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His Locker sucked him into a wormhole in Space and Time.
No, it's actually true.
Next thing Ash knows, he's waking up in a building in New York City, during the Chitauri invasion, dressed in a towel and boxers. He tries to escape but then debris from the collapsing building falls onto his head sending him to a quick death.
He opens his eyes in the same building again...this time a blast from a plasma weapon ends his life.
He comes from the dead...AGAIN. And each time he dies, time is reversed and he is brought back to life.
So what's the plan?
Try to figure a way out of the time loop by whatever means possible.
If he has to learn magic and call onto unspeakable gods and entities, so be it.
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A nerd is stuck in a time loop in the m.c.u.
Eventually spans out to other universes.
Cover pic belongs to someone else.
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Interesting concept, and it's written well. it'll be difficult to sustain such a concept in the long term without it getting tedious unless you're a good writer. so far so good. The first chapter is a bit much, the dads advice is questionable at times but it all works. Doesn't seem he'll have any relationships or friendships with him going from world to world and I don't see the end goal but this could happen later as it's still a young story. overall good.
Its well written. Rather long chapters with a good quality update stability is also good. world background is 3/5 till now its mostly canon with a slight AU but you dont get to have a lot of a respective jump for worldbackground development. MC seems more like a dimwitted never give uup hounen protag with a bit of logic. The story concept is rather interesting but one can sum it up with a rather weak protag which gets thrown against OP opponents with a limited(in number) respawn upon death. Which he uses massiveley against his opponents since they are always leagues above him. He gains power for the risks but it is really unproportional. That sadly lets the story develop in a way that it is mostly fit for masochists if you like to immerse yourself in the story from a MC POV. Alternatively if you like drama/tragedy the story development might also be likable.
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I really liked story at start but then first reward was hardening and my mood went down, he gets nothing after dying and fighting against stronger enemies and he fought against demigod in second quest but there also got nothing good after dying so many times..... It frustrated so much that I thought that mc's should suicide if he is not getting good power after trying so many times
what a story, have dropped after 22 chapters. First the MC was soso, i don't like him but the biggest problem is the story is all over the place. The MC is in over his head. First in mcu the chitauri invasion as a normal being, then with hardening quirk against Lancer Qu Qulaine. That direct after the fight in mcu and he killed lancer. The rewards are proportional to the danger and only a Legion ring with them he can fly. 3. Mission hold the Heaven in Percy Jackson difficult 500 loops. More loops = harder Mission and Fate was only 30or35 loops. Emergency mission in Bleach from urahara and then lovecraftian horror what is absolute not bleach conform, from a cautios character Urahara that has never used the hogyoku the absolute OP Treasure and now he will make a contract with Cthulhu a Outer God that i think can kill urahara with a look. Contract was for 6Months started after >Menos Grande fight also beginning from Bleach. Stabile updates, good writing quality a idiot MC
I’ll be honest… I don’t usually write reviews but this book was just that good In terms of character development the author made sure our wonderful mc keeps growing beautifully and his “design” was very nicely done in that it all makes sense from a logical standpoint The interactions between characters are done quite alright if not amazingly The other characters are done in such a way that they don’t feel lacking as compared to their OG counterparts The worlds’ themselves are depicted just as well and the mystery behind everything that’s happening to him is so intriguing I quite love how everything is contributing to the overall story development and I see how each loop and each world affects him The only reason I gave it a 4.8 is because I’m quite miffed that it is discontinued I would’ve given it a 4.2 but the story, the idea behind it, and the execution were done well enough that I wish there was more
If you want to read a loop fanfic actually about marvel,read marvel:the perfect run. it's better than this fake 'Marvel' loop fanfic
Story started good. Tags for Marvel and DC, so that is what I expected. He then immediately jumped to Fate and then to Bleach, neither of which I have seen, and then adds almost no world background so I have no clue what is happening. It seems author plans to stay on both anime for a while, so I unfortunately had to stop reading.
Timeloop in Multiverse. Multiverse hoping. I read the story thinking it was only the Marvel universe, i didn't note the DC tag, my mistake i think. but other anime universes are there too, and i haven't watched the series for the next mission of 'Marvelous loop'. Anyway nice story author. Keep up the good work. I have enjoyed the Marvel timeloop.
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Ideia interessante porém a história é totalmente confusa tentando se manter com muitos buracos na trama.. ................................................................
Nice storytelling wonderful concept the characters and plot seemed so natural and expressive
I truly hope the author continues this story it's not often I find fanfiction that I truly enjoy usually they devolve into power fantasy's or wish fulfillment it shows great dedication to keep a story like this on track and keep it interesting I hope the character doesn't become too overpowered too quickly and I want to see him grow and enjoy his time in these universes
I like it. However, the ending for the Bleach Arc was really unnecessary which dropped my rating. Idk if author has intended something for the future chapters but for now, I don't know why you made the ending.
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The action is good story good The character is too aggront like some of the promblem could be easily solve Like some examples of this is he too aggront to let the heros to save him after he finished his mission
It's good. "Protagonist dumb" my brother in Christ this MC is so hypercompetent he somehow managed to kill a sorcerer while still on his first set of time loops, armed with nothing but a bunch of scavenged weapons.
I only review on stuff that I enjoy and think it is worth it. This novel is one of the few good ones on this platform. I want you to know that I love the idea and execution. I hope that you can continue writing it with your ideas and not be influenced by other too much. Any good novel needs to have struggle to make it good. So please keep writing chapters.
Excellent writing doesn't make all characters act the same or dumb they keep their original character with a bit of creativity and fun writing very well done
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The story started well until he jumped to Fate..................................................................................................