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Pretty peak. Honest took me by surprise just how amazing well executed this masterpiece was
The beginning chapters are where one hooks the reader and it's applaudable how well-written and intriguing these chapters are. They give an insight into the backstory of the main lead, his struggles and the decision he needed to make. The grammar and writing style are impeccable with no mistakes whatsoever. The character designs are interesting with a hint of humour added to them. Overall, it's a splendid read. Wishing the author best of luck ✌️
Update rate is awesome, and the MC seems rather likable. Will definitely be reading more!
The story has been amazing so far! The introduction was very well written, the take on the magic system is really interesting, the updates have been frequent, and the grammar has been great! I love the way the author has developed the characters and the world while writing this story, and hope I will one day see the end of this story and until then I will continue supporting the author!
After many years of walking in the desert of writing that could make my eyes bleed, I finally stumbled upon an author who doesn't mix up your and you're. But that's not all which makes a 5 stars story. There's plot, characters, etc etc. And they are all great, too! I especially like the setting. Magic and demons and other such stuff have been done hundreds of times, but author actually adds something fresh to this all. Would recommend.
Firstly, I'd like to applaud the author for writing such a beginning. It was one of the most interesting I've seen in a while.It gets you hooked as soon as you start reading.The grammar is impeccable as well.The main character seems to be a very intelligent dude who's not aware of his own talents, cliché, but I like that.The world building and plot are meticulously constructed Also, the naming sense awed me, I want that type of ability too, as I won't ever name a character Kaspersky again.All in all, a worth novel to read for passing your time, so instead of reading this, go read the chapters!Peace
Reviewed as of chapter 12: The world building is plentiful. It’s diverse and the world feels real. The gods and groups in it dont feel so carelessly made up. great start. Grammatically it’s nearly impeccable. One small error in 12 chaps. The words flow well and I’m honestly entranced by the authors wide vocabulary. Updating stability is great. Nothing else needs to be said. Story dev is pretty good but feels sorta rushed. Could be my fault as the reader but I feel like more should be let on as to why our Mc was sought out by this demon lord. It all feels a little rushed. We also haven’t been told what he’s supposed to do as the choosen one of his new dark god. Character development Is great but designe is sorta lacklustre. Perhaps I missed it but do not know hair colour, body shape, or eye colour yet. Once again I may have missed it. Overall great read. Worth the time to get through it all. Can’t wait to read more!
The grammar is good and the world building is interesting. The author recently started uploading two chapters a day as well.
I have finished the first ten chapters and can already tell how excellent this novel will be. Readers want this, and I can say that it gets you hooked as soon as you begin. I am anxious to see how this story will evolve. There are few grammar errors and the pacing is decent. I recommend giving this one a try.
This novel has forthwith and henceforth gained the stamp of Sloth's approval. Please give it a read, you won't regret it! Now then, to bypass the limit of the character, here's an egg and rice recipe: - wash some rice - Crack some eggs open - Boil the rice - Pour the egg over the boiled rice - I guess that's it, I'm not asian, I don't know rice or egg
Absolutely love it so far but question for the author? Will this be a romance or have romance elements and if so, is this going to be a Haerm?
Pretty peak. Honest took me by surprise just how amazing well executed this masterpiece was
The beginning chapters are where one hooks the reader and it's applaudable how well-written and intriguing these chapters are. They give an insight into the backstory of the main lead, his struggles and the decision he needed to make. The grammar and writing style are impeccable with no mistakes whatsoever. The character designs are interesting with a hint of humour added to them. Overall, it's a splendid read. Wishing the author best of luck ✌️
Update rate is awesome, and the MC seems rather likable. Will definitely be reading more!
The story has been amazing so far! The introduction was very well written, the take on the magic system is really interesting, the updates have been frequent, and the grammar has been great! I love the way the author has developed the characters and the world while writing this story, and hope I will one day see the end of this story and until then I will continue supporting the author!
After many years of walking in the desert of writing that could make my eyes bleed, I finally stumbled upon an author who doesn't mix up your and you're. But that's not all which makes a 5 stars story. There's plot, characters, etc etc. And they are all great, too! I especially like the setting. Magic and demons and other such stuff have been done hundreds of times, but author actually adds something fresh to this all. Would recommend.
Firstly, I'd like to applaud the author for writing such a beginning. It was one of the most interesting I've seen in a while.It gets you hooked as soon as you start reading.The grammar is impeccable as well.The main character seems to be a very intelligent dude who's not aware of his own talents, cliché, but I like that.The world building and plot are meticulously constructed Also, the naming sense awed me, I want that type of ability too, as I won't ever name a character Kaspersky again.All in all, a worth novel to read for passing your time, so instead of reading this, go read the chapters!Peace
Reviewed as of chapter 12: The world building is plentiful. It’s diverse and the world feels real. The gods and groups in it dont feel so carelessly made up. great start. Grammatically it’s nearly impeccable. One small error in 12 chaps. The words flow well and I’m honestly entranced by the authors wide vocabulary. Updating stability is great. Nothing else needs to be said. Story dev is pretty good but feels sorta rushed. Could be my fault as the reader but I feel like more should be let on as to why our Mc was sought out by this demon lord. It all feels a little rushed. We also haven’t been told what he’s supposed to do as the choosen one of his new dark god. Character development Is great but designe is sorta lacklustre. Perhaps I missed it but do not know hair colour, body shape, or eye colour yet. Once again I may have missed it. Overall great read. Worth the time to get through it all. Can’t wait to read more!
The grammar is good and the world building is interesting. The author recently started uploading two chapters a day as well.
I have finished the first ten chapters and can already tell how excellent this novel will be. Readers want this, and I can say that it gets you hooked as soon as you begin. I am anxious to see how this story will evolve. There are few grammar errors and the pacing is decent. I recommend giving this one a try.
This novel has forthwith and henceforth gained the stamp of Sloth's approval. Please give it a read, you won't regret it! Now then, to bypass the limit of the character, here's an egg and rice recipe: - wash some rice - Crack some eggs open - Boil the rice - Pour the egg over the boiled rice - I guess that's it, I'm not asian, I don't know rice or egg
Absolutely love it so far but question for the author? Will this be a romance or have romance elements and if so, is this going to be a Haerm?