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章節 142: Finding Evidence of the Ultimate Despair

Earth land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, Galuna Island.

July, x784.

As Alfonzo annihilated the centipedes around the temple, the sound of the King Centipede's screech echoed over all of Galuna Island shortly afterward. Realizing that there would be an influx of enraged centipedes making their way to his location, he wasted no time entering the cave he and Elicia observed earlier in the day.

*Click!* *Clack!* *Click!* *Clack!*

However, before he could take more than ten steps inside the cave, Alfonzo heard the sound of insect legs scurrying across the walls, ceiling, and floor of the cave. And as luck would have it they were getting closer.

"Just my luck…" Alfonzo muttered. "There really were more of them in the cave."

Dashing forward, Alfonzo created a clump of mithril that spread into thin tendrils and snaked across the surfaces of the cave. Then, once the tendrils reached the approaching centipedes, he grabbed their origin point and flared his magic power.

"[Electromagnetism Magic: Electrified Wire]." Alfonzo chanted as a current of electricity was sent into the mithril.

*Screech!*

A moment later, a symphony of pain filled screeches echoed through the cave as the scent of burning centipede flesh wafted through the air.

"Ugh! I need to come up with a better way to kill these things." Alfonzo muttered as he dashed past the incapacitated centipedes.

Realizing that most of the centipedes were dead, Alfonzo took it upon himself to end the suffering of hose unlucky few to survive by creating and throwing kunai through their heads.

Meanwhile, back at the village, Elicia, Ultear, and Erza regrouped with the defenders of the village as they watched the remaining centipedes rush back toward the temple.

"This could be bad, right?" Elicia asked as she listened to the centipede's footsteps grow more distant. "I mean, there were still a couple thousand of them left. What if they show up while Fonzie is fighting the boss?"

"Well, there's an easy solution to that problem." Ultear said with a smile.

"Easy?" Elicia asked curiously.

"We just follow them and thin the numbers." Ultear replied. "Easy, right?"

"I guess you're right." Elicia said with a smile. Then, her expression became serious as she continued. "But we can't leave the village unprotected."

"One of us should stay here, then." Erza said. "The question is, how do we decide?"

After Erza asked her question, before she or Ultear could react, Elicia shot her threads toward the tree line. Then, once they were wrapped firmly around a branch, she retracted them, pulling herself toward the tree at high-speed.

"You two can decide!" Elicia shouted as she flew through the air. "I'll go and start slowing down the centipedes."

Looking at Elicia's figure soaring off into the distance, Ultear and Erza looked on in surprise. Then, Erza wore a stern expression as she rebuked Elicia.

"We should be discussing this together, Elicia!" Erza shouted. Then, she looked in Ultear's direction for support.

However, before Erza could open her mouth to speak again, she felt a gust of cold air. On top of that, Ultear was nowhere to be seen.

Looking back toward the forest, Erza saw a path of ice leading from the top of the wall toward the tree line. In the middle of the path, sliding toward the trees, was Ultear with her cape billowing behind her.

"I'll make sure Elicia doesn't get into trouble." Ultear shouted without turning around. "You stay here and make sure the village stays safe!"

Watching Ultear disappear among the trees, Erza felt her annoyance rising. Her plan was to play Rock-Paper-Scissors to decide who would stay behind. With her dynamic vision and strong hand-eye coordination, Erza was certain that she would be one of the two who went to support Alfonzo.

Unfortunately, Elicia and Ultear had gotten to know her too well over the past eight years or so. So, they moved preemptively to gain their spots in the upcoming fight.

"Those girls…" Erza muttered in annoyance as she stomped her foot.

"*Boom!*

Unfortunately, Erza had never been too good at regulating her strength in the best of times. So, in her agitated state, her stomp cracked the wall from where she stood to its base.

"Ahh! What have you done?" Moka shouted after seeing the state of the wall. "Not only have you been useless in destroying the moon since you got here, but you've also even destroyed the wall! I'll complain to the Magic Council for this!"

Hearing that a complaint would be lodged to the Magic Council, Erza sobered up from her anger rather quickly. Then, she [Requipped] into construction attire consisting of a baggy grey jumpsuit whose top was tied around her waist, a white tank top that emphasized her large breasts, a pair of brown work boots, grey work gloves, and a yellow hard hat.

"You don't have to do that." Erza said with a flattering smile. "I'll get right to fixing the crack in the wall."

Then, without waiting for a response, Erza jumped off the wall and approached the rocks and trees that had been damaged by the battle from before to gather the materials needed to fix the wall. All the while, she kept her [Magic Power Detection] active just in case more centipedes showed up.

Back in the cave, Alfonzo had finally reached the cavern where Deliora would have been placed in the canon. However, he did not enter immediately. Instead, he hid at the entrance and spread his [Magic Power Detection] to investigate the cavern.

'There's only one magic power signature.' Alfonzo muttered. 'But why can I hear someone speaking? Can this Centipede King speak the human tongue?'

Using his control over the EM spectrum, Alfonzo used X-rays to see through the walls of the cave. When he looked in the direction of the magic power source he could feel, he was thoroughly surprised.

On top of seeing a nearly thirty-three foot (10 m) long centipede with large mandibles and spikes dotting its carapace, Alfonzo also noticed a small bear sitting on its head and throwing a tantrum.

'Is that… Monokuma?' Alfonzo thought in confusion. A moment later, however, his expression turned solemn. 'If that evil little teddy bear is here, does that mean she's here, too? Fuck! This world is so fucking weird. It's already dangerous enough with all the dark guilds, demons, dragons, and gods running around. Now I gotta deal with some crazy bitch hell bent on bringing the world despair, too?'

After raging internally for a few seconds, Alfonzo finally calmed down. Then, he started assessing the situation.

'Okay, cant be too rash now that I know the Ultimate Despair is in this world.' Alfonzo thought to himself. 'Before I start fighting that big mother fucker, I gotta get rid of Monokuma without being detected. I'm more than certain that it has all sorts of nasty gadgets in it. On top of that, Junko is probably connected to it in some way, knowing everything that goes on around it.'

A few seconds later, the King Centipede started moving around restlessly. Though Alfonzo did not know why, exactly, he had a pretty good guess. He already knew that the centipedes attacking the village would be coming back to the cave sooner or later. But knowing his fiancées, he also knew there was no way that they would let them all retreat without a problem.

Fortunately, the King Centipede's restlessness gave Alfonzo the perfect opportunity to finish off the bear without being seen.

"Damn it! Would you stop all that blasted whimpering!" The strange little bear, Monokuma shouted as the centipede started twisting its body and whimpering at the loss of its children. "And stop all that moving around It's so annoying! Just sit still like a good piece of living---."

As soon as the King Centipede turned its body so that Monokuma was facing away from the cave leading into the cavern, Alfonzo poked his head and left arm around he corner and took aim. Then, he created a marble sized piece of heat resistant metal while simultaneously running an electric current on his arm.

"Electromagnetism Magic: Railgun]." Alfonzo chanted quietly.

*Boom!*

Then, as soon as the marble came in contact with Alfonzo's finger that was pointed at Monokuma, it was fired at six times the speed of sound, destroying the bear and punching a whole in the cavern that reached the outside before the sonic boom sounded.

*Screech!*

At the same time, the King Centipede screeched in pain. Even though it wasn't hit directly by the projectile, the super-heated air caused by the projectile's speed was enough to melt its carapace and burn the flesh underneath.

A moment later, after confirming that there were only scraps of Monokuma left after he was hit with his [Railgun], Alfonzo finally stepped into the cavern.

"The girls really did me a favor." Alfonzo said with a smile. "if they hadn't been attacking the returning centipedes, this big son of a bitch probably would have smelled me. No, it probably did smell me, but it was so distressed by its dying brethren that it probably didn't pay me any mind."

While Alfonzo thought aloud about why his assassination attempt on Monokuma went off so smoothly, the King Centipede finally regained its bearings. Then, after realizing that the hateful little bear was no longer sitting on top of its head, it raised its head and screeched once again.

"I'm no expert in bug noises, but that sounded like it was… Happy?" Alfonzo mused aloud. "Well, I'd be happy to get rid of such a cancerous tumor, too."

A moment later, after venting its emotions, the King Centipede finally turned its head in Alfonzo's direction. Although this particular centipede must have come from a species that had no eyes, Alfonzo could feel the malice it held for him.

"Come on now, Big Guy. Do you really wanna do this?" Alfonzo asked, not expecting an answer. "I mean, I just got rid of that tumor on your head. Sure, I had to burn off par of your shell to do it, but I would think that would be an acceptable sacrifice, right?"

Ignoring Alfonzo's words, the King Centipede charged towards Alfonzo much faster than any centipede before it. In little more than the blink of an eye, it appeared in front of Alfonzo with its mandibles closing towards Alfonzo's neck.

*Snap!*

Reacting quickly, Alfonzo ducked under the lethal attack. Then, rebounding upward, Alfonzo slammed his fist into the bottom of the Centipede's head with electricity wrapping it.

"[Electromagnetism Magic: Stun Gun]." Alfonzo chanted as his fist struck the King Centipede.

Recoiling from the impact, the King Centipede was unable to screech due to the electricity causing its body to lock up momentarily. Meanwhile, Alfonzo fired the harpoon from his left gauntlet into a wall. Then, once it was pierced into the wall, he retracted the metal rope and pulled himself from in front of the King Centipede.

"Damn, that son of a bitch is fast." Alfonzo grumbled after landing next to the wall. "Still, I'm fast enough to react. But the question is, how do I kill it? I really don't want to fill this cavern with the smell of cooked bug."

With that, Alfonzo created and discarded many battle plans while the centipede regained its bearings. Then, just as the King Centipede shook its head to dispel the last of the electricity running through its body, Alfonzo decided he would just beat it to death.

"It's not like I can use anything overly destructive, anyway." Alfonzo said with a shrug. "If I'm not careful, I could collapse the cavern and bring the whole temple down on top of myself."

With that decision made, Alfonzo created a pair of sharp tipped Eskrima sticks out of a highly conductive metal. Then, he rushed toward the King Centipede.

In response, the King Centipede swung its tail, whose danger was amplified by the many sharp tipped legs that ran along the sides of its body, at Alfonzo. However, Alfonzo was able to dodge the sharp legs and the tail by a paper thin margin. Then, he stabbed the stick in his left hand into the joint of one of he legs that passed by.

After the attack sailed by, Alfonzo continued his charge toward the King Centipede. However, it did something none of the other centipedes had done, once again.

Opening its mandibles wide, the King Centipede fired a foul smelling liquid at Alfonzo. Caught by surprise, Alfonzo did not have enough time to dodge the spray. However, he was able to react in time, nonetheless.

"[Metal Magic: Watershed Shielding]." Alfonzo chanted as a wedge shaped metal shield appeared between him and the incoming attack.

As soon as the liquid made contact with the shield, which was made out of the most corrosion resistant metal Alfonzo had at his disposal, a sizzling sound could be heard. At the same time, because the shield was created in a wedge shape, much of the liquid was diverted to the sides.

"A corrosive poison, why am I not surprised." Alfonzo muttered as he shot one of his harpoons toward the ceiling and pulled himself up.

*Bang!* *Bang!*

Just after Alfonzo was halfway between the floor and the ceiling of the cavern the King Centipede slammed its head into the [Watershed Shield], throwing it backward through Alfonzo's previous position before it smashed into the cavern wall.

Meanwhile, Alfonzo, who was now hanging above the King Centipede's head, let himself fall while elongating the spiked stick in his right hand into a spear.

Intending to increase the speed of his descent with his [Electromagnetism Magic], Alfonzo was forced to change his plans when the King Centipede raised its head and opened its mandibles again.

"Shit!" Alfonzo cursed as he pulled the spear back in a throwing position. "[Electromagnetism Magic: Lightning Enhancement]."

Then, before the King Centipede could spew its poison, Alfonzo enhanced his body with electricity and threw the spear at the opening where the King Centipede released its poison. Then, without waiting to see if his attack landed, Alfonzo fired his harpoon for a third time and pulled himself to safety.

*Screech!*

The King Centipede screeched in pain as it began swinging its head wildly and releasing its poison to dissolve the spear. However, before it could accomplish its goal, Alfonzo reached the wall he pulled himself to. Then, with his [Lightning Enhancement] still active, he arrived feet first and pushed off with all his strength, launching himself at the King Centipede.

Using [Electromagnetism Magic] to subtly adjust his course through the air and avoid the flailing King Centipede, Alfonzo reached the shaft of the spear while only receiving a few cuts on his arms and torso.

"Game over." Alfonzo muttered as he clutched the spear shaft and stared into the King Centipede's face.

Without using a spell, Alfonzo simply generated as much electricity as he could and channeled it into the metal spear.

The effects were immediate as the King Centipede started convulsing as soon as the electric current entered its body. The leg where the first spike was stabbed even exploded when the current reached the spike.

Eventually, the King Centipede could no longer hold itself upright, slamming to the ground. Unfortunately, as Alfonzo was still holding the spear, he was also slammed to the ground with it. But since he could still feel its magic power, through [Magic power Detection], he had no intention of stopping or letting go.

Around thirty seconds later, Alfonzo could no longer feel the king Centipede's magic power. On top of that, it had ceased all movement, save the occasional involuntary twitch due to the electricity flowing through its body.

"Damn it…. I landed on my hip." Alfonzo groaned as he dispelled the spear and slowly stumbled to his feet. "That really fucking hurt."

Rubbing his hip after getting to his feet, Alfonzo looked in the direction of the cave leading to the surface.

"They're probably still fighting the minions." Alfonzo muttered. "I'd better go help them so we can end this quest and go home."


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章節 143: Returning to the Village

Earth Land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, Galuna Island.

July, x784.

While Erza was doing her best to repair the village walls quickly, and Alfonzo was trekking through the caves under the temple, Elicia and Ultear were rushing through the forest in the hopes of cutting off the centipedes that were rushing back to their lair.

"[Ice-Make: Rampart]." Ultear chanted as she was sliding toward the centipedes from behind.

*Bang!* *Crack!*

A moment later, a large castle wall created completely from ice appeared in front of the fastest of the centipedes, a twenty-six foot (8 m) long centipede, causing it to rush headfirst into the wall, cracking it in the process.

Stunned from the sudden impact, the large centipede did not even try to destroy the wall blocking its way. Instead, it immediately started trying to burrow into the ground. Unfortunately for it, Ultear had already expected that outcome.

"[Ice-Make: Floor]." Ultear chanted for a second time, freezing the ground all the centipedes stood on in an instant.

*Bang!* *Crack!*

Once again, the large centipede slammed its head into thick ice. After regaining its bearings once again, it finally turned back toward the ones who had been following it and its brethren since they left the village. This started a chain reaction as the rest of the thousands of centipedes also turned back towards Elicia and Ultear.

"Oh, they're not igging us anymore." Elicia said with a smile. "Taking pot shots at them from behind just didn't feel right. Now, we can slaughter them from up front."

"Although you're not wrong." Ultear said, not taking her eyes off the horde of centipedes. "But you're definitely not as innocent as you seem."

"Anyway, let's get to work." Elicia said, ignoring Ultear's character assessment. Then, she raised her hands as she chanted. "[Thread Magic: Lashing Threads]."

Moving forward toward the centipedes, Elicia swung her arms, using her threads as whips. However, instead of simply lashing the centipedes, her threads were cutting through them like a hot knife through butter.

Like she had done while defending the village, Elicia was forcing her threads to vibrate at a high frequency. Unfortunately, this used up much more magic power than usual. So, instead of keeping up the vibration like she did back at the village, she was starting and stopping it when her threads were in contact with a centipede.

Watching Elicia's display from behind, Ultear could not help but marvel at her skill.

'She's clearly running on fumes.' Ultear muttered internally. 'Well, fumes might be a bit of an over exaggeration. But still, she's low on magic power. Her battlefield awareness must be incredible. There's no way she can see all the centipedes around her considering how densely they are packed. Still, I haven't seen her threads simply bounce off of any of them. Even if there are other centipedes between her and the ones she's cutting down.'

Ultear was pulled from her internal musing when she felt a few of the centipedes drawing near to her. Then, she performed her usual hand gestures while narrowing her eyes at the incoming attackers.

"[Ice-Make: Gatling Gun]." Ultear chanted.

In the next instant, a six-barrel gatling gun made completely from ice started materializing next to Ultear's right hip. Then, once it was formed, Ultear's hands took hold of it and started its mechanisms. A moment later, the six barrels started rotating at high speed.

*Tat!* *Tat!* *Tat!* *Tat!* *Tat!*

*Screech!*

Moments later, small ice projectiles were tearing through the centipedes and freezing their blood before it could flow out. Meanwhile, a large number of centipedes were screeching in pain as parts of their bodies were blown apart by the high-speed projectiles.

'I'm glad I started practicing [Static Ice-Make] after I saw some of the designs Alfonzo came up with for magic guns.' Ultear mused. 'But after seeing this thing in action, I can understand why Master Goldstein wouldn't allow him to sell something like this on the market. Sure its weight is too much for the average person to use comfortably, but other than that, it's a killing machine.'

On the other hand, Elicia was moving acrobatically as she avoided the attacks of the centipedes and slashed them apart with her vibrating threads. Unfortunately, her magic power was draining quickly.

On top of having to make her threads vibrate to do any real damage to the centipedes' carapaces, she had to continuously create more threads every time they came in contact with the centipede's corrosive blood.

"*Pant* This is working, *Pant* but definitely not fast enough." Elicia said through ragged breaths. "I'll have to do something bigger. But this will probably drain me pretty close to dry."

Looking back at Ultear, Elicia could only smile wryly as she put her back against the ice wall Ultear created earlier..

"She looks like a much cuter HW Guy from TFC when she carries that gatling gun around." Elicia muttered as she spread her hands to either side. "She should be able to handle the rest. Still, I'll thin the numbers a little. [Thread Magic: Cat's Cradle Calamity]."

In the next instant, Threads ejected from Elicia's hands. Then, with the minute movements of her fingers, they started moving to do cat's cradle. However, the scale was massive. Spreading out In a semi-circle from Elicia's position, all the threads were vibrating at the highest frequency Elicia could manage with her remaining magic power.

As the forms of the cat's cradle changed, the centipedes they passed through were cut into irregular pieces. However, they did not fall apart immediately. Instead, they all froze in place until the spell ran its course.

Then, once a large area of the battlefield was cleared by Elicia's spell, and she used the last of her magic power to pull herself up to the top of the [Ice Rampart], all the centipedes in Elicia's range fell apart like 3D jigsaw puzzles.

"Well, that went about as good as I thought it would." Elicia said with a weak smile from atop the ice wall. "The rest is up to you now Ult.--- Whoa!"

Before Elicia could finish her sentence, the fatigue from using up nearly all of her magic power hit her, causing her to stumble forward. Unfortunately, she was standing pretty close to the edge of the wall and started falling back to the ground.

"Elicia!" Ultear screamed as she saw Elicia fall from the wall.

Just before Ultear could drop the gatling gun, she saw purple sparks of electricity appear around Elicia. Then, she watched as Elicia floated back to the top of the wall. Standing at Elicia's landing point was the man they came to support, Alfonzo.

"*Sigh* She's alright." Ultear said in a relieved tone. Then, she turned her attention back to the centipedes. "Now, you've all got to go."

As Ultear started shooting at the centipedes once again, Alfonzo caught Elicia in his arms.

"That was pretty reckless." Alfonzo said in a reprimanding tone with a gentle smile on his face. "You know better than to use up that much of your magic power on a chaotic battlefield, Lici."

"*Sigh* If I were alone, I wouldn't have." Elicia replied, nuzzling her had against Alfonzo's neck with a smile on her face. "But I was with Ultear, I knew she could handle the rest. Besides, I got myself out of harms way at the end."

"And almost fell headfirst to your death because of carelessness." Alfonzo reprimanded. "I know that Ultear could have saved you. But that would have created an opening."

"*Sigh* I know." Elicia said, hanging her head. "I didn't think things all the way through. And I should have just sat down and started recovering magic power once I was off the battlefield… Sorry for making you worry."

"*Sigh* Just be more careful in the future." Alfonzo said, his tone softening significantly.

"I will." Elicia replied with a nod. Then, she smiled brightly and kissed Alfonzo on the cheek. "Thanks for saving me, Fonzie."

"Don't mention it." Alfonzo replied. "Now, let me help Ultear deal with the rest of the vermin."

With that, Alfonzo sat Elicia down on the top of the wall. Then, he overlooked the battlefield. Seeing a few holes beyond the coverage area of Ultear's [Ice Floor], Alfonzo could only click his tongue.

Even though they could technically leave immediately after reporting to the villagers that the King Centipede was dead, it would leave a bad taste in his mouth to let the rest of the centipedes run wild on the island.

"We can think about that after we get a good night's sleep." Alfonzo muttered to himself as he raised his hands. "[Metal Magic: Bullet Storm]."

A moment later, bullet shaped chunks of metal appeared above all the remaining centipedes. Then, they started to spin before falling toward all the designated targets.

With bullets of ice and metal peppering them from ground level and above simultaneously, it took less than ten minutes to finish off the rest of the centipedes on the battlefield. As for the ones who escaped, Alfonzo had a good idea where he could find them. Still, now was not the time to go on a crusade to exterminate the rest of the centipedes. Instead, it was time to get some rest.

So, once all the centipedes were killed, Alfonzo took Elicia into his arms again. Then, he floated off the top of the ice wall and landed next to Ultear.

"You've got cuts all over and you're covered in blood." Ultear said as she looked at Alfonzo with concern.

"It's not that bad." Alfonzo replied with a smile. "The Techno Organic Metal is already working to close up all my wounds. And since none of them were all that deep, I'll be good as new in no time."

"I'm surprised you even let it get that close to do this much damage." Elicia said, finally noticing how beat up Alfonzo was after Ultear mentioned it. "I mean, you hate bugs so much."

"Well, there were two reasons for that, actually." Alfonzo replied with awry smile. "First, it was fast. I mean, way faster than anything that big had any right to be. And second, I was afraid of collapsing the cave if I used any attacks that were too big."

'I mean, that little [Railgun] shook the whole cave when it hit the wall…' Alfonzo thought to himself. 'I can only imagine if I used anything big enough to kill a thirty-three foot (10 m) long bug in one shot.'

"Anyway, why don't you hop on my back, Ultear?" Alfonzo asked with a smile. "I'll fly us all back to the village."

"Are you sure?" Ultear asked with concern. "You fought the king of the centipedes not too long ago. Do you have enough magic power?"

"You don't have to worry about that." Alfonzo replied. "If I were going to make the two of you float with my magic too, that might be a bit taxing. But I'll only be using it on myself. While I'll be using my physical strength to carry the two of you."

"If you say so." Ultear said, still sounding a bit concerned. Still, she got behind Alfonzo, hopped up and wrapped her arms around his neck and her legs around his waist. Then, she rested her chin on his right shoulder before continuing. "But if it gets to be too much, don't push yourself. I'm not so exhausted that I can't walk."

"Don't worry, I won't." Alfonzo replied with a smile.

Turning his head to the right, Alfonzo gave Ultear a quick peck on the cheek. Then, he floated off the ground and started flying back toward the village.

About twenty minutes later, Alfonzo, Elicia, and Ultear arrived at the tree line around the village. When they did, however, they were totally flabbergasted.

"We've only been gone for an hour or so." Ultear said in an exasperated tone. "How did she manage to damage the wall by that much?"

When Erza first started repairing the crack in the wall she created, everything was going smoothly. However, as previously mentioned, Erza was not the best at controlling her superhuman strength. So, while trying to fit the materials in place, she ended up damaging the cracked wall even more, widening the damaged area of the wall by at least three times.

"In hindsight, it probably wasn't the best idea to leave the most destructive of us to guard the village alone." Elicia said with a wry smile.

"Says the first one to leave." Ultear jabbed.

"I was worried about Fonzie." Elicia said in her own defense.

"*Sigh* You two can decide whose fault it is later." Alfonzo said with a wry smile. "Right now, we should stop Erza from helping before she destroys the entire wall."

Agreeing with Alfonzo's statement, Elicia and Ultear nodded their heads as Alfonzo flew towards the base of the wall where Erza was doing her best to fix the wall. Unfortunately, she was only making the situation worse as time went by.


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