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Very much satisfied with the story I think this novel is really good for you first novel. As for the story , it is good , story is good and has a lot of potential and as of now author is doing a very good job at it As for the mc , he is likable character and has good character development throughout the story , side charectors are good ( mainly male side charectors as female side charectors are not that developed but still relevant), Also mc has a broken plot armour but you should not have a problem with it beacuse this shameless author was always specific about it so it will not come as a surprise and it doesn't affect the story at all also this point is also a point of comedy in the story😂 As for the romance fl is introduced a little late in the story, and the romance is a little slow but it is still developing at a good rate plus fl personality is very good for me So yeah these were my views about this story and I think you should give this a try
للأن كل شيء جميل في القصه قرأت لأخر فصل الآن ألا و هوا الفصل 473 احداث كثيره حصلت مع كل الحماس إلا انه احس انه القصه الآن بدأت مع توسع الكاتب في العالم و درجات القوه و شرح بعض المسطلحات الجديده في القصه. Eng: For now, everything is beautiful in the story. I read to the last chapter now, chapter 473. Many events happened with all enthusiasm, but I feel that the story began now with the writer's expansion in the world and the degrees of strength and the explanation of some new terms in the story.
Very good writing. I like that Kyle and his friends also becoming powerful not just only Kyle. Very thoughtfully story developing and I hope writer publish more regularly.
Hey, Author , I FREAKING LOVE THIS NOVEL !!!!!!!. this was exactly the type of novel i was looking for. Thanks for making me laugh .
Good enough to pass time. Mc personality is pretty bad. Side characters are alright. Bia is cool. Too many cliche shii. It becomes boring ash. To give mc motivation, you need to harm his family so he works hard to get some mystical potion. Cliche cliche cliche. The typical hero type character. The typical cold and aloof beauty who is disrespectful. The hero party. The only interesting person so far is Alec. Should've made him the mc instead
Man , if this is how you write your stories please just stop. How can out of all the characters the MC is a lazy shit. Man that just got rid of the fun. The name is cool, but DEFINITELY not the story or MC
The story overall is good, I don't have issues with the MC because he is meant to make mistakes and develop my issues are the side characters lack exposure, they are not two-dimensional but they lack individuality meaning every scene containing them is usually rushed or an info dump of their backstory The author always ' tells but does not show ' meaning she/he would tell us what the character does but we don't see it from the perspective of the character what I mean is that everything feels like a summary, it's more like every scene is rushed meaning yes I am reading the story but I am still not connected to the characters, I read more than 30 chapters but I am still not connected to the MC or any other characters The world-building and lore are rushed immensely therefore many important details are missed, those little moments of interaction between the characters might seem less important to the author but i want those little interactions since they connect me to the characters overall it a good story, the plot is amazing so yeah...
This novels is a masterpiece that I've come across this is one of the best novels I've read till today Good character development and keeping readers on their toes as to what gonna happen next and how the mc gonna overcome the next chalenge. I rarely give novels reviews but seriously this novel deserves it and it's is a gem i am really glad found this novel. I just hope the author never drops this masterpiece and keep updating more chapters daily.👍 Thanks for the novel author and keep up the good work
idk about this book ,want to try it out ,can anyone give me some honest review 💁
Overall the story is decent, the plot is engaging and the characters don’t feel that bland. The world building is meh and I can’t comment on how frequent the updates are since I’m writing this while at chapter 356. Still I’d recommend it if your bored and want something to pass the time There are a few problems I have with it though(mini rant incoming): My biggest problem is the mc’s celestial bloodline. Its a huge crutch. Every problem he has is basically solved by it while the mc is just there. You can give someone else the same bloodline and they might do the same if not better. His personality is somewhat decent but without his bloodline he has nothing interesting going on. Then it’s the mc either being oblivious or stupid idk which. To give an example very early on he met a Phoenix, it asked him to use his blood to bond with its egg because it’ll be beneficial to it. Later in the story he got hunted by moths and eventually found out they think he smells tasty. At this point it should be obvious how good his bloodline is. Then some villain shows up trying very hard to get his pet phoenix’s blood yet he still asked a very obvious question, which is what’s so special about its blood. He should already know it’s because of him. There’s plenty of other examples, that’s just the most recent one.
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I rarely write reviews, but this book compelled me to write one. I stumbled upon this book accidentally since I had nothing to read, but I never expected it to become my favorite ongoing novel. This book has everything I like, from good action and world-building to great romance, and no harem, which is a plus. Overall, I'd say this is one of the best books on this platform for me right now.
I am in general enjoying the novel despite the misinformation or lack of communication going on, but when Kyle uses this: "Killing monsters was fine because they were beasts that threatened everyone's safety. Kyle knew he could kill thousands of monsters without flinching but... He grumbled inwardly and shook his head to distract his thoughts." As logic, I am very very disappointed. The beasts that he kills only do the same thing back, but he can't kill someone that sells slaves for labor and r*pe purposes?
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This novel is actually really good. The story starts off pretty slow but It still peaked my interest. The tower arc was pretty boring to me until the end of it. Other than the the world building and power-ups in the novel are well done. Give it a read.
I love this novel! Best i have ever read. (the story and writing get way better after chapter 200)
I have been reading this for quite some time now and I can say that this novel has everything you want from this type of novel I love every characters ,power system, world buliding, comedy if you have time you can give this novel try you won't regret it .I garentee that and for author thankyou for entertaining us
author the way you write is soo fabulous like i am able to picture every single word in my head spoiler: specially in the chapters in which kyle and azazeal are together
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370. dropped. disappointment.............................................................................................................................
hey author this is not going in the same direction as authors pov right cause this is going in the direction of multiple regression
you are forcing comedy and it doesn't feel like mc has s rank luck cause he gets into trouble most of the time
loved it. it's just that only onr chapter per day 😭😭😭 i want more chapterss
essa novel me prendeu totalmente. o enredo é muito bom e eu adoro personagens OP e que tenham linguagens misteriosas, gosto muito também do fato de que ele não é único "protagonista", tipo, outros personagens também tem um bom desenvolvimento e um pano de fundo.
Thoroughly enjoyable book, great character arc, progressive world building. Oh also a hidden bad guy waiting to pounce. Oh and just for kicks a dragon pops up.
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just amazing work, after reading so many novels from multiple authors I can say this one is one of the best
Honestly, maybe a little entertaining though the story feels extremely nonchalant. I feel like there's no emotion in most characters. Still kind of entertaining but after a couple of chapter I just felt that the nonchalancy made it pretty dry. Lots of similarities with Author's Pov (kind of). I will not say don't read it but I wouldn't reccomend it either.
Omg I love Bia and Kyles dynamic so much its so cutee 😭😭 I really like the pacing and how he gradually gets stronger 👍Its such a good read and Im excited to see S2 unfold 😎
Very much satisfied with the story I think this novel is really good for you first novel. As for the story , it is good , story is good and has a lot of potential and as of now author is doing a very good job at it As for the mc , he is likable character and has good character development throughout the story , side charectors are good ( mainly male side charectors as female side charectors are not that developed but still relevant), Also mc has a broken plot armour but you should not have a problem with it beacuse this shameless author was always specific about it so it will not come as a surprise and it doesn't affect the story at all also this point is also a point of comedy in the story😂 As for the romance fl is introduced a little late in the story, and the romance is a little slow but it is still developing at a good rate plus fl personality is very good for me So yeah these were my views about this story and I think you should give this a try
للأن كل شيء جميل في القصه قرأت لأخر فصل الآن ألا و هوا الفصل 473 احداث كثيره حصلت مع كل الحماس إلا انه احس انه القصه الآن بدأت مع توسع الكاتب في العالم و درجات القوه و شرح بعض المسطلحات الجديده في القصه. Eng: For now, everything is beautiful in the story. I read to the last chapter now, chapter 473. Many events happened with all enthusiasm, but I feel that the story began now with the writer's expansion in the world and the degrees of strength and the explanation of some new terms in the story.
Very good writing. I like that Kyle and his friends also becoming powerful not just only Kyle. Very thoughtfully story developing and I hope writer publish more regularly.
Hey, Author , I FREAKING LOVE THIS NOVEL !!!!!!!. this was exactly the type of novel i was looking for. Thanks for making me laugh .
Good enough to pass time. Mc personality is pretty bad. Side characters are alright. Bia is cool. Too many cliche shii. It becomes boring ash. To give mc motivation, you need to harm his family so he works hard to get some mystical potion. Cliche cliche cliche. The typical hero type character. The typical cold and aloof beauty who is disrespectful. The hero party. The only interesting person so far is Alec. Should've made him the mc instead
Man , if this is how you write your stories please just stop. How can out of all the characters the MC is a lazy shit. Man that just got rid of the fun. The name is cool, but DEFINITELY not the story or MC
The story overall is good, I don't have issues with the MC because he is meant to make mistakes and develop my issues are the side characters lack exposure, they are not two-dimensional but they lack individuality meaning every scene containing them is usually rushed or an info dump of their backstory The author always ' tells but does not show ' meaning she/he would tell us what the character does but we don't see it from the perspective of the character what I mean is that everything feels like a summary, it's more like every scene is rushed meaning yes I am reading the story but I am still not connected to the characters, I read more than 30 chapters but I am still not connected to the MC or any other characters The world-building and lore are rushed immensely therefore many important details are missed, those little moments of interaction between the characters might seem less important to the author but i want those little interactions since they connect me to the characters overall it a good story, the plot is amazing so yeah...
This novels is a masterpiece that I've come across this is one of the best novels I've read till today Good character development and keeping readers on their toes as to what gonna happen next and how the mc gonna overcome the next chalenge. I rarely give novels reviews but seriously this novel deserves it and it's is a gem i am really glad found this novel. I just hope the author never drops this masterpiece and keep updating more chapters daily.👍 Thanks for the novel author and keep up the good work
idk about this book ,want to try it out ,can anyone give me some honest review 💁
Overall the story is decent, the plot is engaging and the characters don’t feel that bland. The world building is meh and I can’t comment on how frequent the updates are since I’m writing this while at chapter 356. Still I’d recommend it if your bored and want something to pass the time There are a few problems I have with it though(mini rant incoming): My biggest problem is the mc’s celestial bloodline. Its a huge crutch. Every problem he has is basically solved by it while the mc is just there. You can give someone else the same bloodline and they might do the same if not better. His personality is somewhat decent but without his bloodline he has nothing interesting going on. Then it’s the mc either being oblivious or stupid idk which. To give an example very early on he met a Phoenix, it asked him to use his blood to bond with its egg because it’ll be beneficial to it. Later in the story he got hunted by moths and eventually found out they think he smells tasty. At this point it should be obvious how good his bloodline is. Then some villain shows up trying very hard to get his pet phoenix’s blood yet he still asked a very obvious question, which is what’s so special about its blood. He should already know it’s because of him. There’s plenty of other examples, that’s just the most recent one.
揭示劇透 I rarely write reviews, but this book compelled me to write one. I stumbled upon this book accidentally since I had nothing to read, but I never expected it to become my favorite ongoing novel. This book has everything I like, from good action and world-building to great romance, and no harem, which is a plus. Overall, I'd say this is one of the best books on this platform for me right now.
I am in general enjoying the novel despite the misinformation or lack of communication going on, but when Kyle uses this: "Killing monsters was fine because they were beasts that threatened everyone's safety. Kyle knew he could kill thousands of monsters without flinching but... He grumbled inwardly and shook his head to distract his thoughts." As logic, I am very very disappointed. The beasts that he kills only do the same thing back, but he can't kill someone that sells slaves for labor and r*pe purposes?
揭示劇透 This novel is actually really good. The story starts off pretty slow but It still peaked my interest. The tower arc was pretty boring to me until the end of it. Other than the the world building and power-ups in the novel are well done. Give it a read.
I love this novel! Best i have ever read. (the story and writing get way better after chapter 200)
I have been reading this for quite some time now and I can say that this novel has everything you want from this type of novel I love every characters ,power system, world buliding, comedy if you have time you can give this novel try you won't regret it .I garentee that and for author thankyou for entertaining us
author the way you write is soo fabulous like i am able to picture every single word in my head spoiler: specially in the chapters in which kyle and azazeal are together
揭示劇透 370. dropped. disappointment.............................................................................................................................
hey author this is not going in the same direction as authors pov right cause this is going in the direction of multiple regression
you are forcing comedy and it doesn't feel like mc has s rank luck cause he gets into trouble most of the time
loved it. it's just that only onr chapter per day 😭😭😭 i want more chapterss
essa novel me prendeu totalmente. o enredo é muito bom e eu adoro personagens OP e que tenham linguagens misteriosas, gosto muito também do fato de que ele não é único "protagonista", tipo, outros personagens também tem um bom desenvolvimento e um pano de fundo.
Thoroughly enjoyable book, great character arc, progressive world building. Oh also a hidden bad guy waiting to pounce. Oh and just for kicks a dragon pops up.
揭示劇透 just amazing work, after reading so many novels from multiple authors I can say this one is one of the best
Honestly, maybe a little entertaining though the story feels extremely nonchalant. I feel like there's no emotion in most characters. Still kind of entertaining but after a couple of chapter I just felt that the nonchalancy made it pretty dry. Lots of similarities with Author's Pov (kind of). I will not say don't read it but I wouldn't reccomend it either.
Omg I love Bia and Kyles dynamic so much its so cutee 😭😭 I really like the pacing and how he gradually gets stronger 👍Its such a good read and Im excited to see S2 unfold 😎