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Updated review at 270chapters+ Romance? Yes. Harem? Still no. Existential Dread? Yes. Identity Crises? Yes. OP? Yesn't. The second volume focuses a lot on the characters, who they are, their past, and their interactions with one another. If you expect non-stop Devouring and Evolving, this might not be to your tastes. (Something that should have been made clear before the second volume) Also, my favorite genre is Seinen so... Yeah. That's the general vibe I am going with. Character interactions and development are very important to me, so I don't plan on skipping or cutting them short(for the most part). Also, I'm big on foreshadowing and callbacks. So if something doesn't seem to make sense, it will. I can only hope that my writing will be good enough to bring out the novel's potential! Hope that clears some stuff up, as I wouldn't like any of you to feel frustrated from the novel not being what you're looking for. And with that, happy reading all! -Author. P.S.: It's a five-star review because I love the novel. P.S.S.: I'd like to thank all of the loyal readers who enjoy the novel by my side. It is thanks to you all that we have gotten this far! Join the Discord Server to share what you expect, what you want to see happen, or even what you don't want to see happen.
It's a surprisingly good novel. I was expecting it to be a very Please share a system novel that doesn't add anything to itself. I was very happily surprised when reading this that it Took multiple different twists and turns and hardly followed cliche's period I can't recommend this book enough and honestly if it had even more chapters. I would love it even more. But now I have to sit here and wait. 3 or 4 months so I can get a good stock pile to start reading. And it's gonna be torturous, but it's worth it.
Please don't stop writing Its so good The way you write the mc inner struggles is simply amazing
the needless pride is annoying ngl , arguing with underlings for saving your life ? its dumb asf
icl i came on harsh to the author when it was a smol novel with only a few chapters like a year ago about scaling/upgrades/evolution stuff which made me stop reading for a bit. after coming back to it ive re-read it and safe to say im happy with the quality upgrade this got. good stuff adam 👌
The story is good, not really going to go into detail about that, what i want to talk about in the review is the surprising romance later in the novel, it took me by surprise not being there is romance but because of how gradual, detailed, and well written it is. I don’t think i’ve ever read another novel that actually went about romance in a good well written way like this has, very impressed by it and i enjoy it very much.
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Smart MC ✅Ruthless MC✅Romance ✅Harem❌Past insecurities ✅Good Writting ✅Twisted MC ✅Rebirth life crisis ✅Therepy ✅Hidden 💎 ✅Goals, Ambitions, ❌
This story is a masterpiece it is soo good thanks for writing this story but chapter release are slow so please upload chapters faster. Thanks!!!
Its good. Compared to other "reborn as dungeon monster" narratives, it's miles ahead. Unlike other novels which make the MC spend 75% of the novel in the dungeon, we've been out for a while now. The start isn't that special, but it doesn't take long for things to get interesting. Inner monologues of characters, including the MC, help narrate their own understanding of themselves. You can read about their actions and come to understand that yourself earlier, but, the author still has these narrations to help make the characters come to life. Its great. Later on these moments are even more vivid. The fights are not my favorite, but they are good. They do feel drawn out but also well paced. Weird. This novel won't end soon. Too many things to explore.
I remember leaving a review saying i hate Elisa bc she drags out the story and ruins the mc, Im back to say that Elisa is amazing but still for some reason whenever she was introduced and they finally got out of the dungeon everything feels so pointless? Mark will spend dozens of chapters thinking abt somethimg and get really close to and answer amd them BOOM elisa comes right when he almost has am amswer and he completely forgets everything. Love the story and love Elisa but author please dont drag out something for so many chapters with dumb interuptions, its so cliche. The mc will continue to almost be at the brink of something and it gets me on the edge of my seat (Its been ten chapters of just him brainstorming) them for whatever reason the mc will be like "thinking is too much for me right now" making the previous ten chapters pointless. All i want is progression. There is no need for an arc to consist of a drawn out fight where the same thing is continually repeated and a pointless brainstorm over and over again. it takes a solid 50 chapters for any progress to be seen. but i do.... love the tiny interactions between the three krista mark elisa, its just nice... but 20 chapters straight of these interactions can be a bit.... draining. Anyway love the story it truly is just enchanting. The story development is the ONLY bad thing abt this beautiful journey!!!!
fml yandere? .........................................................................................................................................
The beginning is a bit boring and banal, but over time (quite quickly) it gains depth and evolves like MC. The characters are lively and interesting, the world: the more you learn about it, the more you want to know. The whole novel is very pleasant, the only thing that bothers me a lot is Elisa, I'm not talking about the character but rather about her negative impact on the MC, in my opinion, and I think his titles would agree with me hah.
This is a pretty good fantasy and action novel, but if I was to classify it I would call it the best romance novel I have ever read, the supreme version of beauty and the beast
Overall a great story. Only thing I urgently request though is that the princess be killed off ASAP. Really too annoying. I’m in the 200’s now and I honestly don’t know why the MC puts up with her. Her presence makes things so complicated for no explainable reason. And she acts way to haughty for no reason. Only leads to mental demons and getting hurt. Really begging and pleading for someone to tell me if she gets killed off or separates cause from the way things are going it doesn’t seem like it. The story is good but then she opens her mouth and I want to delete the story from my library. Good thing the authors writing skills keep me hooked or else I don’t know what I would’ve done.
Grammar is good and character development is also good. Although Mc made some dumb choices at the start, it was a good story to read. Overall, this novel is a banger.
great story so far! mc def frustrated me a bit in the begining because of his 'idiocy', which got a very good reason layer down the line.spoiler alert:really like the esteregg with gaavah being pride in hebrew (:
Love the story, love the fights, love the development, and absolute love the writing style. If I could change one thing it would be the princess, she makes the story go soooooo slow, it's killing me to keep reading. Human to monster, monster to monster... It matters to the mc but it takes away sooo much of the fights, exploration, new skills, parts, and mechanics. THE AUTHOR'S EASY WAY OUT.
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Dude !!! this is just like Dorian from "reborn evolving from nothing" finally someone makes a book like that thanks so much I'd lick you if I could🤤
Author please don't dare drop this novel and take it to above five hundred chapters I simply love it soo much 🙏🏻🙇
I have spent more money on topping up for this story than almost any other... very good read
At first I hated it, I don’t know what the silly goose of an author was doing but after chapter 25 it does start to grow on you and the story does get better.
I started reading without really expecting much, thinking this would be just another "random thing with a system" novel... but honestly, I very much enjoy the story, pacing and style, more than I ever thought I would! It's quickly become one of my favourite novels and kept me up for hours while I should have been asleep, leaving me unwilling to stop reading. I also feel as if you can truly notice the writing improve the further you read, even though it was already good at the beginning. I look forward to see the story progress. Awesome work, dear author! <3
This is my first web novel and though I did not fully catch up I know for a fact that this web novel is going to create a new addiction for me to read more web novels
Does he go to human world ....or he will be stuck in the dungeon?... Bring the humans in mann. ..
I love this book but you are dumb for making this a pay for chapter book I was here at the very begging
Im not a good reviewer so i can only say try this novel you won’t regret it..............…………….............................................OMG really 140
The story truly reads like an anime/show. I love the MC and the growth of the characters so far. Although I do hope that Light gets a little more love here soon. The story isn’t exactly original but the use of these “titles” are unique in a way and I think that the author is getting better at painting nice vivid mental images when needed. Side character perspective are nice also. I’ve read a little under 140 chapters and I’m hooked. Only things I would like to critique but not really is for the auther not to over look certain detail like items, powers, or emotions when going forwards in the story. We remember everything that happens or doesn’t happen. Keep up the good work. Also please throw Light a bone lol
Updated review at 270chapters+ Romance? Yes. Harem? Still no. Existential Dread? Yes. Identity Crises? Yes. OP? Yesn't. The second volume focuses a lot on the characters, who they are, their past, and their interactions with one another. If you expect non-stop Devouring and Evolving, this might not be to your tastes. (Something that should have been made clear before the second volume) Also, my favorite genre is Seinen so... Yeah. That's the general vibe I am going with. Character interactions and development are very important to me, so I don't plan on skipping or cutting them short(for the most part). Also, I'm big on foreshadowing and callbacks. So if something doesn't seem to make sense, it will. I can only hope that my writing will be good enough to bring out the novel's potential! Hope that clears some stuff up, as I wouldn't like any of you to feel frustrated from the novel not being what you're looking for. And with that, happy reading all! -Author. P.S.: It's a five-star review because I love the novel. P.S.S.: I'd like to thank all of the loyal readers who enjoy the novel by my side. It is thanks to you all that we have gotten this far! Join the Discord Server to share what you expect, what you want to see happen, or even what you don't want to see happen.
It's a surprisingly good novel. I was expecting it to be a very Please share a system novel that doesn't add anything to itself. I was very happily surprised when reading this that it Took multiple different twists and turns and hardly followed cliche's period I can't recommend this book enough and honestly if it had even more chapters. I would love it even more. But now I have to sit here and wait. 3 or 4 months so I can get a good stock pile to start reading. And it's gonna be torturous, but it's worth it.
Please don't stop writing Its so good The way you write the mc inner struggles is simply amazing
the needless pride is annoying ngl , arguing with underlings for saving your life ? its dumb asf
icl i came on harsh to the author when it was a smol novel with only a few chapters like a year ago about scaling/upgrades/evolution stuff which made me stop reading for a bit. after coming back to it ive re-read it and safe to say im happy with the quality upgrade this got. good stuff adam 👌
The story is good, not really going to go into detail about that, what i want to talk about in the review is the surprising romance later in the novel, it took me by surprise not being there is romance but because of how gradual, detailed, and well written it is. I don’t think i’ve ever read another novel that actually went about romance in a good well written way like this has, very impressed by it and i enjoy it very much.
揭示劇透 Smart MC ✅Ruthless MC✅Romance ✅Harem❌Past insecurities ✅Good Writting ✅Twisted MC ✅Rebirth life crisis ✅Therepy ✅Hidden 💎 ✅Goals, Ambitions, ❌
This story is a masterpiece it is soo good thanks for writing this story but chapter release are slow so please upload chapters faster. Thanks!!!
Its good. Compared to other "reborn as dungeon monster" narratives, it's miles ahead. Unlike other novels which make the MC spend 75% of the novel in the dungeon, we've been out for a while now. The start isn't that special, but it doesn't take long for things to get interesting. Inner monologues of characters, including the MC, help narrate their own understanding of themselves. You can read about their actions and come to understand that yourself earlier, but, the author still has these narrations to help make the characters come to life. Its great. Later on these moments are even more vivid. The fights are not my favorite, but they are good. They do feel drawn out but also well paced. Weird. This novel won't end soon. Too many things to explore.
I remember leaving a review saying i hate Elisa bc she drags out the story and ruins the mc, Im back to say that Elisa is amazing but still for some reason whenever she was introduced and they finally got out of the dungeon everything feels so pointless? Mark will spend dozens of chapters thinking abt somethimg and get really close to and answer amd them BOOM elisa comes right when he almost has am amswer and he completely forgets everything. Love the story and love Elisa but author please dont drag out something for so many chapters with dumb interuptions, its so cliche. The mc will continue to almost be at the brink of something and it gets me on the edge of my seat (Its been ten chapters of just him brainstorming) them for whatever reason the mc will be like "thinking is too much for me right now" making the previous ten chapters pointless. All i want is progression. There is no need for an arc to consist of a drawn out fight where the same thing is continually repeated and a pointless brainstorm over and over again. it takes a solid 50 chapters for any progress to be seen. but i do.... love the tiny interactions between the three krista mark elisa, its just nice... but 20 chapters straight of these interactions can be a bit.... draining. Anyway love the story it truly is just enchanting. The story development is the ONLY bad thing abt this beautiful journey!!!!
fml yandere? .........................................................................................................................................
The beginning is a bit boring and banal, but over time (quite quickly) it gains depth and evolves like MC. The characters are lively and interesting, the world: the more you learn about it, the more you want to know. The whole novel is very pleasant, the only thing that bothers me a lot is Elisa, I'm not talking about the character but rather about her negative impact on the MC, in my opinion, and I think his titles would agree with me hah.
This is a pretty good fantasy and action novel, but if I was to classify it I would call it the best romance novel I have ever read, the supreme version of beauty and the beast
Overall a great story. Only thing I urgently request though is that the princess be killed off ASAP. Really too annoying. I’m in the 200’s now and I honestly don’t know why the MC puts up with her. Her presence makes things so complicated for no explainable reason. And she acts way to haughty for no reason. Only leads to mental demons and getting hurt. Really begging and pleading for someone to tell me if she gets killed off or separates cause from the way things are going it doesn’t seem like it. The story is good but then she opens her mouth and I want to delete the story from my library. Good thing the authors writing skills keep me hooked or else I don’t know what I would’ve done.
Grammar is good and character development is also good. Although Mc made some dumb choices at the start, it was a good story to read. Overall, this novel is a banger.
great story so far! mc def frustrated me a bit in the begining because of his 'idiocy', which got a very good reason layer down the line.spoiler alert:really like the esteregg with gaavah being pride in hebrew (:
Love the story, love the fights, love the development, and absolute love the writing style. If I could change one thing it would be the princess, she makes the story go soooooo slow, it's killing me to keep reading. Human to monster, monster to monster... It matters to the mc but it takes away sooo much of the fights, exploration, new skills, parts, and mechanics. THE AUTHOR'S EASY WAY OUT.
揭示劇透 Dude !!! this is just like Dorian from "reborn evolving from nothing" finally someone makes a book like that thanks so much I'd lick you if I could🤤
Author please don't dare drop this novel and take it to above five hundred chapters I simply love it soo much 🙏🏻🙇
I have spent more money on topping up for this story than almost any other... very good read
At first I hated it, I don’t know what the silly goose of an author was doing but after chapter 25 it does start to grow on you and the story does get better.
I started reading without really expecting much, thinking this would be just another "random thing with a system" novel... but honestly, I very much enjoy the story, pacing and style, more than I ever thought I would! It's quickly become one of my favourite novels and kept me up for hours while I should have been asleep, leaving me unwilling to stop reading. I also feel as if you can truly notice the writing improve the further you read, even though it was already good at the beginning. I look forward to see the story progress. Awesome work, dear author! <3
This is my first web novel and though I did not fully catch up I know for a fact that this web novel is going to create a new addiction for me to read more web novels
Does he go to human world ....or he will be stuck in the dungeon?... Bring the humans in mann. ..
I love this book but you are dumb for making this a pay for chapter book I was here at the very begging
Im not a good reviewer so i can only say try this novel you won’t regret it..............…………….............................................OMG really 140
The story truly reads like an anime/show. I love the MC and the growth of the characters so far. Although I do hope that Light gets a little more love here soon. The story isn’t exactly original but the use of these “titles” are unique in a way and I think that the author is getting better at painting nice vivid mental images when needed. Side character perspective are nice also. I’ve read a little under 140 chapters and I’m hooked. Only things I would like to critique but not really is for the auther not to over look certain detail like items, powers, or emotions when going forwards in the story. We remember everything that happens or doesn’t happen. Keep up the good work. Also please throw Light a bone lol