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Te odio como no tienes idea y nunca te lo imaginaras, Donde estabas hace un par de años cuando tuvo que comerme los mas de 1.000 capitulos en mtl con los nombres en chino :((((((( Muchas gracias por traducir, esta sin duda es una historia que muchos que no la hayan leido la disfrutaran y en gran parte se debera a ti, por traducirle tremenda novela. PD:Soy español espero no te molesto un bezaso
Excelente historia, el prota me parece que va muy bien con su desarrollo ni muy lento ni muy rápido, espero que traduzcan más rápido, me e quedado muy enganchado y ahora toca esperar
Xianxia vibe is overflowing in this story.. the names of some natural treasures sounds like those immortal treasures in cultivation world..The story is good but too much unnecessary details..some details that can be summarize are unnecessarily long
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Ça fait longtemps que vous n'avez pas publié un chapitre. Je suis hyper contente que quand je me suis connecté à webnovel, j'ai vu qu'il y avait des nouveaux chapitres. Merci infiniment pour votre travail acharné.
Very Wonderful Fanfic. Pace is not slow but also not fast. Author has written more than 150 chapters while the MC has only spend nearly 2 months in Fanfic. No SKIP time so there will be no overpower. This Fanfic mainly spotlight to the world of pokemon where they are used as fighting forces and the serious destrution than a pokemon can cause. There are a lot of killings. Although there is a system, it is like a hard disk which is implanted into MC mind as if he wants to use system he has to collect information first like if he wanted to create pokemon food then he first has to collect the way to create it. The system cannot guide MC or talk to any communication. ALL IN ALL IT IS A REALLY GOOD FANFIC
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I greatly enjoyed reading this story and am really sad that translator stopped updating. I'm still glad they translated what they did and I got to find and read it.
Hey thanks for putting in the time and effort after finding and reading through the first 80 chapters you put out I went and found the best mtl I could, copy and pasted into google docs and took the time to find and replace the Chinese translated names for pokemon and a few other things with their actual ones so I could read it on my own, one of the few examples of the Chinese epic length story style working fantastically. So again thanks for the time and effort.
The Story is interesting and I’m hooked, it’s just that the novel had not been updated in a while now. (T-T)
why ain't the author releasing new chapters? ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ
This is in my top 5 Fan Fics that I have read so far. The world from this story compared to the game and TV show are different in that life can be lost at any time to anything. And that corruption is rampant in both factions vying for power. The main character is not a hero, just someone who wants to survive and get stronger at almost any cost. He has some bottom lines and is not outright evil for evil's sake.
One of my favorite pokemon fanfictions. I just like the more realistic ones. I really likes the relationship between the MC and his pokemons. Good work and keep it up!
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26 chapters in and it's hard to read... The English is good and the pacing is good too, but it feels like it's hitting every single bad trope in a row. If the pacing wasn't as good, I'd have dropped it. The system is convoluted (colors, levels, aptitudes). The main way for MC to progress is by using magic (pokeblocks). MC is not an anti-hero. An anti-hero is still a hero, just with unconventional methods or motivation. MC is a murdering villain who hasn't done a good deed in 26 chapters. Killing intent is a thing here -.-
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Awesome fanfic looking for more of them I need some fanfic with potential and not kid friendly my only problem is when the mc is a *****
Solid 4 Stars overall. Definitely invested in this as long as the translation holds up.
Excellent, one of the best Pokémon fanfics. It develops its own unique take on the reality of the pokemon world. Only problems are that the first 2 chapters are quite confusing, and the latest chapters contain lots of filler. (as of ch 97)
So far it is one of the best Fanfic of Pokémon so keep the good work ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
I know it's a translation, but friend, in the editions could you remove so many "elegant moves" that are used while getting up from the toilet? also all those "elegant wrist turns" while picking up the keys with her "elegant wrist movement with her delicate and fine fingers" Apart from that, taking into account the type of Chinese writing, it is a good book, recommended when you can't find any more pokemon fics
One of the best works on Pokemon. Good Work. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Hey there, Pokémon/Beast-Taming enthusiasts! Here's what you can expect from this fan fiction: 1. Main Character: #Anti-Hero. No other explanation needed. 2. Setting: A reimagined Pokémon world with a dark twist, taking place shortly before Ash embarks on his journey. 3. Plot: Mature storyline free from clichéd harems and stereotypical dense protagonists. MC uses intelligence instead of emotions to make decisions. 4. System: #Non-Sentient. Dodged a bullet there. 5. Pace: Starts slow to set the background, picks up later when MC leaves spawn point. And there you have it. Peace Out.
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Te odio como no tienes idea y nunca te lo imaginaras, Donde estabas hace un par de años cuando tuvo que comerme los mas de 1.000 capitulos en mtl con los nombres en chino :((((((( Muchas gracias por traducir, esta sin duda es una historia que muchos que no la hayan leido la disfrutaran y en gran parte se debera a ti, por traducirle tremenda novela. PD:Soy español espero no te molesto un bezaso
Excelente historia, el prota me parece que va muy bien con su desarrollo ni muy lento ni muy rápido, espero que traduzcan más rápido, me e quedado muy enganchado y ahora toca esperar
Xianxia vibe is overflowing in this story.. the names of some natural treasures sounds like those immortal treasures in cultivation world..The story is good but too much unnecessary details..some details that can be summarize are unnecessarily long
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Ça fait longtemps que vous n'avez pas publié un chapitre. Je suis hyper contente que quand je me suis connecté à webnovel, j'ai vu qu'il y avait des nouveaux chapitres. Merci infiniment pour votre travail acharné.
Very Wonderful Fanfic. Pace is not slow but also not fast. Author has written more than 150 chapters while the MC has only spend nearly 2 months in Fanfic. No SKIP time so there will be no overpower. This Fanfic mainly spotlight to the world of pokemon where they are used as fighting forces and the serious destrution than a pokemon can cause. There are a lot of killings. Although there is a system, it is like a hard disk which is implanted into MC mind as if he wants to use system he has to collect information first like if he wanted to create pokemon food then he first has to collect the way to create it. The system cannot guide MC or talk to any communication. ALL IN ALL IT IS A REALLY GOOD FANFIC
揭示劇透 I greatly enjoyed reading this story and am really sad that translator stopped updating. I'm still glad they translated what they did and I got to find and read it.
Hey thanks for putting in the time and effort after finding and reading through the first 80 chapters you put out I went and found the best mtl I could, copy and pasted into google docs and took the time to find and replace the Chinese translated names for pokemon and a few other things with their actual ones so I could read it on my own, one of the few examples of the Chinese epic length story style working fantastically. So again thanks for the time and effort.
The Story is interesting and I’m hooked, it’s just that the novel had not been updated in a while now. (T-T)
why ain't the author releasing new chapters? ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ ಥ_ಥ
This is in my top 5 Fan Fics that I have read so far. The world from this story compared to the game and TV show are different in that life can be lost at any time to anything. And that corruption is rampant in both factions vying for power. The main character is not a hero, just someone who wants to survive and get stronger at almost any cost. He has some bottom lines and is not outright evil for evil's sake.
One of my favorite pokemon fanfictions. I just like the more realistic ones. I really likes the relationship between the MC and his pokemons. Good work and keep it up!
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26 chapters in and it's hard to read... The English is good and the pacing is good too, but it feels like it's hitting every single bad trope in a row. If the pacing wasn't as good, I'd have dropped it. The system is convoluted (colors, levels, aptitudes). The main way for MC to progress is by using magic (pokeblocks). MC is not an anti-hero. An anti-hero is still a hero, just with unconventional methods or motivation. MC is a murdering villain who hasn't done a good deed in 26 chapters. Killing intent is a thing here -.-
揭示劇透 Awesome fanfic looking for more of them I need some fanfic with potential and not kid friendly my only problem is when the mc is a *****
Solid 4 Stars overall. Definitely invested in this as long as the translation holds up.
Excellent, one of the best Pokémon fanfics. It develops its own unique take on the reality of the pokemon world. Only problems are that the first 2 chapters are quite confusing, and the latest chapters contain lots of filler. (as of ch 97)
So far it is one of the best Fanfic of Pokémon so keep the good work ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
I know it's a translation, but friend, in the editions could you remove so many "elegant moves" that are used while getting up from the toilet? also all those "elegant wrist turns" while picking up the keys with her "elegant wrist movement with her delicate and fine fingers" Apart from that, taking into account the type of Chinese writing, it is a good book, recommended when you can't find any more pokemon fics
One of the best works on Pokemon. Good Work. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Great upload more chapters update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update
Hey there, Pokémon/Beast-Taming enthusiasts! Here's what you can expect from this fan fiction: 1. Main Character: #Anti-Hero. No other explanation needed. 2. Setting: A reimagined Pokémon world with a dark twist, taking place shortly before Ash embarks on his journey. 3. Plot: Mature storyline free from clichéd harems and stereotypical dense protagonists. MC uses intelligence instead of emotions to make decisions. 4. System: #Non-Sentient. Dodged a bullet there. 5. Pace: Starts slow to set the background, picks up later when MC leaves spawn point. And there you have it. Peace Out.