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Loooooove this story. Hope they update sooooon. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Please update soon your ideas are amazing and I would love to explore the world you painted
did you get this idea from god of games cause i am pretty sure he made this kind of novel first.
good story but dropped.......................................................................................................................................
interesting but very little..... =( continuation please!!! It is interesting to see how the plot develops, what else will the hero come up with?? what other worlds will there be? world of warcraft?
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A good and original concept with likable characters and entertaining story, I am curious to where this leads and really hope the author keeps writing this.
Очень хорошо редко такую историю найдешь а так работа и правда хороша , хотелось бы побольше узнать о герое и его мире , а как идея создать священный орден из Узумаки и какие способности у них ещё будут
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Not only is it original, can be in multiple worlds, and even better it's not chinase. It has great potencial, hope that it can be a great and famous book.
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best job in the world xD......,.................. . . ...........ᕙ[･･]ᕗᕙ( : ˘ ∧ ˘ : )ᕗᕙ( ͡◉ ͜ ʖ ͡◉)ᕗᕙ[･･]ᕗ୧( ಠ Д ಠ )୨ᕙ( ͡◉ ͜ ʖ ͡◉)ᕗ୧(＾ 〰 ＾)୨୧(＾ 〰 ＾)୨୧( ಠ Д ಠ )୨ᕙ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ᕗ . .
Bro no había leído algo tan genial en mucho tiempo pero podrías destruir Konoha o al menos ponerles las cosas difíciles después de todo conspiraron contra husumaki y el trato a naruto
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bro you have a refreshing story even though the MC is a god he's not like op at the beginning but maybe it won't last long because if the MC just observes till the end it will be boring ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The kingdom of God has come near. Repent and believe the good news! John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God. For more information: youtube.com/@PastorPatrickWinfrey
I read the recent chapter of 30. I highly enjoyed this story so far, and I am looking forward to more. I think the other reviews do an excellent job of explaining the uniqueness of this story. The snippet of detail in the wording would be the only issue I saw. Overall, this is a decent story at 4.8/5.
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It's a really really great fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍😍 I like how you make MC/Apollo a God in Naruto world.. How he have a great and innovative ways to get a follower/believer.. It really intrigue me so much that I can't stop to read it 😍👍👍 I hope you can save Uzumaki clan from destruction (and any other clans which have the same destiny like Uzumaki, like Yuki, Uchiha, Kaguya, etc) Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great job author sama 😁😁👍👍👍
Superbe histoire, j'ai adoré le nouveau concept et la logique de ce nouveau point de vue. C'est vraiment rafraîchissant de voir quelque chose de nouveau. Merci pour celà.
wow wow wow i like the idea its funny in good way[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good fic, people shouldn't be reviewing without reading the book ig that's why webnovel lets authors delete comments, still think it's stupid but can see a reason for it now ig.
good ff, very interesting, but I would add certain restrictions to the use of the ring: 1.- only believers can use it, which has a function to measure people's faith. 2.- The ring cannot be used by anyone other than the owner, and the owner can lend it only of his own free will. 3.- Knowledge cannot be copied, this serves so that knowledge is not spread to bad people, such as Danzo or Madara. 4.- The knowledge would have to be divided into levels, the deeper the subject, the higher the level needed, and this level would have to be measured based on your label as a believer. 5.- In the previous point I mention the label of believer, and I mean measuring people's faith and dividing them into eg. normal believer, devout believer, apostle, etc. 6 .- the mc will have to set their valance or their morality with respect to their believers. 7.- The store could have emblems of Apollo, holy clothes, etc. They are just ideas, which would surely help to deepen the system that the MC wants to implement, but so far I see many more 'buts' in the future, unless the author believes that everything will turn out well by implementing a system that distributes information. Willy-nilly.
Very Amazing fanfic, and Author will you continue uploading more chapters for this and the marvel gamer making system fanfic? Please do because the content and plots are awesome.
Loooooove this story. Hope they update sooooon. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Please update soon your ideas are amazing and I would love to explore the world you painted
did you get this idea from god of games cause i am pretty sure he made this kind of novel first.
good story but dropped.......................................................................................................................................
interesting but very little..... =( continuation please!!! It is interesting to see how the plot develops, what else will the hero come up with?? what other worlds will there be? world of warcraft?
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A good and original concept with likable characters and entertaining story, I am curious to where this leads and really hope the author keeps writing this.
Очень хорошо редко такую историю найдешь а так работа и правда хороша , хотелось бы побольше узнать о герое и его мире , а как идея создать священный орден из Узумаки и какие способности у них ещё будут
Ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok on ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ko ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok lk ok kk ok ok ok ok
Not only is it original, can be in multiple worlds, and even better it's not chinase. It has great potencial, hope that it can be a great and famous book.
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
best job in the world xD......,.................. . . ...........ᕙ[･･]ᕗᕙ( : ˘ ∧ ˘ : )ᕗᕙ( ͡◉ ͜ ʖ ͡◉)ᕗᕙ[･･]ᕗ୧( ಠ Д ಠ )୨ᕙ( ͡◉ ͜ ʖ ͡◉)ᕗ୧(＾ 〰 ＾)୨୧(＾ 〰 ＾)୨୧( ಠ Д ಠ )୨ᕙ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ᕗ . .
Bro no había leído algo tan genial en mucho tiempo pero podrías destruir Konoha o al menos ponerles las cosas difíciles después de todo conspiraron contra husumaki y el trato a naruto
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bro you have a refreshing story even though the MC is a god he's not like op at the beginning but maybe it won't last long because if the MC just observes till the end it will be boring ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The kingdom of God has come near. Repent and believe the good news! John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God. For more information: youtube.com/@PastorPatrickWinfrey
I read the recent chapter of 30. I highly enjoyed this story so far, and I am looking forward to more. I think the other reviews do an excellent job of explaining the uniqueness of this story. The snippet of detail in the wording would be the only issue I saw. Overall, this is a decent story at 4.8/5.
I don't have much to say. I just WANT MORE! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's a really really great fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍😍 I like how you make MC/Apollo a God in Naruto world.. How he have a great and innovative ways to get a follower/believer.. It really intrigue me so much that I can't stop to read it 😍👍👍 I hope you can save Uzumaki clan from destruction (and any other clans which have the same destiny like Uzumaki, like Yuki, Uchiha, Kaguya, etc) Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great job author sama 😁😁👍👍👍
Superbe histoire, j'ai adoré le nouveau concept et la logique de ce nouveau point de vue. C'est vraiment rafraîchissant de voir quelque chose de nouveau. Merci pour celà.
wow wow wow i like the idea its funny in good way[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good fic, people shouldn't be reviewing without reading the book ig that's why webnovel lets authors delete comments, still think it's stupid but can see a reason for it now ig.
good ff, very interesting, but I would add certain restrictions to the use of the ring: 1.- only believers can use it, which has a function to measure people's faith. 2.- The ring cannot be used by anyone other than the owner, and the owner can lend it only of his own free will. 3.- Knowledge cannot be copied, this serves so that knowledge is not spread to bad people, such as Danzo or Madara. 4.- The knowledge would have to be divided into levels, the deeper the subject, the higher the level needed, and this level would have to be measured based on your label as a believer. 5.- In the previous point I mention the label of believer, and I mean measuring people's faith and dividing them into eg. normal believer, devout believer, apostle, etc. 6 .- the mc will have to set their valance or their morality with respect to their believers. 7.- The store could have emblems of Apollo, holy clothes, etc. They are just ideas, which would surely help to deepen the system that the MC wants to implement, but so far I see many more 'buts' in the future, unless the author believes that everything will turn out well by implementing a system that distributes information. Willy-nilly.
Very Amazing fanfic, and Author will you continue uploading more chapters for this and the marvel gamer making system fanfic? Please do because the content and plots are awesome.