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A good read. But needs update stability. Has a great plotline too, keep up author. You doin' good. Just make an auxiliary chapter for monster description and stuff. It gets easier to classify, the various levels and breeds.
Good Grammar, Good Character Development, Good Story Overall. Still pretty early in the novel and so far I'm loving it. Keep up the good work Author.
amazing novel has tons of potential to be in top 10 already better than some of the novel there now good action and plot and not really overpowered
Pretty good story and read. I can't wait to explore more of this stories world
for now it's too early to make a proper review because of the little content. Waiting for more updates to make a constructive criticism. However, I'm enjoying where the novel is going, so I'll give it 5 stars.
Not going lie I was looking for another novel but I found this one it was 10/10 It now one of my top 5 fav novel keep it up! ........
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A good read. But needs update stability. Has a great plotline too, keep up author. You doin' good. Just make an auxiliary chapter for monster description and stuff. It gets easier to classify, the various levels and breeds.
Good Grammar, Good Character Development, Good Story Overall. Still pretty early in the novel and so far I'm loving it. Keep up the good work Author.
amazing novel has tons of potential to be in top 10 already better than some of the novel there now good action and plot and not really overpowered
Pretty good story and read. I can't wait to explore more of this stories world
for now it's too early to make a proper review because of the little content. Waiting for more updates to make a constructive criticism. However, I'm enjoying where the novel is going, so I'll give it 5 stars.
Not going lie I was looking for another novel but I found this one it was 10/10 It now one of my top 5 fav novel keep it up! ........