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章節 180: Attacked in the Casino

Earth land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, Akane Beach.

 

September, x784.

 

At the bar, Elicia and Cana had just questioned the man who confronted them about Erza's whereabouts.

 

Hearing the question from Elicia and Cana, the tall man's expression did not change. Instead, he answered their question calmly.

 

"We're here to take her back." The tall man said.

 

"Take her where?" Cana asked in a threatening tone as she reached into her card pouch.

 

"That is none of your concern." The tall man said, unbothered by Cana's threatening tone. "But since you refuse to cooperate, you leave me no choice, [Darkness Magic: Dark Burst]."

 

With that, Simon gazed at Elicia and Cana as his magic power flared. A moment later, a shockwave of pure [Darkness Magic] shot forth from his body in a conical shape.

 

"[Thread Magic: Thread Cocoon]." Elicia chanted as soon as she felt the flaring of the tall man's magic power.

 

In the next instant, just before the shockwave could strike, Elicia and Cana were covered in a spherical dome of the hardest threads Elicia could produce. Unfortunately, they, along with the bar behind them, were blown away.

 

Immediately after the man cast his spell, the nearby patrons and employees of the casino started to run in panic, trying to get as far away from the destruction as their legs would carry them.

 

Looking at the destruction his spell caused, the tall man could only shake his head.

 

"This could have all been avoided had you been more cooperative." The tall man said.

 

While shaking his head, however, the tall man spotted a few tarot cards arranged by his feet from the corner of his eye. Seeing that, his visible eye widened.

 

"[Card Magic: Thunderbolt's Fate]." Cana's voice could be heard from underneath the rubble of the bar.

 

A moment later, a thunder cloud quickly formed near the ceiling of the casino. Then, a bolt of lightning fell in the center of the cards, where the tall man stood with shock in his visible eye.

 

*Boom!*

 

As the lightning bolt landed, a cloud of dust was kicked up.

 

At the same time, the rubble from the destroyed bar started to move. If one were to look closely, a number of threads were digging out of the rubble, eventually revealing a sphere composed of hardened threads. Then, once all the rubble was removed, the sphere began to unravel.

 

"Since when can you activate your [Card Magic] remotely, Cana?" Elicia asked as she and Cana emerged from the threads.

 

"I've been training just as hard as the rest of you, you know." Cana said with a proud smile. "After enough training, I can finally activate my spells by spreading out my magic power. Though, it's even more delicate than [Magic Power Detection]."

 

"Then, your magic power control must be pretty good now." Elicia replied with a smile.

 

As the two spoke, they walked towards the cloud of dust that was created by Cana's attack. And just as they arrived near it, the dust had finally settled. Now, where the cloud once floated, there was a crater in the casino's floor surrounded by burnt scraps of carpet.

 

In the center of the new crater stood a battered cocoon of darkness magic. It was obvious that the hastily created defense was incapable of defending from Cana's attack completely. However, neither Elicia nor Cana could be sure of exactly how much damage Cana's spell did to their enemy. Though, they did not have to wait long to find out.

 

"*Pant* *Pant* *Pant*" The tall man breathed heavily as the cocoon of [Darkness Magic] dissolved into particles of magic power.

 

Once the tall man was revealed, it was clear that he had been better. While he was kneeling in the center of the crater, the turban on his head was missing, the cloth draped over his shoulder was tattered, and there were a few burns on his pants, torso, and arms.

 

"It looks like Erza's companions are stronger than expected." The tall man muttered after looking up to see the two women standing in front of the crater, completely unharmed.

 

"So, are you gonna tell us what you want with Erza, now?" Elicia asked as she rested her left hand on her hip.

 

"Let's see how well you fair when you can't see where to aim your magic." The tall man said, ignoring Elicia's question.

 

"*Sigh* They always wanna do things the hard way." Elicia said as she twitched the fingers on her right hand as she casually kicked off her heels.

 

"[Darkness Magic: Dark Mo---]." The tall man tried chanting his next spell before he was interrupted.

 

*Bang!*

 

As the tall man's spell was about to be cast, his legs were pulled out from under him by the threads Elicia had sneakily wrapped around them, resulting in him slamming onto the bottom of the crater, face first.

 

In the next instant, Elicia leapt into the air, performed a forward summersault, and dropped her left heel on his back.

 

*Bang!*

 

"Gah!" The tall man grunted as the wind was knocked out of his lungs.

 

Unfortunately, Elicia was not done with only one attack. Reaching down, Elicia grabbed the tall man's ankles. Then, she rolled back onto her back, while keeping her feet planted on the tall man. Then, once she was on her back and suspending the man on her soles, she kicked him up into the air.

 

And while the tall man was airborne, Cana drew another combination of cards and cast another spell.

 

"[Card Magic: Summoned Lightning]." Cana chanted while pointing the faces of her cards at the airborne foe.

 

A moment later, three bolts of green lightning shot from the cards and struck the airborne man before Elicia yanked the threads that were still tied around his ankles and slammed him into the floor, cracking it as a result.

 

"Bang!*

 

After the impact, the tall man was unmoving. So, Elicia and Cana walked to his landing point with caution.

 

"Ya think we over did it?" Cana asked as she looked around at the destruction their short battle left behind.

 

"Maybe a little." Elicia replied. "But considering that we were customers here and we were attacked, I doubt the resort will make a big deal about it."

 

"*Sigh* I hope so." Cana said as she and Elicia arrived at the tall man's side. Then, she nudged him with her foot a couple times. "Looks like he's down for the count. I'm just glad my dress wasn't ruined."

 

Tonight, Cana was wearing a revealing black evening gown with navy blue ruffles that revealed the top of her breasts, her abdomen, and most of her back with a slit that reached to the base of her left thigh. Completing the ensemble, she wore a pair of black, open-toed high heels with straps that crisscrossed up her calves.

 

With that, Cana looked down to see the state that her dress was in. Noticing that it wasn't even wrinkled after being knocked away in Elicia's cocoon, she was pleased.

 

"Yeah, if he had ruined the dresses I put so much effort into, he would have ended up in a much worse state than he is now." Elicia agreed with a nod.

 

Meanwhile, Elicia looked down to check the state of her black, sleeveless, Chinese qipao-style dress with baby blue, embroidered phoenix feathers and a pair of slits that reached the base of her thighs on the outsides of her legs. She also wore a pair of black, thigh-high stockings under the dress.

 

"I wonder if the others were attacked, too." Cana asked as she looked where the bar used to be with pity. "*Sigh* So much good alcohol wasted because of this stupid attack."

 

"Yeah, they were, but their fine." Elicia replied with a shrug. She then released a lot of her threads and wrapped up the man who attacked them from the neck down. Anyway, let's go and regroup with the others."

 

Just when the conflict between Elicia, Cana, and the tall man started, Ultear was in conflict with a man and woman by the giant roulette wheel.

 

"Just answer the question, Doll." The man made of blocks ordered in an unamused tone.

 

"Yeah, if you answer our question, we won't have to kill you." The cat-like girl added with a vicious smile.

 

"If you think I'd sell out one of my friends, guild mates, and sisters because my life was threatened, then you don't know much about the wizards of Fairy Tail." Ultear said as she flared her magic power.

 

"*Sigh* You asked for this." The blocky man said as he raised his right arm and pointed his index and middle fingers at Ultear.

 

A moment later, the blocks forming his arm transformed into the barrel of a rifle, taking Ultear by surprise. Then, while Ultear was surprised, the girl produced a tube using her magic and flung it at Ultear.

 

"[Binding Magic: Nekôsoku Tube]." Millianna chanted.

 

Although she was unsure of what the incoming tube was meant to do as the girl had chanted her spell very quietly, Ultear judged that it was best to not let it touch her. So, she side stepped the tube before making a hand gesture.

 

"[Ice-Make: Wall]." Ultear chanted.

 

*Bang!*

 

*Crack!*

 

Just as Ultear conjured her ice wall, the blocky man fired the gun on his right arm, cracking but not shattering the ice wall.

 

"Tch!* The blocky man clicked his tongue at his failed attempt. "Crafty broad."

 

A moment later, several ice spears grew out of the ice wall as Ultear had casted the [Lance] spell. To avoid the incoming attack, the man and the young woman dodged in opposite directions, something that Ultear was anticipating.

 

As soon as her two attackers separated, a second ice wall grew from the ground between them. Then, Ultear rushed towards the young woman from behind the first wall.

 

'It's a good thing Lici convinced me to show off some leg.' Ultear thought as she ran towards the young man. 'Otherwise, I would be kind of restricted in my forms of attack.'

 

Like the other girls, Ultear was wearing an evening gown. Hers was a simple, yet elegant, sleeveless gown that covered everything from her neck to the base of her right thigh, where there was a slit that revealed her right leg while the rest of the dress reached her ankles. Though, she had kicked off her white high heels with silver accents before she rushed out from behind the first ice wall.

 

"If you think you can beat me, you've got another thing coming, meow." The young woman said as she took a hand to hand fighting stance.

 

Like Ultear, the young woman rushed forward. Then, when she was in range, she leapt forward and threw an overhand right at the top of Ultear's forehead.

 

Remaining calm, Ultear swept her left arm in a circular motion, deflecting the incoming punch. Then, she charged her right palm with [Ice Magic] and struck the young woman in the abdomen, sending her flying back in the direction she came from

 

*Bang!*

 

After flying back a short distance, the young woman slammed into the floor and wrapped her hands around her injured and freezing cold abdomen.

 

"Meow~~~! That hurt!" The young woman shouted in pain. "And I'm so cold! This is meowful!"

 

Before she could recover, however, the young woman felt the air around her dropping in temperature.

 

"[Ice Make: Rose Restraints]." Ultear chanted before slamming her palms into the floor.

 

A moment later, several pairs of rose stems grew from either side of the young woman and intertwined over her body before blooming into ice roses. On top of that, the stems had sharp thorns on them, dissuading the young woman from struggling to free herself.

 

"[Guns Magic: Prerendering Polygon Shot]." The blocky man chanted after hearing the young woman shouting in pain.

 

In the next instant, the wall separating the two attackers was turned into polygonal blocks that fell to the floor, revealing the blocky man with his gun arm pointed at Ultear.

 

"[Ice-Make: Geyser]." Ultear chanted, slamming her hands to the floor once again.

 

*Bang!*

 

As soon as she cast her spell, Ultear leapt away from where she was kneeling, narrowly avoiding a bullet. At the same time, from underneath the blocky man, a geyser of ice shards shot up from the floor, sending the man flying into the air and coating him in a thin sheen of ice, resulting in his body reforming to its normal human state.

 

"Wally!" The young woman shouted in concern as the blocky man, Wally, fell to the floor, unconscious. "I'll make you pay for hurting him!"

 

"Take it easy, kitty cat." Ultear replied. "He's not hurt too bad. He only fell unconscious because his body went into shock from the sudden change in temperature. Unlike you, I never had the intension to kill. I've got some questions for you, after all."

 

Hearing that, relief flashed past the girl's eyes. However, she looked away quickly, indicating that she had no intension of answering any questions.

 

"Don't worry, we have our ways of getting the answers we're looking for." Ultear said with a smile. "but first, I should regroup with the others."

 

At the same time, at the poker table, Shô was just about to cast his [Card Conversion] spell.

 

"Shô, please, stop!" Erza shouted with worry in her tone.

 

Hearing the worry in Erza's tone, Shô had incorrectly assumed that Erza was asking him to stop so that he would not hurt her companion. Unfortunately, he could not have been further from the truth.

 

Although Erza was asking Shô to stop so that no one would get hurt, she was concerned for his safety, not Alfonzo's.

 

"[Electromagnetism Magic: Lightning Enhancement]." Alfonzo muttered.

 

In the next instant, Alfonzo's entire body was covered in sparking electricity. Then, he vanished from his chair, leaving Erza floating above it for a brief moment.

 

By the time Erza landed atop the chair, Alfonzo was standing next to Shô with his palm gripping the back of the blond's head.

 

"Bad move." Alfonzo said quietly into Shô's ear.

 

*Bang!* x 2

 

Then, before Shô could register the new situation he was in, let alone react, he was slammed face first into and threw the poker table before his head created a small crater on the floor below.

 

'What the hell… Just happened…' Were Shô's final thoughts before losing consciousness.

 

At the same time, Erza slowly lowered the hand that she had stretched out towards Shô.

 

"*Sigh* I tried to warn him." Erza muttered while looking down at the unconscious form of her old friend. "But why did he do this?"

 

"Well, it looks like he wasn't alone." Alfonzo said as he stood up and dusted off his suit with a weak electrical current. "The other girls were attacked, too. We'll see what they wanted after we all gather together."

 

In response, Erza simply nodded.

 

"*Sigh* And Erza." Alfonzo said in a gentle tone. "I know you probably don't want to talk about your past, but this time we have to know. This guy is clearly someone you knew from the past, and he tried to attack us. We can't just let this go."

 

"*Sigh* I understand." Erza said, putting on a resolute expression a moment later. "You all deserve to know… Everything."


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章節 181: To the Tower of Heaven

Earth Land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, Akane Beach.

 

September, x784.

 

After a short time, the three groups of Fairy Tail wizards reconvened by the giant roulette wheel where Ultear fought Wally and the girl with cat-like features. The reason for that was simple, actually, Ultear was the only one who left one of her opponents conscious, making her harder to move without taking certain precautions.

 

After regrouping, Alfonzo created magic sealing cuffs for the four attackers. Then, Ultear dispelled her [Rose Restraints]. After that, the Fairy Tail wizards began discussing the incident.

 

"It's kinda weird that for the two groups of two, they only sent one opponent." Elicia said as she looked over the four attacking wizards. "But for the only one of us that was alone, they sent two."

 

"Does that mean they think Ultear is the strongest of us?" Cana asked, a bit of discontent in her tone.

 

"I doubt it." Alfonzo replied. "Most likely, they couldn't tell who was together like we can. But we could just ask them about it, instead of guessing wildly."

 

In response, Elicia, Cana, and Ultear all nodded in acknowledgement. Meanwhile, Erza was staring at the familiar faces of the attackers.

 

"Shô... Simon... Wally... Millianna..." Erza muttered with sadness in her tone. "Why are you here? Millianna, please tell me."

 

Millianna, the cat-like girl had been glaring at Alfonzo, Elicia, Cana, and Ultear with blatant hostility ever since the group came together. Although she was also glaring at Erza, it was obvious that she did not hold much hostility in her gaze. However, when she heard Erza's question, she focused all her attention on her.

 

"Jellal told us to bring you back." Millianna replied.

 

"Jellal did? But why?" Erza asked in a confused tone as she thought back to the last time she saw Jellal.

 

Before Erza came to Fiore, she was one of the slaves that had been abducted to build the Tower of Heaven. During her time spent there, she was subjected to an inhuman amount of torture, even losing her right eye in the process.

 

Throughout those hardships, however, she had a group of five friends and a kind old man that kept her from completely falling into despair. Four of those friends were currently laying on the floor in front of her as prisoners while the fifth was the aforementioned Jellal.

 

In fact, Jellal was the reason for Erza's escape from the tower. At first, she wanted to save Jellal, who had been taken away by the wardens of the construction project. And for that reason, she led the forced slaves in a rebellion.

 

In that rebellion, Simon, the tall man with the eye patch, was struck in the face by a magic projectile, resulting in him losing an eye and his lower jaw being seriously damaged. On top of that, the kind old man and the reason why Erza joined Fairy Tail, former Fairy Tail wizard, Rob, lost his life protecting her. As a result, she awakened her two magics, [Requip: The Knight] and [Sword Magic].

 

In the end, however, the rebellion was successful. And after ridding the tower of the cultists, Erza made her way up to the top floor of the tower, only to find a changed Jellal.

 

Jellal had become exactly what Erza fought to rescue him from, a Zeref cultist. He even asked her to help him complete the tower. And when she refused, he drove her away from the tower with the threat that he would kill all of her friends if she ever came back or told anyone about it.

 

What made things even worse, Jellal had awakened the ability to use magic as well, making him much more powerful than the Erza of the past.

 

Deep in thought about her past with Jellal, Erza was pulled back to the present when she heard Millianna's reply to her question.

 

"I don't know, meow." Millianna replied. "You left us such a long time ago, Erzie-Werzie. Maybe he missed you."

 

"I can't believe that." Erza said while shaking her head. "It feels like he's up to something.:"

 

"Um... Who is this Jellal you're talking about?" Ultear asked curiously. "And where did he want you to take Erza?"

 

"That's none of your business, meow." Millianna replied fiercely.

 

"*Sigh* I guess it's about time I told you everything." Erza said, resolution flashing past her eyes.

 

"No, Erzie-Werzie, you can't tell them." Millianna shouted, reacting explosively. "You already betrayed us once, will you do it again?"

 

Hearing that, Erza sighed before putting on a guilty smile as she knelt next to Millianna. Then, she started stroking the cat-like girl's head as she started speaking.

 

"*Sigh* I do feel as if I betrayed the four of you, too, Millianna." Erza said in a gentle tone. "But not for the same reasons as you think I did. I think it's time for you to know the truth, as well."

 

In response, Millianna only blinked her eyes with confusion written all over her face. Still, that did not stop Erza from telling her story about the Tower of Heaven.

 

By the end of the story, Both Alfonzo and Elicia had their heads lowered, trying to suppress the anger they felt for this tower. Because of it, they had lost their parents, after all. Meanwhile, Ultear looked on with a sorrow filled expression while Cana, though not as much as Alfonzo and Elicia, was angered. But the one with the most explosive reaction was Millianna.

 

"No! That's impossible!" Millianna shouted. "There's no way Jellal would do something like that, meow!"

 

"*Sigh* I didn't expect you to believe me after all these years, but I swear what I said is true." Erza replied in a sad tone. "Believe me, I would have never left any of you behind if I could help it."

 

To that, Millianna had no idea what to think. For years, she had been told that Erza betrayed them and left them behind when she escaped. But now she's hearing that Erza was forced to do so by one of the people she trusted the most in the world.

 

On one hand, it made her happy to hear that Erza did not actually abandon them. But on the other hand, she found it hard to believe that Erza was telling the truth about what happened that day, resulting in a heavy silence falling over the group. That silence did not persist for long, however.

 

"So, that's what happened." Simon, who had woken up during Erza's story, said, somewhat alleviating the heavy atmosphere. "I suspected that to be the case for some time, now."

 

"Simon? Are you serious?" Millianna asked in a disbelieving tone.

 

"I am." Simon replied. "Jellal has changed ever since that day. On top of that, the Erza I know would have never abandoned us the way Jellal said she did."

 

Once again, Millianna fell silent. She also agreed with Simon's thoughts on the matter. The Erza she knew would never abandon her friends. She even started a rebellion against the cultists to save Jellal back then. So, why did she leave like that? That was a question she had been asking herself for years.

 

"There's a simple way to find out, Doll." Wally, who had also woken up, said. "We just go back and ask Jellal, see?"

 

"Indeed." Simon said, nodding in agreement. 

 

"And what makes you think we'll just let you go?" Cana asked with her arms crossed under her chest. "As far as the law goes, you four are dark wizards, Zeref cultists."

 

Cana's declaration brought the three's attention to her.

 

"You attacked us in the middle of a crowded casino." Cana continued. "You don't just walk away Scott-free for that."

 

"And they won't." Erza said, standing from her kneeling position next to Millianna.

 

As she stood, Erza [Requipped] out of her evening gown and into her [Heart Kruez Armor].

 

"Because I will be accompanying them back to the tower." Erza said resolutely. "I need to know why Jellal changed as well. But more importantly, that tower cannot be allowed to exist."

 

"Erza, are you serious?" Cana asked incredulously. "You're going to go with them? The people who were sent here to kidnap you? Are you trying to make their jobs easy, or something?"

 

"Cana, I know you're worried about me, but I have to go." Erza replied. "I have questions that I need answers to."

 

"You're right, I am worried." Cana said. Then, she continued in an exasperated tone while placing the back of her left hand on her forehead. "I'm worried for your intelligence. I mean, seriously... What kind of Stockholm Syndrome shit is this? You weren't even captured."

 

Like that, the two continued to argue with Cana trying to explain to Erza why going with them was a bad idea and Erza trying to... Well... simply repeating that she needed to go and that she had questions that needed to be answered.

 

Meanwhile, Ultear could only sigh at the act Cana and Erza were putting on. Then, she turned to Alfonzo and Elicia after realizing that they had been quiet for a while.

 

"Alfonzo, Elicia, are you o---" Ultear started to ask until she saw Alfonzo and Elicia's expressions. "Uh... are you two... alright?"

 

At that moment, Ultear's shaky tone drew the attention of the five, with Shô still unconscious thanks to Alfonzo's rather heavy handed retaliation. And what they saw made all of them recoil a bit.

 

Currently, Alfonzo and Elicia were smiling widely with equal parts glee and malice in their smiles, creating quite the jarring contrast.

 

"Seriously, are you two alright?" Cana asked. "Those smiles are kinda scary."

 

"Yeah, we're great." Elicia replied. "Better than great, in fact."

 

"Oh... Okay... That's good." Cana replied. "But why are you two smiling like that."

 

"Yeah, you look like you're really happy." Ultear added. "Happily, about to inflict violence on someone."

 

"Ultear, you're so perceptive." Alfonzo said, his smile widening. "That's exactly what these smiles mean."

 

"But why?" Erza asked. "Did my story anger the two of you so much?"

 

"That's part of it." Elicia replied. "But not all of it."

 

"What do you mean?" Cana asked, not following.

 

Meanwhile, Simon, Wally, and Millianna all felt a chill run up their spines after seeing those unhinged smiles.

 

"We told you that our parents were killed by dark wizards, right?" Alfonzo asked.

 

"yeah, that's right." Cana replied.

 

"And we mentioned that those dark wizards were Zeref cultists, too, right?" Elicia asked.

 

"Yeah, I rememb---" Ultear began to reply before connecting the dots.

 

"Looks like Ultear figured it out." Elicia said with a happy smile.

 

A moment later, everyone else involved in the conversation also figured out what Alfonzo and Elicia were getting at.

 

"Those Zeref cultists abducted everyone in our village and killed our parents in the name of building the Tower of Heaven." Alfonzo said, revealing the reason for their smiles. "And now, we have a ticket straight to that mother fucking tower. It's too bad that all the cultists died during the rebellion, though."

 

"What makes you think we would take you to the tower?" Wally asked, slightly intimidated by Alfonzo's aura at the moment.

 

"And what made you think we were making a request?" Elicia asked coldly. "And even if you don't, we can always accompany Erza on her trip there, right?"

 

As she asked her question, Elicia smiled in Erza's direction. However, the smile was telling Erza something very important.

 

'Refusal is not an option.' Erza thought to herself after seeing Elicia's smile. 'Not that I would have refused, anyway. That tower needs to be destroyed. And Alfonzo's destructive power should be more than enough to do so.'

 

Seeing Erza nod in acknowledgement, Elicia turned back to Wally with a smug smile.

 

"See, we don't need your help." Elicia said, irritating Wally to know end.

 

"I guess we should go get changed out of these dresses." Ultear said while shaking her head with a wry smile on her face. "*Sigh* This was supposed to be a vacation. Instead, we're going off to fight dark wizards. We might as well have stayed in Magnolia."

 

"Don't say that, Ultear." Cana said with a smile while resting her arm on Ultear's shoulder. Then, she drew near to Ultear's ear and whispered. "If we're quick about this, we could be back here by tomorrow night. Then, we'd be able to have a little fun in that great big bed in our room."

 

"*Sigh* I'm kind of ashamed of myself for getting tempted so easily." Ultear replied with a smile. "Alright, let's get going."

 

"I saw that coming." Elicia said with a giggle after watching Cana and Ultear's interaction. "Anyway, we should get changed, too, Fonzie."

 

"Yeah, let's go." Alfonzo replied with a nod. "We need to rent a ship, too. I don't wanna deplete my magic power on the way there."

 

Like that, the Fairy Tail wizards dragged the captured wizards from the Tower of Heaven along with them to their suite. Then, they locked the four of them in a bathroom while they changed clothes. After that, they went to inform the authorities of what happened and what they were about to do. Finally, after being provided a boat free of charge, they set sail to the unnamed island off the coast of the Kingdom of Caelum just before midnight.


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