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摘要
This fanfic is merely wish fulfillment. Alex, a re-embodied soul, received three wishes from a cosmic entity. Nothing in Highschool DxD belongs to me, I'm only the owner of my Oc. This is just a fanfic, any resemblance to reality is purely coincidental.
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
8評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
THIS IS SO BAD THAT ITS ALMOST FUNNY, sure its wish fulfillment but COME ON!!! must you try to shrink our brain cells?? I wish to say more but I'd rather do something else. As a person that likes Annhilation maker and Ban, I just could not. He even spelt Ban's name wrong too. The only thing that may be good might be the updating stability, but that would probably make it bad in the long, author if your reading this, please restart this novel seriously, you have potential to make a masterpiece!!!!
Yo, i just see you write Dxd fic Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine.
i like the story so far (chapter 6) but there are some glaring flaws 1st of all, author-san sometimes don't mark dialogs, they are also incredibly rushed 2nd, author-san made his rias the spoiled and lazy rias and still added her to the harem without fixing her personality 3rd, the story itself feels very rushed, with mc getting 2 girlfriends by the end of day 1! 4th, mc's personality, the guy got mad for recieving a "no" from akeno on day 2 and considered brainwashing her! bro, chill!!! i complained a lot, but i will say again, i am enjoying the overall story, so don't stone me for this pls
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Jesus Christ, I recommend not reading it if you don't want to have a brain aneurysm, because everything about this story is bad. Even a child can write better. The author must be five or six years old, it's not possible...