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I'm bad at writing these ans rating them so I just go with the simple thing, but I must say this story is amazing and I hope the author could keep updating thia but idk it says completed
Please come back and continue! 🥺 This is too good to be left discontinued! 🥺
it would have been better is the author actually understood how the omnitrix works because there was so much nonsense when it came to Ben's powers.
Just stumbleing along this novel in my library lifted my mood it is truly one of my favorites. And i will keep it it saved as a memento to the joy it gave me.. I hope your life is amazing author.
A slow paced Fanfiction centered around Ben and Gwen dealing with PTSD in a realistic and cute way. I highly recommend it to someone who wants to read a love drama. If you want action and the good old Ben 10 formula this is not for you.
Gret story but i have to say it. I hate the Ending.I know it is one of the best way to finish it but I hate this types of Endings where you have to imagine how it cold go.In any case I really loved it and for the Ending it is just one of my preferences but I hope that you who are reading this review could still giving it a try, it deserves it
one of my favourite things available on this app is this fanfic. i definitely wouldn't have thought someone can write such a mesmerising realistic and beautiful ben 10 fanfic. and this just does it. this is realistic. set after he secrets of the Omnitrix it carries on that same note. even more so by the latest chapters. though i don't know if it's completed or not. i only read till 23.. I'm scared to read the last 2... what if it's not completed ? i don't like reading something that's been dropped so i give this review here in the hopes that it gets completed someday. and also. authors writing is very good though there were miss punctuations here and there it was more then fun to read it .
Im loving this story, its realistic in that no child would be okay after going Through what they did. And that its not just a straight shot. So to speak theres ups and downs.all in all solid read.
Quick question. Romance tagg in relation to what? Does it mean this story narrates a romantic aspect of the life of the regular ben 10 or it's going to be a lemon story ? or maybe Ben x Gwen ?
I don't know who u are. But i come back once again to say this has stuck with me. Even years later. Its still one of my top 10. I love geinuingly love what youve written here.
I'm bad at writing these ans rating them so I just go with the simple thing, but I must say this story is amazing and I hope the author could keep updating thia but idk it says completed
Please come back and continue! 🥺 This is too good to be left discontinued! 🥺
it would have been better is the author actually understood how the omnitrix works because there was so much nonsense when it came to Ben's powers.
Just stumbleing along this novel in my library lifted my mood it is truly one of my favorites. And i will keep it it saved as a memento to the joy it gave me.. I hope your life is amazing author.
A slow paced Fanfiction centered around Ben and Gwen dealing with PTSD in a realistic and cute way. I highly recommend it to someone who wants to read a love drama. If you want action and the good old Ben 10 formula this is not for you.
Gret story but i have to say it. I hate the Ending.I know it is one of the best way to finish it but I hate this types of Endings where you have to imagine how it cold go.In any case I really loved it and for the Ending it is just one of my preferences but I hope that you who are reading this review could still giving it a try, it deserves it
one of my favourite things available on this app is this fanfic. i definitely wouldn't have thought someone can write such a mesmerising realistic and beautiful ben 10 fanfic. and this just does it. this is realistic. set after he secrets of the Omnitrix it carries on that same note. even more so by the latest chapters. though i don't know if it's completed or not. i only read till 23.. I'm scared to read the last 2... what if it's not completed ? i don't like reading something that's been dropped so i give this review here in the hopes that it gets completed someday. and also. authors writing is very good though there were miss punctuations here and there it was more then fun to read it .
Im loving this story, its realistic in that no child would be okay after going Through what they did. And that its not just a straight shot. So to speak theres ups and downs.all in all solid read.
Quick question. Romance tagg in relation to what? Does it mean this story narrates a romantic aspect of the life of the regular ben 10 or it's going to be a lemon story ? or maybe Ben x Gwen ?
I don't know who u are. But i come back once again to say this has stuck with me. Even years later. Its still one of my top 10. I love geinuingly love what youve written here.