4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
While I like the premise, I feel like the chapters could be a bit longer. Tobi Uzumaki is a nice name lol. Keep updating dude, I wanna read more.
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Hello readers, I am extremely excited to notify you that I have started my own novel now, check out "The Hero's POV". Thank you eternally.....
While I like the premise, I feel like the chapters could be a bit longer. Tobi Uzumaki is a nice name lol. Keep updating dude, I wanna read more.
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Hello readers, I am extremely excited to notify you that I have started my own novel now, check out "The Hero's POV". Thank you eternally.....