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I have only good things to say about this fic, in first place a protagonist that is not a maniacal "monster" for no good reason, he don't treat his life as a book or show, or something equally pathetic, but at the same time he is in no way a pushover, one of the most notable things about this author in general is the way he build characters, many harem stories fall in the pitfall of collecting hollow characters, every relevant woman in this story have their own personalitiy and motive, no one fells two dimensional, some characters are simply delusional/stupid(I'm looking at you Daemon) something that is completely realistic(real life never lack dumb people), this is actualy one of the few contexts were a harem actualy makes sense. So, good job and thanks for your effort, don't let any "trolls" desmotivate you, keep going and good luck.
The best story about the world of ASOIAF that I've ever read, the author builds a creative story and expands the world in a masterful way. I'm really looking forward to the sequel and I have no doubt that it will be as good as this one. Thank you for this wonderful work, Author.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. In truth Story was good
Well where to start, the story itself is of course a Game of thrones reincarnation story those can usually go either way, but this lovely author has pretty much gotten it down to a tea across their three different GoT stories that all revolve around a similar concept, that being reincarnation. Overall the story itself is amazing and definitely a fun read with lots of funny moments and brings some great worlds building along with diving into an interesting way in which deities might work on the world of planetos. At the end of the day authors who put their metophorical heart out there with what they write and have the guts to stick it out and finish the books they start are people I highly respect as it isn’t easy, you will be criticized and that can really effect the quality of one’s work but I love the author and I love this story so I would absolutely recommend reading this if you’re looking for an interesting GoT story set after the dance of the dragons but before the main point of Game of thrones. 🙂
This book has flaws a lot of them something that I disklike about this fanfic is that the Author has an obsession with the mc having kids. Going into this story I saw the “Main Man kids” chapter and thought oh the mc has kids very interesting I haven’t seen a lot of FanFictions like that. I was wrong reading this book feels like a fever dream so many pointless characters. But overall it’s mid read with caution
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It was very good story but in the last few chapters writer just lost the rhythm and write it down anything like becoming king of all gods stealing godhood from other something.he should have keep it down to more human or super human lèvel or magic, instead of godhood stuff or spamming dragon fire on every thing without actual fights.
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I like it alot the power system and the progression is good too. Very surprised this one isn't more known. This is Harem tho and they more only focus on Dany than anything for his partner.
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This story is progressing in very unusual way. Can't understand it now. It's just stretching it now. Kill all gods then become gods. Like the saying Targaryen are closer to God's than men. Become a immortal pantheon of Gods. The End.
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Los primeros 40 capitulos están bien, pero después de eso la falta de acción comienza a molestar. Luego simplemente es un roomcom medieval. También que sea hijo del indigno no significa casi nada en esta historia, porque se lo menciona en los primeros capítulos, y ni siquiera interactúan mucho entre prota y padre. No sé, no tiene mucho significado la historia con su título.
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I like this story, I really do, even though I think some things are really, really forced. Like Braavos kneeling to the MC so easily, or the rapid expansion of the Dragon Empire. Valyria is the richest empire with more than 100 dragons, and being 5 thousand years old it has not managed to dominate all the people of Essos. And the MC seems to achieve this in a very short time. Not to mention that it would be impossible for the MC's children to keep the cities under their control permanently, they would be murdered at the first opportunity, after all they are still human beings of flesh and blood. And if the MC were to go around destroying all the cities that murdered their children, soon the MC's allies would turn against him, and try to murder him. Not to mention that in the books, shortly after Daenerys left Yunkai and Astapor, the cities were conquered by others, and returned to slavery. So much so that in the books she has a lot of problems in Meereen, and was almost murdered. Dragons are the most powerful weapon in the known world, but they are not invincible. House Targaryen at its height was unable to conquer Dorne through wars, Dorne and even managed to kill Meraxes. The only way I see them having such an easy conquest by their dragons is if all their dragons were on steroids like Drogon in the series, and had the defense of the dragons in the books. But I can still see the knights being murdered right after taking the cities. PS: Yes, I know this is a fanfic, and I'm not supposed to take it too seriously, this is for fun. But I wanted to see the protagonist have more difficulty conquering things, and not just getting there and everyone surrendering. I can't buy the idea of cities not fighting, and not ending up killing some dragons in the process, a bunch of angry civilians have already managed to kill dragons, imagine an entire continent wanting these animals' heads.
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The Novel is very fun to read Mc is Fun character I hope it won't be dropped 🙏
Authour.....thank you.Thank you so much for the concept,I haven't read it yet(hence the 4 star rating),just the synopsis bit it seems to have all the elements i love in a GOT fanfic.i.e;no annoying Jon Snow,no Lannisters,no Starks.Of course i recognised that even in his past time there could be these annoying elements but the fact that there is no Jon Snow just makes my day!
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I would say it's quite a funny read till recent Chapters, but I fear or know that I will have to stop reading soon because of upcoming problems that are unavoidable. I don't wanna see other Houses having Dragons and this problem will come up. What will you do when your only advantage is gone and other Houses have Dragons on their own? Pre-Set War timer. Either in this Generation or when the Dragon is passed down to the next generation and a much bigger Dance of the Dragons will happen.
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Good morning, I want to tell you that I love your story. I just wish the plot would move faster. it's too slow for me. Thank you for this story I can't wait to read the sequel.
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I really liked the story it has several directions to follow the characters changing due to the interference of the mc keep it up author I see a clear evolution of you in your stories
this novel is very fun to read and i expect a lot from it. The character is very much alive and I'm Happy danny finds someone she truly love and have a happy ending also the the mc is fun character and my only hope is to see the mc harem increase, so far there are only one who is officially confirmed while the other one is still in the middle. I recommend people reading this novel. English is not my mother tongue so i not good enough to write in order to express how i like this novel . I hope the author commit and finish this novel because i will start give stone show my support [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
I have only good things to say about this fic, in first place a protagonist that is not a maniacal "monster" for no good reason, he don't treat his life as a book or show, or something equally pathetic, but at the same time he is in no way a pushover, one of the most notable things about this author in general is the way he build characters, many harem stories fall in the pitfall of collecting hollow characters, every relevant woman in this story have their own personalitiy and motive, no one fells two dimensional, some characters are simply delusional/stupid(I'm looking at you Daemon) something that is completely realistic(real life never lack dumb people), this is actualy one of the few contexts were a harem actualy makes sense. So, good job and thanks for your effort, don't let any "trolls" desmotivate you, keep going and good luck.
The best story about the world of ASOIAF that I've ever read, the author builds a creative story and expands the world in a masterful way. I'm really looking forward to the sequel and I have no doubt that it will be as good as this one. Thank you for this wonderful work, Author.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. In truth Story was good
Well where to start, the story itself is of course a Game of thrones reincarnation story those can usually go either way, but this lovely author has pretty much gotten it down to a tea across their three different GoT stories that all revolve around a similar concept, that being reincarnation. Overall the story itself is amazing and definitely a fun read with lots of funny moments and brings some great worlds building along with diving into an interesting way in which deities might work on the world of planetos. At the end of the day authors who put their metophorical heart out there with what they write and have the guts to stick it out and finish the books they start are people I highly respect as it isn’t easy, you will be criticized and that can really effect the quality of one’s work but I love the author and I love this story so I would absolutely recommend reading this if you’re looking for an interesting GoT story set after the dance of the dragons but before the main point of Game of thrones. 🙂
This book has flaws a lot of them something that I disklike about this fanfic is that the Author has an obsession with the mc having kids. Going into this story I saw the “Main Man kids” chapter and thought oh the mc has kids very interesting I haven’t seen a lot of FanFictions like that. I was wrong reading this book feels like a fever dream so many pointless characters. But overall it’s mid read with caution
揭示劇透 It was very good story but in the last few chapters writer just lost the rhythm and write it down anything like becoming king of all gods stealing godhood from other something.he should have keep it down to more human or super human lèvel or magic, instead of godhood stuff or spamming dragon fire on every thing without actual fights.
love all your novels .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like it alot the power system and the progression is good too. Very surprised this one isn't more known. This is Harem tho and they more only focus on Dany than anything for his partner.
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This story is progressing in very unusual way. Can't understand it now. It's just stretching it now. Kill all gods then become gods. Like the saying Targaryen are closer to God's than men. Become a immortal pantheon of Gods. The End.
揭示劇透 Los primeros 40 capitulos están bien, pero después de eso la falta de acción comienza a molestar. Luego simplemente es un roomcom medieval. También que sea hijo del indigno no significa casi nada en esta historia, porque se lo menciona en los primeros capítulos, y ni siquiera interactúan mucho entre prota y padre. No sé, no tiene mucho significado la historia con su título.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
I like this story, I really do, even though I think some things are really, really forced. Like Braavos kneeling to the MC so easily, or the rapid expansion of the Dragon Empire. Valyria is the richest empire with more than 100 dragons, and being 5 thousand years old it has not managed to dominate all the people of Essos. And the MC seems to achieve this in a very short time. Not to mention that it would be impossible for the MC's children to keep the cities under their control permanently, they would be murdered at the first opportunity, after all they are still human beings of flesh and blood. And if the MC were to go around destroying all the cities that murdered their children, soon the MC's allies would turn against him, and try to murder him. Not to mention that in the books, shortly after Daenerys left Yunkai and Astapor, the cities were conquered by others, and returned to slavery. So much so that in the books she has a lot of problems in Meereen, and was almost murdered. Dragons are the most powerful weapon in the known world, but they are not invincible. House Targaryen at its height was unable to conquer Dorne through wars, Dorne and even managed to kill Meraxes. The only way I see them having such an easy conquest by their dragons is if all their dragons were on steroids like Drogon in the series, and had the defense of the dragons in the books. But I can still see the knights being murdered right after taking the cities. PS: Yes, I know this is a fanfic, and I'm not supposed to take it too seriously, this is for fun. But I wanted to see the protagonist have more difficulty conquering things, and not just getting there and everyone surrendering. I can't buy the idea of cities not fighting, and not ending up killing some dragons in the process, a bunch of angry civilians have already managed to kill dragons, imagine an entire continent wanting these animals' heads.
揭示劇透 The Novel is very fun to read Mc is Fun character I hope it won't be dropped 🙏
Authour.....thank you.Thank you so much for the concept,I haven't read it yet(hence the 4 star rating),just the synopsis bit it seems to have all the elements i love in a GOT fanfic.i.e;no annoying Jon Snow,no Lannisters,no Starks.Of course i recognised that even in his past time there could be these annoying elements but the fact that there is no Jon Snow just makes my day!
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I would say it's quite a funny read till recent Chapters, but I fear or know that I will have to stop reading soon because of upcoming problems that are unavoidable. I don't wanna see other Houses having Dragons and this problem will come up. What will you do when your only advantage is gone and other Houses have Dragons on their own? Pre-Set War timer. Either in this Generation or when the Dragon is passed down to the next generation and a much bigger Dance of the Dragons will happen.
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Good morning, I want to tell you that I love your story. I just wish the plot would move faster. it's too slow for me. Thank you for this story I can't wait to read the sequel.
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I really liked the story it has several directions to follow the characters changing due to the interference of the mc keep it up author I see a clear evolution of you in your stories
this novel is very fun to read and i expect a lot from it. The character is very much alive and I'm Happy danny finds someone she truly love and have a happy ending also the the mc is fun character and my only hope is to see the mc harem increase, so far there are only one who is officially confirmed while the other one is still in the middle. I recommend people reading this novel. English is not my mother tongue so i not good enough to write in order to express how i like this novel . I hope the author commit and finish this novel because i will start give stone show my support [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]