the wizards from Fairy Tail, returned. And to his surprise, when he entered the living room, Naruto was lying on the floor, completely exhausted. Despite his state, he was smiling happily while chatting with Alfonzo.

 

"Oh, you're back, Kakashi." Alfonzo said when Kakashi entered the room with Ikaruga. "I actually expected you a bit later. I haven't even started cooking yet."

 

*Growl~~~~!*

 

Before Kakashi could reply, the sound of a stomach growling echoed through the room. And when they looked for the source of the sound, they saw Naruto blushing in embarrassment while holding his stomach.

 

"Well, I guess Ikaruga's work out left you hungry, huh?" Alfonzo asked with a chuckle. "In that case, I'll get dinner started. It'll be pretty simple, though."

 

"As long as I can eat, I don't care what it is." Naruto said in a tired tone.

 

"I'm okay with anything, as well." Kakashi added.

 

Nodding in reply, Alfonzo wasted no time heading to the kitchen. And when Alfonzo was done cooking, everyone in the house gathered to have dinner together. Then,once the meal was finished, Naruto left to return home. He had school the next day, after all. Kakashi, on the other hand, waited at the mansion for the group who would take the magic items from Alfonzo's trunk.

 

Once all the magic items were taken, Kakashi also left with a promise that he would bring Alfonzo back to the Hokage Tower to discuss the upgrades to the training grounds with Hiruzen.

 

After sending Kakashi off, Alfonzo returned to the mansion's living room. Then, before he could even sit down, Irene spoke to him.

 

"One of your magic items has been separated from the others." Irene said without even looking up from the book she was reading.

 

"I know." Alfonzo replied nonchalantly. "I just hope they don't try to take it apart. That's gonna piss off a lot of people."

 

"Just what kind of boobie trap did you set, Fonzie?" Elicia asked in a curious tone.

 

"A city-wide sound grenade that only I can disarm." Alfonzo replied with a shrug.

 

While Elicia grimaced at the trap, Ikaruga and Irene looked at Alfonzo with confusion in their gazes. Naturally, Alfonzo did not miss the confused gazes. So, he smiled as he tried to explain what a sound grenade was.

 

April, x787

 

A little more than three months have passed since Alfonzo, Elicia, Ikaruga, and Irene entered the Village Hidden in the Leaves. And to Alfonzo's surprise, the sound grenade hidden in the signal receiver that was stolen has yet to be set off.

 

'I guess he's weary of traps, huh?' Alfonzo muttered internally while putting the finishing touches on the last of the indoor training chambers. 'Well, I guess that's a good thing. I'm not looking forward to that sound explosion, either.'

 

In fact, the day after the magic item was stolen, Alfonzo was expecting to be called to fix the issue. However, nothing like that has happened. Instead, he was taken to discuss the training upgrades with Hiruzen. Then, once everything was settle, Kakashi took him to his first work site.

 

Since then, Alfonzo's day has fallen into a pattern. First, he would start working on the training facilities shortly after breakfast. And during that time, Kakashi would accompany and chat with him about all sorts of things.

 

Then, when lunch time came around, Alfonzo and Kakashi would have lunch at various places around the village. And as it turned out, there was only one other place in the village that could compare to Ramen Ichiraku. And the name was Yakiniku Q.

 

Yakiniku Q was a Yakiniku style restaurant with wide windows, green-seated booths, and round tables that allowed guests to sit on the floor to eat. Each eating area also had menus plastered to the walls. Each table also had its own charcoal brazier so that the guests could cook their meat to their liking.

 

As a matter of fact, if Alfonzo were unable to cook his own meat, he would more than likely rate Yakiniku Q lower than Ramen Ichiraku. However, they did, in his opinion, a damn good job of seasoning their cuts of beef.

 

"I'm surprised how fast you work, Alfonzo." Kakashi said as he stood from a chair Alfonzo created for him when the day's work started. "I mean, you've only been working half a day for three months, and you're already done with the indoor portion of the job."

 

"*Sigh* That's thanks to a combination of things." Alfonzo replied. "First, this is the fifth job I've done like this in the last two years. Second, there aren't as many restrictions when it comes to space, and third, I'm making all the materials with my own magic power."

 

Like Alfonzo said, this time around, he did not bring any materials with him. And the reason for that was simple. The amount of material he would need to build in so many places was too much to put in a trailer and drag it across the kingdom.

 

As for the restrictions on space, Alfonzo could build as high as he wanted. Well, as high as the stakes he dug into the ground would allow. Unfortunately, he was forbidden from digging too deep, and he knew why.

 

'How the hell is Danzo able to hide his Root base under the village?' Alfonzo thought to himself as he toweled off. 'I mean, While I was discussing the details with Hiruzen, Danzo just cuts in and says that the stakes can't go past a certain point. And when Hiruzen questioned him about it, he just walked away while saying something about the betterment of the Leaf. I mean, seriously, what the fuck? Hiruzen didn't even try to question him anymore after that.'

 

"Anyway, let's grab a bite to eat." Alfonzo said while shaking his head. "I'm starving."

 

"Sure." Kakashi replied with a shrug.

 

With that, Alfonzo and Kakashi made their way to Yakiniku Q. When they arrived, however, they ran into a familiar face.

 

"Kakashi! My eternal rival!" A man with a bowl cut, bushy eyebrows, and a winning smile shouted from across the restaurant once Alfonzo and Kakashi entered. "Oh, and you're with my friend, Alfonzo. Why don't you come and eat with us."

 

Smiling in return, Alfonzo glanced at Kakashi, who sighed as if he could not be more exasperated.

 

"*Sigh* Let's go, if we don't, he'll chase us down to our own table." Kakashi said in a tired tone.

 

"OH, cut the shit, Kakashi." Alfonzo said as he patted Kakashi on the back. "This isn't the first time we've run into Guy. And we both know you love the guy."

 

"*Sigh*" Kakashi sighed once again in reply.

 

A few moments later, Alfonzo and Kakashi were seated with Might Guy and three youngsters who appeared to be eleven or twelve.

 

"So, who are the kids, Guy?" Alfonzo asked after he and Kakashi put in their orders.

 

"Oh, these are my three youthful students." Guy replied in his usual tone. "Why don't you three introduce yourselves?"

 

"Yes, Guy-Sensei." X 3

 

Immediately afterwards, a boy with a bowl-cut and bushy eyebrows wearing a green jumpsuit, orange leg warms, and bandages wrapped around his forearms and hands stood up with vigor.

 

"MY name is Rock Lee." The boy, Rock Lee, said energetically. "My dream is to become a splendid Shinobi, despite the fact that I'm unable to use Ninjutsu or Genjutsu."

 

"So, he's a lot like you, huh, Guy?" Alfonzo asked with a smile.

 

"Yes, he is." Guy replied in his usual tone. "Because of that, I'll make sure that his dream comes true."

 

"I can see that." Alfonzo replied. "He sure as hell has a lot of weight strapped to his legs."

 

Hearing that, Lee seemed to be surprised. At the same time, the other two children, a young man with long black hair tied int a ponytail and white featureless eyes, and a young woman with black hair tied into a pair of Chinese-style buns and black eyes, wore dumbfounded expressions. Meanwhile, Guy wore an expression that said: "As expected of you."

 

"How--- How did you know that?" Lee asked in an incredulous tone.

 

"Wait, it was true?" The young woman asked.

 

Meanwhile, the other young man remained silent. He already knew about the weights. However, he was curious to know how this new comer could know, too.

 

"Yes, Alfonzo is telling the truth. As for how he knew, it's because he uses magic from the outside world. [Metal Magic] to be exact." Guy explained.

 

"Yeah, and my magic allows me to, among other things, detect any metals in my surroundings." Alfonzo said, continuing the explanation.

 

"Oh, that makes perfect sense." The young man said with a nod. "Well then, I'll introduce myself, as well. My name is Neji Hyuga."

 

"And I'm Tenten." The young woman, Tenten, added, concluding the introductions.

 

"It's nice to meet the three of you." Alfonzo said with a smile. "I'm Alfonzo Marcus. And I bet my wife would love to get a hold of you three."

 

"What do you mean?" Neji asked in a skeptical tone.

 

"My wife is a fashion designer. A pretty famous one, actually." Alfonzo said with his smile widening.

 

"Wait, are you talking about Elicia Taylor?" Tenten asked excitedly. "I read that she had gotten married to a man named Alfonzo Marcus a couple of years ago. And that must be you, right? *Sigh* It's too bad we're not allowed to leave the village without a good reason. Otherwise, I would have bought something from the Taylor Shop."

 

"What point is there in thinking about such mundane things?" Neji asked in a dismissive tone. "The only thing worth thinking about is getting stronger."

 

'Oh, damn, we got a little Laxus on our hands.' Alfonzo thought to himself.

 

"Well, as it happens, Lici is actually in the village, too." Alfonzo said. "So, if you want to get her to make something for you, you can stop by our accommodations any time."

 

"Really?" Tenten asked excitedly.

 

"Sure." Alfonzo replied with a smile. "It won' be for free, though. She's running a business, after all."

 

"To think Elicia came with you." Guy said with his usual smile before Tenten could say anything. "I knew you would be here to work on the training grounds, but I didn't think she would be coming with you."

 

"Yeah… She wasn't going to originally." Alfonzo replied, his smile widening as he did so. "But we found out she was pregnant just before I was scheduled to make the trip. So, I brought her and our maid with me. Oh, and another member of our guild, as well."

 

"Really, you're going to be a father?" Guy shouted happily. Then, he jumped up and pulled Alfonzo into a hug as he continued. "Congratulations, my friend. I'll have to come and visit to extend my congratulations to Elicia, as well. I can't wait to see the product of your youthful passion."

 

"Sure, why don't you stop by after we finish eating?" Alfonzo replied while smiling awkwardly as he patted Guy on his back. "I'm sure she'd love to meet your students, too."

 

With that, it was decided that Team Guy would visit Alfonzo's temporary residence. So, the group of six chatted casually as they ate before heading to Alfonzo's home.


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