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the only decent aspect of this, is the concept itself. I hope someone writes a different version so I can actually enjoy it. everything else about this book so far is terrible. terrible spelling, terrible sentence structure. constantly forgetting words. inconsistent mc and absolutely no character development beyond the abilities themselves which are so op it makes his adventure boring since there isn't anything dangerous to mc.
Overall, it’s a decent read. The grammar is a bit off due to the author not being 100% fluent in English but that is a nonissue unless you’re a windowlicker. The books is well past the ‘third world’ which can be seen by looking at the chapters. It’s a good effort by the author and a relativly enjoyable story if you can overlook the spelling issues and little intricacies like verbal tics and speech patterns that the author subconsciously uses.
I've only read till chapter 6 so I might be wrong, but there is a Harem tag in this fanfic but the author said in the comments of the first chapter that there won't be a Harem in this fanfic.... A lie? I don't know... Besides that there are quite a few grammar mistakes. Many times I have read a sentence and couldn't understand it, I had to read it multiple times before I managed to understand what the author meant to write... Also, the plot for some reason progress exactly as the movie, instead of trying to change it and do it more conveniently, the MC doesn't then do anything!! Let the map to the City of Gold get burned and many other things he knows I'm going to happen and yet doesn't change them. For me seeing all those missed opportunities is too frustrating to continue reading
looks like a translation from Chinese. My IQ getting lower and my brain cell is roasted
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There is no development at all, the character from the first to the second world is already so strong that he can do whatever he wants, simply the power escalation was so fast that it was not funny at all.
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Para que me gustó el diseño del personaje muy troll sigue asi +++±+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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eu gostei , gostei bastante do ritmo e da configuração dos personagens canônicos , ainda mais que essa historia realmente mostra que é para se divertir acima de tudo
this book is ................just Don't know what to say just go read and prepare some anti-addiction drugs you will need it not to get too addicted
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Writing quality is lower then the floor, though not quite in the basement.
The first few chapters and chinese is really strong with this one. I downloaded the chapters so I had no way of knowing if this was a translation or anything. And now Opened my limited İnternet Just to comment how bad this is.
Absolute garbage between the grammer the useless mc and the rushed writingthe fact the MC is just another garbage sideshow Chinese MC this is basically the movie's being copy and pasted and the MC adding obnoxious childish comments save your time and brain cells and just ignore this fic
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One of the best fanfics I have read so far. It is so addicting for me. Please keep uploading more chapters.
This is gold A true masterpiece I really hope the author constantly release chapters
Fun to read,at first it was hard to read bit later it's okay, It is a slice of life story ,so it's not suitable for those who like mysterious. And also if you don't like OP MC this is not suitable for you.
mas capitulo, pero deberían meter mas mundos y lo malo diría que el protagonista se cheto demasiado rapido, viera sido mejor tener un desarrollo de poder
eu gostei bastante , mas estou preocupado se o autor parou de escrever ou descartou a história..................................... ......... ........ ........ ........ .......
You get a truly OP MC for the first 2 worlds. Then at chapter 60 or around there. He suddenly acts like hes 15 and like a soy boy cuck and starts trying to have a relationship with a 15-17 year old girl. Even though its stated hes at least mid 30's. VERY NOT COOL! He goes from OP awesome fun guy to crying and bowing before a woman who is almost 20 years younger then him. And this is supposedly a DRAGON GOD?!?!?!?! This along with the badly written dialog I could get over because the author is not a native english speaker but along with how the story is going its too much to take.
it seems like it would be a good quality novel but the writing quality is so bad I just can't continue reading you can tell English isn't their first language and they didn't get a native English speak to edit and make it readable imo
Here we go, an honest assessment from a disappointed reader here [Chapter 264]. This novel at the beginning was very good, very well written and with a good character, the proposal was good and it hooked me [I read the entire novel in 12 hours]. Now, this novel was ruined by the protagonist's simple-minded personality. The harem was absolutely forced and ridiculous and completely ruined the reading experience. It was preferable to have no wife and this deception of a harem here. Many authors forget that there are types of stories and genres in which protagonists who become brain dead at the sight of a woman simply don't fit! I don't recommend reading this, it's a complete waste of your time, besides the fact that the story was paused indefinitely because the author decided to disappear.
the only decent aspect of this, is the concept itself. I hope someone writes a different version so I can actually enjoy it. everything else about this book so far is terrible. terrible spelling, terrible sentence structure. constantly forgetting words. inconsistent mc and absolutely no character development beyond the abilities themselves which are so op it makes his adventure boring since there isn't anything dangerous to mc.
Overall, it’s a decent read. The grammar is a bit off due to the author not being 100% fluent in English but that is a nonissue unless you’re a windowlicker. The books is well past the ‘third world’ which can be seen by looking at the chapters. It’s a good effort by the author and a relativly enjoyable story if you can overlook the spelling issues and little intricacies like verbal tics and speech patterns that the author subconsciously uses.
I've only read till chapter 6 so I might be wrong, but there is a Harem tag in this fanfic but the author said in the comments of the first chapter that there won't be a Harem in this fanfic.... A lie? I don't know... Besides that there are quite a few grammar mistakes. Many times I have read a sentence and couldn't understand it, I had to read it multiple times before I managed to understand what the author meant to write... Also, the plot for some reason progress exactly as the movie, instead of trying to change it and do it more conveniently, the MC doesn't then do anything!! Let the map to the City of Gold get burned and many other things he knows I'm going to happen and yet doesn't change them. For me seeing all those missed opportunities is too frustrating to continue reading
looks like a translation from Chinese. My IQ getting lower and my brain cell is roasted
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MORE PLEASEEE update so slow ;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;-;-;;;-;-;-;;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;;- I CAN UNDERSTAND ITTT MY BRAIN CORRECTS THE GRAMMAR ANYWAY JUST UpDATEE
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There is no development at all, the character from the first to the second world is already so strong that he can do whatever he wants, simply the power escalation was so fast that it was not funny at all.
揭示劇透 Para que me gustó el diseño del personaje muy troll sigue asi +++±+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
揭示劇透 eu gostei , gostei bastante do ritmo e da configuração dos personagens canônicos , ainda mais que essa historia realmente mostra que é para se divertir acima de tudo
this book is ................just Don't know what to say just go read and prepare some anti-addiction drugs you will need it not to get too addicted
Cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooòooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool.Awesommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmme
Writing quality is lower then the floor, though not quite in the basement.
The first few chapters and chinese is really strong with this one. I downloaded the chapters so I had no way of knowing if this was a translation or anything. And now Opened my limited İnternet Just to comment how bad this is.
Absolute garbage between the grammer the useless mc and the rushed writingthe fact the MC is just another garbage sideshow Chinese MC this is basically the movie's being copy and pasted and the MC adding obnoxious childish comments save your time and brain cells and just ignore this fic
Muy entretenido. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🙃🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🙃🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🙃🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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One of the best fanfics I have read so far. It is so addicting for me. Please keep uploading more chapters.
This is gold A true masterpiece I really hope the author constantly release chapters
Fun to read,at first it was hard to read bit later it's okay, It is a slice of life story ,so it's not suitable for those who like mysterious. And also if you don't like OP MC this is not suitable for you.
mas capitulo, pero deberían meter mas mundos y lo malo diría que el protagonista se cheto demasiado rapido, viera sido mejor tener un desarrollo de poder
eu gostei bastante , mas estou preocupado se o autor parou de escrever ou descartou a história..................................... ......... ........ ........ ........ .......
You get a truly OP MC for the first 2 worlds. Then at chapter 60 or around there. He suddenly acts like hes 15 and like a soy boy cuck and starts trying to have a relationship with a 15-17 year old girl. Even though its stated hes at least mid 30's. VERY NOT COOL! He goes from OP awesome fun guy to crying and bowing before a woman who is almost 20 years younger then him. And this is supposedly a DRAGON GOD?!?!?!?! This along with the badly written dialog I could get over because the author is not a native english speaker but along with how the story is going its too much to take.
it seems like it would be a good quality novel but the writing quality is so bad I just can't continue reading you can tell English isn't their first language and they didn't get a native English speak to edit and make it readable imo
Here we go, an honest assessment from a disappointed reader here [Chapter 264]. This novel at the beginning was very good, very well written and with a good character, the proposal was good and it hooked me [I read the entire novel in 12 hours]. Now, this novel was ruined by the protagonist's simple-minded personality. The harem was absolutely forced and ridiculous and completely ruined the reading experience. It was preferable to have no wife and this deception of a harem here. Many authors forget that there are types of stories and genres in which protagonists who become brain dead at the sight of a woman simply don't fit! I don't recommend reading this, it's a complete waste of your time, besides the fact that the story was paused indefinitely because the author decided to disappear.