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章節 321: Fighting a Homunculus

Earth Land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, Crocus.

 

February, x785.

 

Shortly after he was wrapped by the threads and vanished from sight, Maes Hughes found himself being pulled through the city of Crocus at high speed.

 

'What the hell is going on?' Maes thought to himself as his mind raced to make sense of what was happening. 'What was up with that woman in the HQ? How did that woman change into my wife? What was that thing that saved me? And most importantly, where am I being taken?"

 

Unfortunately, because he was wrapped up so tightly, Maes was unable to scream or shout to draw attention to himself, not that it would have made a difference.

 

Instead, all he could do was watch the scenery pass by while letting his mind work.

 

Eventually, he noticed that he was being pulled towards a rather well-known hotel. However, he was being pulled straight towards the closed front entrance.

 

'Seriously, is this the way I'm going to die?' Maes thought in a panic. 'Smashing head first into a building was not the way I thought I'd go.'

 

Before he could smash into the doors, however, Maes rose into the air, quite sharply. Then, he was smoothly pulled through a window that opened just as he reached it, before being closed a moment later.

 

"Well, that went well." Elicia, the one controlling the threads that bound Maes, said with a smile once the Lt. Colonel was on the floor of her hotel room. "Now, the rest is up to you, Fonzie."

 

At the same time, the threads binding Maes dispelled, allowing him to move. And just as he regained his mobility, Maes scrambled to his feet with a throwing knife gripped in his uninjured hand.

 

"Though I'm happy that you saved me, who are you and why did you bring me here?' Maes asked while scanning the room.

 

A moment later, after regaining his senses, Maes realized who was in the room with him.

 

"Elicia Taylor, an S-Class wizard from Fairy Tail?" Maes asked without lowering his guard. "Why did you bring me here?"

 

"To save you." Elicia replied with a smile. "I don't know what those things that were attacking you were, but they had no magic power signature. More precisely, they had no magic power in their bodies."

 

"Impossible." Maes denied immediately. "Every living thing on the planet has magic power running through it."

 

'That should be true if not for the homunculus.' Elicia thought without losing her smile. 'But if Black Clover somehow appears in this weird world, there would be one human with no magic power, too.'

 

"Well, as a regular person, there's no way you'd be able to tell for yourself." Elicia replied nonchalantly. "And you seem like a real pragmatist, so I doubt you'll believe me, either way. Unless you were to see it for yourself, or someone you trust tells you the same thing."

 

Hearing Elicia's words, Maes deflated a little because he knew what she said was true.

 

"*Sigh* The worst thing is, I really wanna believe you." Maes said while putting his throwing knife back in his sleeve. Then, he reached for the inner pocket of his uniform. "Especially since you have the same name as my cute daughter."

 

As he spoke the last part, Maes' expression changed to that of a doting father. Then, he pulled a family photo out of his pocket that showed him standing with his wife and daughter.

 

"These are my wife and daughter, Gracia and Elicia!" Maes said, gushing over his family. "Isn't my wife beautiful? And isn't my daughter the most precious thing you've ever seen?"

 

'I was wondering when this was gonna happen.' Elicia said while still maintaining her smile.

 

Meanwhile, back in the deserted part of the city where Elicia whisked Maes away from, Alfonzo and the woman were having a standoff.

 

'So, my first fight with a homunculus, and it's Envy.' Alfonzo thought to himself. 'Well, at least it's not Pride, I guess.'

 

"Who are you?" The woman… or rather, Envy asked with her pistol raised. "And where did you take him?"

 

"Didn't we already introduce ourselves? Alfonzo replied while tilting his head in confusion. "We are Venom. And who are you? Or rather, what are you? Because you're clearly not human. Otherwise, we would be able to feel your magic power."

 

Hearing Alfonzo claim with such confidence that she was not human, Envy quickly pulled the trigger several times in succession. Unfortunately for her, Alfonzo deflected all the bullets with little effort.

 

This time, however, Envy was able to see what happened, since all her focus was on Alfonzo. And what she saw a number of thin tendrils that grew from the surface of the man's body before deflecting the bullets.

 

"Hmm… That's an interesting magic." Envy said while licking her lips as she was once again covered in red lightning.

 

A moment later, Envy had transformed into an androgynous young man with a lean, muscular build, long, wispy black hair, and violet eyes wearing a black crop top, black shorts, black, fingerless, elbow-length gloves, and black, stocking-like footwear that exposed his heels and toes, with a matching headgear.

 

"Ahh~, it feels good to be back in a familiar body.' Envy said while stretching lightly. Then, he put on a sadistic grin as he continued. "Anyway, even though that magic seems quite interesting, how much will it help you against someone like me?"

 

With that, Envy dropped the pistol before rushing forward at high speed. In fact, he put so much force into his dash that the ground under his left foot cratered.

 

'He's pretty fast.' Alfonzo thought to himself while tilting his head to the side to dodge a right straight.

 

Meanwhile, Envy, as soon as his punch was dodged, opened his palm and wrapped his fingers around the back of Alfonzo's head. Then, he began squeezing as if he wanted to crush it in his palm. At the same time, he pulled forward and raised his left knee in an attempt to smash it into Alfonzo's face.

 

'Pretty strong, too.' Alfonzo thought as he raised his hands to block the knee strike. 'That grip strength would be enough to crush most A-Class wizards' heads even while they're strengthening their bodies with magic power.'

 

*Bang!*

 

The collision between Alfonzo's hands and Envy's knee produced a loud sound that echoed through the area while simultaneously creating a small shockwave. A moment later, however, Envy quickly released Alfonzo's head and pulled his bloody hand away.

 

Taking advantage of the fact that Envy could no longer use his head as leverage, Alfonzo retracted the spikes he formed on the back of his head. At the same time, he let the Techno Organic Metal on his hands wrap around Envy's leg.

 

"Now it's our turn." Alfonzo said as the Techno Organic Metal formed spikes that pierced Envy's leg.

 

At the same time, Alfonzo raised Envy off the ground before smashing him down, back first.

 

*Boom!*

 

Despite Envy's small frame, the street under him and Alfonzo collapsed. As a result, they both fell down into the sewer system.

 

'Hopefully our fight won't cause so much damage if it's down here.' Alfonzo thought to himself as he spun in place after regaining his footing. 'But damn, this son of a bitch is heavy as a mother fucker.'

 

"Let go of me you insect!" Envy shouted while being spun around.

 

As soon as his shout ended, Envy used his free leg to throw a powerful kick at Alfonzo's chest. Alfonzo, on the other hand, simply released his hold on Envy's left leg before the kick could land. But he left the metal that pierced Envy's thigh and knee in the wounds.

 

*Bang!*

 

*Splash!*

 

As a result, Envy was sent flying into a nearby wall. However, because of the angle that he made contact with the wall, instead of punching a hole in it, he bounced off before falling into the flowing sewage in the center of the corridor.

 

"Looks like someone's gonna need a bath." Alfonzo said as he covered the hole, he and Envy fell through, with Techno Organic Metal.

 

'Although I'm confident I could fight one or two of the homunculus, I'd rather not have Pride's shadows show up.' Alfonzo thought to himself as he also extinguished all the lights in the surrounding area. 'Especially when I'm not sure if [MPD] will pick up the moving shadows like it does when Lust and Envy used their powers.'

 

*Splash!*

 

"I'll kill you!" Envy shouted as he leapt out of the flowing sewage.

 

"Eww~!" Alfonzo exclaimed while waving his hand in front of his face. "How about you go get cleaned up before we continue?"

 

"Rah~~~~!" Envy roared angrily as he rushed towards Alfonzo once again.

 

With that, Alfonzo spent the next ten minutes, or so, dodging Envy's attacks that were devoid of any technique. Though, he was unsure if that was due to the fact that he was so angry. Or because his physical parameters were so far above those of a human that he never trained in martial arts.

 

However, Alfonzo did much more than just dodge. In fact, whenever the opportunity presented itself, he would land a devastating counterattack. And every time he did so, he would create a spike on his fist, foot, knee, elbow, or even head just before his attack landed.

 

Then, after pulling away, he would break off a small piece of Techno Organic Metal that he would leave in Envy's body.

 

'I wonder how the Techno Organic metal will affect the homunculus' regeneration?' Alfonzo thought to himself as he noticed that Envy was beginning to slow down. 'I mean, since it's technically healing their injuries. Oh well… It's too bad I won't be here long enough to find out.'

 

"What have you done to me, you insect?" Envy roared angrily as he also noticed that his movements were getting stiffer by the second.

 

"That's for us to know and for you to find out." Alfonzo replied mockingly.

 

"Rah~~~!" Envy roared in irritation.

 

At the same time, Alfonzo rushed forward. Then, once he was close enough, he ducked under a swipe of Envy's arm. In the same motion, he landed a left uppercut into Envy's unprotected abdomen, with spikes growing from his knuckles. A moment later, he avoided a swipe from Envy's other arm, before he threw a right uppercut into the homunculus chin, also with spikes extending from his knuckles.

 

Then, he swung both of his arms, which were still in contact with Envy's body, throwing him away. However, the two remained connected by Techno Organic Metal tentacles. And using these tentacles, Alfonzo whipped Envy around the sewer, smashing him into the walls, floor, and ceiling repeatedly.

 

'Well, I think it's time to call it a night.' Alfonzo muttered internally. 'I can feel Lust trying to cut through the cover I made over the hole in the street.'

 

With that thought, Alfonzo smiled deviously under his mask.

 

'Well, if she really wants to get Envy back so badly, what kind of gentleman would I be if I didn't help her?' Alfonzo thought to himself as she started swinging Envy around with even greater force.

 

Then, once Alfonzo was satisfied with the speed at which Envy was moving, he released him in the direction where he could feel Lust damaging his metal.

 

A moment before Envy crashed into the cover, a hole opened up in it. As a result, Envy slammed into Lust before they were both sent flying into the sky.

 

Then, as the two homunculus flew away, Alfonzo hopped out of the hole in the Techno Organic Metal and landed on an undamaged part of the street. He then looked in the direction where Envy and Lust were flying while pretending to shield his eyes from the sun.

 

"They're blasting off again~~~~~~!" Alfonzo shouted while watching the two homunculus fly past the city limits.

 

A moment later, Alfonzo sucked all the Techno Organic Metal used to cover the hole in the street into his suit. Then, he simply vanished from where he stood as if he had never been there.

 

Meanwhile, outside the city…

 

*Boom!*

 

A dust cloud was raised as Lust and Envy crashed into the ground. However, it was quickly blown away by the swing of what appeared to be a tail, revealing a large, green, serpentine creature with multiple pairs of legs, long human-like hair, a dog-like head, and six pupils in its left eye.

 

"Damn that insect!" The chimeric creature, Envy, shouted angrily. "The next time I see him, I'm going to rip out his intestines and feed them to him."

 

"I'm sure you will." Lust replied dryly. "But could you get off of me for now?"

 

Hearing Lust's voice, Envy instinctively looked down at one of his feet, where he saw red lightning constantly sparking. Then, when he lifted his foot, he saw a mostly crushed head and torso that was quickly regenerating.

 

"Oh…" Envy muttered as he put his foot down somewhere else. "Then, he transformed back into his human form. "We need to get back! We can't let that insect get away."

 

"It's probably already too late." Lust replied as she finished regenerating. Then, she continued as she picked herself up from the ground. "Instead, we should go and report this to Father."

 

"Tch!" Envy clicked his tongue. "Fine, but I'm gonna kill that human the next time I see him."

 

With that, Lust and Envy left the sight of the crater and made their way back to the homunculus base under Crocus. However, their trip was much slower than usual as Envy's body became stiffer and stiffer as time went by.


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章節 322: Retiring from the Military

Earth land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, Crocus.

 

February, x785.

 

"I'm back." Alfonzo said as he walked into his and Elicia's hotel room.

 

"Welcome back." Elicia said with a smile from atop the bed.

 

After that, Alfonzo slipped off his shoes before quickly making his way over to the bed and giving Elicia a hug.

 

"So, when she said 'Fonzie will handle the rest,' she was talking about you, Alfonzo Marcus, huh?" Maes asked from the chair in front of the desk in the room. "I guess that means you were that weird black silhouette that saved me then, right?"

 

"That's right." Alfonzo replied with a nod. "You're just lucky that we have the habit of scanning our surroundings when we're outside of Magnolia."

 

"Yeah, otherwise, those two would have killed you." Elicia added.

 

"Yeah, I kinda figured that." Maes said while scratching the stubble on his face. "But what were those things? I mean, I stabbed one of them in the head and the other in the throat. But they just shrugged it off like they weren't even hurt."

 

"Since you work with so many alchemists, I'm sure you've heard of them at least once." Alfonzo replied.

 

Hearing that, Maes started to explore his memories. Before he could come to the correct conclusion, however, Elicia gave the answer.

 

"Homunculus." Elicia said in a solemn tone.

 

"That's impossible." Maes replied almost immediately. "No one has ever created a homunculus successfully.

 

"Well, if you have a better explanation for what those things that tried to kill you were, I'm all ears." Alfonzo replied with a shrug. "Either way, that's not the most important thing to worry about, right now."

 

"Huh?" Maes exclaimed in confusion.

 

"Those things, they want you dead." Elicia said. "And I doubt they are above using your family---"

 

"Gracia! Elicia!" Maes shouted in panic.

 

"Take it easy, Lt. Colonel." Alfonzo said, stopping Maes before he could get out of control. "I sent those two things flying out of the city. So, we should have some time to secure your family before they can report back and get new orders."

 

Hearing that, relief washed over Maes. Then, he stood up abruptly and started walking towards the hotel room's door Seeing that, both Alfonzo and Elicia could only smile wryly.

 

"I guess I'll go with him." Elicia said, leaning over to give Alfonzo a kiss on the cheek. "But what are we gonna do with the Hughes family after that?"

 

As she spoke, Elicia extended a thread towards Maes that imbued the effects of [Hiding in Plain Sight]. It would be a waste if Maes was spotted by an informant of the homunculus after all that Alfonzo and Elicia had done, after all.

 

"Yeah, you should go with Hughes." Alfonzo said with a nod. "Meanwhile, I'll book another room for the family of three. Then, I'll take your car back to Magnolia and switch it out for the Escalade. We'll need a lot more room to bring them all back to Magnolia, right?"

 

"You wanna bring them back with us?" Elicia asked with curiosity in her tone. "But if we do that, what will they do"

 

"Well, other than a change in scenery, not much should happen to Gracia and Elicia." Alfonzo replied.

 

"Having someone around with the same name as mine is gonna take some getting used to." Elicia said while smiling wryly.

 

"But I think having Hughes work for the guild as an information analyst would be good for Fairy Tail." Alfonzo continued while smiling at Elicia's remark. "I mean, he is the commanding officer in the Knights investigations office, after all."

 

"Ooh!" Elicia exclaimed with her eyes opened wide. "If he accepts, you're gonna end up being Ur's favorite person."

 

After she spoke, Elicia leaned over and pecked Alfonzo on the cheek once again. Then, she stood up and quickly started walking towards the door of the hotel room.

 

"Well, I guess I should get going." Elicia said as she opened the door. "He's already on the ground floor."

 

"Okay, I'll see you some time tomorrow." Alfonzo said while waving Elicia goodbye.

 

After that, Elicia quickly caught up with Maes. Then, while they were both undetectable thanks to her [Camouflage magic], they made their way to Maes' apartment.

 

Meanwhile, Alfonzo headed down to the hotel's reception desk, and booked a room on the same floor as his and Elicia's for the next few days. Then, he left the hotel, hopped in Elicia's Z3, and started his drive back to Magnolia.

 

After that, the next few days passed with little issue. Maes was able to convince his wife that they had to get out of the city after he had been attacked for getting too close to the heart of a secret, and how he was saved by Elicia and her fiancée from Fairy Tail. Though, he did have to explain to his wife that he was not cheating on her with a younger woman when Gracia saw him come into the house with Elicia.

 

Then, Alfonzo returned with the Escalade early the next morning. After that, he and Elicia went out to look at the plots of land that the realtor had prepared for Elicia's new shop.

 

The Hughes family, on the other hand, stayed I the hotel room that Alfonzo had booked for them while they were all connected to Elicia with her threads. Since Alfonzo and Elicia knew about Gluttony and his ability to sniff out his targets, they were constantly under the effects of [Hiding in Plain Sight], and would remain that way until the group left for Magnolia.

 

Also, during those few days, Maes' daughter, Elicia, was quite taken by the older Elicia. And whenever she wasn't out surveying possible locations for her store, the two Elicias were pretty much inseparable.

 

On a side note, Maes tried to pull his gun on Alfonzo when Alfonzo made a toy for Elica with his [Metal Magic], and the little girl gave him a kiss on the cheek as thanks. But thanks to Alfonzo's [Metal Magic], Maes could not even pull it from its holster.

 

In any case, after those few days were over, Alfonzo and Elicia were satisfied with the spot they had chosen for Elicia's new store. Though, they did end up paying a little more than they expected because the owner got greedy after realizing who the buyers were. Still, as they were both pretty rich, neither of them batted an eye. Though, Alfonzo planned to bankrupt his business in the future. Through completely legal means, of course.

 

Then, once Alfonzo and Elicia had hired a construction company to build the shop with orichalcum lined walls, they went back to the hotel.

 

The next day, Elicia, concealed by her [Hiding in Plain sight Spell], accompanied Maes to the knights' headquarters where he would tender his resignation from the kingdom's military. Luckily, his resignation was accepted thanks to his years of stellar service. Though, he did have to deal with quite the guilt tripping before they agreed.

 

Even the commander of the knights, King Bradley made an appearance and tried to convince him otherwise. In fact, he almost succeeded. Until Elicia secretly whispered to Maes that the commander was lacking any hint of magic power in his body, just like the two who attacked him a few nights ago.

 

Eventually, when Maes' resignation was accepted and made official, and Maes had cleaned out his office, he and Elicia left the HQ.

 

"Don't panic, but someone is following us.' Elicia whispered as she and Maes walked towards a crowded street.

 

"*Sigh* I knew I figured out something big, but to think they'd go this far to keep me from spreading it." Maes said quietly.

 

"Well, you did say that a few villages and towns had been massacred in the shape of the transmutation circle used to create a Philosopher's Stone." Elicia replied. "Although not all of the country would be sacrificed, most of the kingdom's population would end up dead if they succeeded."

 

"*Sigh* I know." Maes replied. "Fortunately, Magnolia won't fall into the range of the giant transmutation circle."

 

"That's because if they tried to destroy any towns or villages near magnolia, they would probably be found out by the guild." Elicia replied while puffing out her chest in pride. "Although we've been known to cause trouble in the past, we have always been considered the strongest guild in the kingdom."

 

Hearing that, Maes could only smile wryly. At the same time, he and Elicia finally walked into the crowd of people roaming the capital's streets. Then, Maes simply vanished among the people, with no one seeming to notice.

 

"Huh? Where did he go?" Asked an extremely fat man with a large, round head, a large nose, and small, round, pupilless eyes wearing a sleeveless black body suit as he tilted his head in confusion from a rooftop overlooking the crowded Crocus street. "Lust told me I could eat him… But he disappeared."

 

After that, the fat man sniffed the air a few times to try and find his prey. However, the scent completely vanished in the spot where Maes disappeared. A few moments later, the fat man turned around and started heading back to his hideout.

 

"I hope Lust won't be mad at me." The fat man muttered to himself as he leapt from rooftop to rooftop.

 

The following day, with everything that needed to be taken care of out of the way, Alfonzo, the two Elicias, Maes, and Gracia piled into the Escalade after checking out of the hotel. Then, they started the drive back to Magnolia.

 

"So, have you considered my offer?" Alfonzo asked while steering the vehicle.

 

"You mean about working for Fairy Tail?" Maes asked after glancing back at his giggling daughter, who was sitting in Elici's lap, while the older girl braided her hair. "Yeah, I think I'll accept. I need to be able to provide for my family, after all."

 

"Good." Alfonzo replied with a smile. "Ur is gonna be over the moon to have someone who can help her sift through the information that comes in every day."

 

"You mentioned Ur, you mean the Ice Witch, Ur Milkovich, right?" Gracia asked from the back seat.

 

"That's right." Alfonzo replied. "She became the fourth Fairy Tail guild master after Gramps retired."

 

"I see." Gracia replied with a nod. "I've heard a lot about her over the years thanks to Sorcerer Weekly. But what's she like?"

 

"Ur's nice." Elicia replied with a smile.

 

"Unless you spill her wine or mention her age." Alfonzo added.

 

"She's really good with children. And she seems to like teaching them." Elicia continued without minding Alfonzo's interruption. "In fact, she's already taught five wizards. Actually, she's still teaching the fifth one…"

 

"Yeah, and if little Elicia shows any talent as a wizard, she'll probably jump at the opportunity to teach her, too." Alfonzo added.

 

Hearing her name mentioned, the younger Elicia looked towards Alfonzo from her seat on the older Elicia's lap.

 

"Could I be a wizard?" The little Elicia asked with her eye's sparkling.

 

One thing to take note of is that Elicia Hughes is six years old in this world, unlike her canon counterpart from Fullmetal Alchemist. In fact, all the characters from that franchise are older due to things not following Fullmetal's timeline thanks to all the things that have been going on in the world of Fairy Tail. On top of that, magic has made it much harder for Father to enact his plans without being noticed. So, things have been much more slow going.

 

"You probably could." The older Elicia replied with a smile. "I mean, you and your mom have a decent amount of magic power. Though, from what I can tell, Gracia never trained hers."

 

"Huh? I have magic power?" Gracia asked in a confused tone. "But no one ever told me about that."

 

Not only Gracia, but even Maes was completely flabbergasted by the bomb Elicia just dropped.

 

"Well, if I had to guess, you grew up in a village that didn't have any wizards living there, right?" Alfonzo asked.

 

"Yes, that's right." Gracia replied with a nod.

 

"And since you didn't awaken a kind of innate magic as a child, no one in the village would have ever known that you had the potential to be a wizard." Alfonzo continued. "Then, by the time you moved away from your village, everyone who noticed your magic power probably decided that you were too old to train, so they never said anything to you about it."

 

"Then why hasn't anyone said anything to us about Elicia?" Maes asked in a tone filled with curiosity.

 

In response, Alfonzo glanced at him out of the corner of his eye with a deadpan expression on his face.

 

"That's definitely your fault, Hughes." Alfonzo replied. "Between your super-doting daddy aura and your rank of Lt. Colonel in the kingdom's knight order, no one was brave enough to mention it to you."

 

Hearing that, Maes wore an exaggerated expression of shock on his face. Then, he hung his head, feeling disappointed in himself.

 

"Are you u saying that I could have hampered the number of choices my daughter had in life?" Maes asked in a downcast tone.

 

"Pretty much." Alfonzo replied with a neutral expression on his face.

 

In the next instant, Maes turned back towards the two Elicias. Though his attention was completely focused on his daughter.

 

"Sweetie, Daddy has always told you that you could be whatever you want." Maes said frantically. "So, if you wanna be a wizard when you grow up, Daddy will do all he can to support you."

 

After saying all that, Maes expression turned cold.

 

"But if any boys try to make a team with you, they'll have to talk to Daddy's gun, first." Maes said while cocking a small pistol that fell into his palm from his sleeve.

 

'*Sigh* Another doting daddy is gonna join Fairy Tail.' Alfonzo thought to himself while he decided to just focus on the road. 'AT least I won't have to worry about this one wanting to kill me because his daughter fell for me, right?'

 

'I bet he'll get along great with Cana and Sun's dads.' Elicia thought to herself as she continued to braid the little Elicia's hair.

 

Like that, the rest of the road trip went smoothly with the little Elicia eventually falling asleep. Then, after a couple of hours, the group pulled up outside of the Fairy Tail guild hall.


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