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for me, this story is 1 of the best in this universe. it also adds to the advantages of this story that the author touches on an unbroken time period.
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I'm out I said from the beginning that if the old king was not his real father he was out, the novel is called son of the unworthy referring to the old king, in this last chapter at the wedding you confirm that he is not his father when you say that Daeneris was taken away to the altar for Aemon, the dragon knight, who "totally is not our true father", so goodbye what a waste of my time, could I have prayed for you to constantly insinuate that he was not the son of the previous king that is totally unnecessary in the story, Anyway, I'm tired of so many insinuations, good luck to you, goodbye.
Good story thank you for your work ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-—————————————————_____—————————————-
Very good story, but I would like more frequent updates. And I would also like more interactions between the main character and other secondary characters.
I'm not good at writing reviews so I'm just going to say that I like how the story is going and the characters are great to.
I’m loving this story I just wish we saw more interactions with other characters such as Maekar, bloodraven, bittersteel etc, if you do more of that this story is an easy 5 stars
quite a good and quite interesting story............................................................................................................................
Eu amei a história tanto como amo a outra~ Boa escrita,e um bom desenvolvimento e me deixa curioso sobre muitas cousas~ Primeiro:Os descedentes do mc vão ser Dragom lordes verdadeiros,tem uma chance deles acabarem tomando o trono? Segundo:O império de Valyria não era só magia e dragões,foi inspirado na nossa Roma Antiga,uma mistura do período de sua republica a época de seu vasto Império,tinha o seu fórum,o senado e principalmente suas legiões~o que me leva a seguinte pergunta O mc pode tentar recriar por assim dizer o império de valyria no futuro,com base em Roma,ou tentar fazer Harenhall parecida como roma,tendo o seu centro o fórum e suas legiões? Enfimmm:Amo suas histórias espero anciosamente o próximo capítulo \^¬^/
Мне понравилась история, и развитие персонажей мне нравится. Посмотрим как пойдет дальше история. Пока история мне очень нравится. Вдохновения автору)
It's a really good read. I personally would be very happy to see this continue. please don't give up halfway it's very good. The story keeps me very interested in this. What's gonna happen please do continue writing this.
Reading your other GOT fic I knew this would be good, though it’s still early this has me interested, keep it up!
A great start to a GOT story. This review is definitely too soon but I scrolled across this gem today and im very excited to see how this story plays out. I've become a fan of musically inclined MCs I've realized and that may play into my excitement at finding such a story. speaking of, the MC's powers are great and fit well within this worlds mechanics. I like the light hearted feel the story has so far and I like how unique the origin is, especially weaving daenerys into it quite naturally. Im a fan of the MC's personality and mindset as well. he's very open and I think its an intelligent move being friendly and caring to his relatives and those deserving, slowly cultivating his own faction, family, and eventual army within his own giant extended and very dangerous household. I've got great hopes for this story already and I would definitely suggest giving it a read.
So far so good. I didn't expect for dragons to be brought this early especially in the era of when the dragons just went extinct, but I'm still digging the story, plus I love that Daenerys is along for the ride. Since there's clearly music going to be involved, (thank you by the way for going a different route) I thank it would be wonderful if he teaches people how to play the instruments just so he can have a theme song when he completing in tourneys.
The start is really good I hope you continue this work. I hope you make the mc travel to all lands and find magic that he can use to strengthen himself his dragon and his family that he trusts. I haven't seen anyone try to unite the whole world into 1 empire and try to improve the world by getting rid of any current or future threats permanently. Also it will be really good if mc adds schools for commoners and improves hygiene and pregnancy births that are common sense in the modern world. Also dragons will grow more quickly with exercise, good diet and be free to roam around and not be locked up when they are old enough to fly and hunt.
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Not a bad start I will really have to wait for more chapters to really give it a true review. I do like the premise and the gifts the MC has are not bad at all though it does depend on how intelligent and educated the MC is to tell if I'm going to really like this story premise though. I do have my small doubts mostly because I have a very bad opinion of Daenerys Targaryen after she tried to start trying to be a ruler. In my opinion after she started trying to rule slaver's Bay her character took a real nosedive from being an incompetent ruler then a I know best ruler to finally mad
Great book Can't wait to read more and see where you go with this story. I wonder if bloodraven is gonna get jealous that shiera doesn't love him and trick daemon in starting a rebellion so he can kill both aerion and daemon
for me, this story is 1 of the best in this universe. it also adds to the advantages of this story that the author touches on an unbroken time period.
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I'm out I said from the beginning that if the old king was not his real father he was out, the novel is called son of the unworthy referring to the old king, in this last chapter at the wedding you confirm that he is not his father when you say that Daeneris was taken away to the altar for Aemon, the dragon knight, who "totally is not our true father", so goodbye what a waste of my time, could I have prayed for you to constantly insinuate that he was not the son of the previous king that is totally unnecessary in the story, Anyway, I'm tired of so many insinuations, good luck to you, goodbye.
Good story thank you for your work ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-—————————————————_____—————————————-
Very good story, but I would like more frequent updates. And I would also like more interactions between the main character and other secondary characters.
I'm not good at writing reviews so I'm just going to say that I like how the story is going and the characters are great to.
I’m loving this story I just wish we saw more interactions with other characters such as Maekar, bloodraven, bittersteel etc, if you do more of that this story is an easy 5 stars
quite a good and quite interesting story............................................................................................................................
Eu amei a história tanto como amo a outra~ Boa escrita,e um bom desenvolvimento e me deixa curioso sobre muitas cousas~ Primeiro:Os descedentes do mc vão ser Dragom lordes verdadeiros,tem uma chance deles acabarem tomando o trono? Segundo:O império de Valyria não era só magia e dragões,foi inspirado na nossa Roma Antiga,uma mistura do período de sua republica a época de seu vasto Império,tinha o seu fórum,o senado e principalmente suas legiões~o que me leva a seguinte pergunta O mc pode tentar recriar por assim dizer o império de valyria no futuro,com base em Roma,ou tentar fazer Harenhall parecida como roma,tendo o seu centro o fórum e suas legiões? Enfimmm:Amo suas histórias espero anciosamente o próximo capítulo \^¬^/
Мне понравилась история, и развитие персонажей мне нравится. Посмотрим как пойдет дальше история. Пока история мне очень нравится. Вдохновения автору)
It's a really good read. I personally would be very happy to see this continue. please don't give up halfway it's very good. The story keeps me very interested in this. What's gonna happen please do continue writing this.
Reading your other GOT fic I knew this would be good, though it’s still early this has me interested, keep it up!
A great start to a GOT story. This review is definitely too soon but I scrolled across this gem today and im very excited to see how this story plays out. I've become a fan of musically inclined MCs I've realized and that may play into my excitement at finding such a story. speaking of, the MC's powers are great and fit well within this worlds mechanics. I like the light hearted feel the story has so far and I like how unique the origin is, especially weaving daenerys into it quite naturally. Im a fan of the MC's personality and mindset as well. he's very open and I think its an intelligent move being friendly and caring to his relatives and those deserving, slowly cultivating his own faction, family, and eventual army within his own giant extended and very dangerous household. I've got great hopes for this story already and I would definitely suggest giving it a read.
So far so good. I didn't expect for dragons to be brought this early especially in the era of when the dragons just went extinct, but I'm still digging the story, plus I love that Daenerys is along for the ride. Since there's clearly music going to be involved, (thank you by the way for going a different route) I thank it would be wonderful if he teaches people how to play the instruments just so he can have a theme song when he completing in tourneys.
The start is really good I hope you continue this work. I hope you make the mc travel to all lands and find magic that he can use to strengthen himself his dragon and his family that he trusts. I haven't seen anyone try to unite the whole world into 1 empire and try to improve the world by getting rid of any current or future threats permanently. Also it will be really good if mc adds schools for commoners and improves hygiene and pregnancy births that are common sense in the modern world. Also dragons will grow more quickly with exercise, good diet and be free to roam around and not be locked up when they are old enough to fly and hunt.
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Not a bad start I will really have to wait for more chapters to really give it a true review. I do like the premise and the gifts the MC has are not bad at all though it does depend on how intelligent and educated the MC is to tell if I'm going to really like this story premise though. I do have my small doubts mostly because I have a very bad opinion of Daenerys Targaryen after she tried to start trying to be a ruler. In my opinion after she started trying to rule slaver's Bay her character took a real nosedive from being an incompetent ruler then a I know best ruler to finally mad
Great book Can't wait to read more and see where you go with this story. I wonder if bloodraven is gonna get jealous that shiera doesn't love him and trick daemon in starting a rebellion so he can kill both aerion and daemon