/ Book&Literature / House of the Dragon: Baelon the Mighty
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(This story will be depicted through other points of view.)
Disclaimer: I do not own any of George RR Martin's franchises, if I did Young Griff would be king by now.
Follow the life and death of Baelon I Targaryen, Lord of the Seven Kingdoms. King of the Andals, the Roynar, and the First Men and Protector of the Realm, as he deals with treacherous kin, overreaching vassals, and grasping enemies.
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A.N : I had this idea for a while now, and no matter what I did it couldn't stop worming itself into my head, so I'm doing what I think is best, Write.
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I really love this book. It’s interesting what would happen if baelon didn’ t die. Like the whole reason of the dance of dragons was they didn’t want a girl as an heir. But know that Baelon lives the greens aren’ t going to get much support.
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Good story ! It's really well written , the fact that the author has the same opinions as me about blacks and greens Alicent and Raenyra are problematic and I like the fact that SI does not try to suck any of them . Team 💜
Muito bom dirá até perfeito mas infelizmente a taxa de atualização e um pouco lenta, claro o autor pode ter seus motivos entendo isso mas tirando isso está mais que perfeito
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Take a five star review for stating that Young Griff would have been a king already if you wrote the books🫡 Finally found my people
This is very good! The only complaint is the very slow update speed, but the chapters are longer than normal so that somewhat makes up for it
Did the story fall? It's very good ………………………………jsjsjdndueixjdjeididjdnejidjdnejzidnejdikdneidozjdneisjsnejsidjdjdididjjfjdjdudififffhhyrfgutrcgtisieoskdndjdioekdndjfkdkxnndkdkdodkdkdmmfmfkfockwmsnoxoxnrnr
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wonderful fic, tbh am shocked that i found such a well written and interesting fanfiction in webnovel of all places, had i not known that George R. R. Martin and his books exist i would have thought that this was some famous novel, not a fanfiction, although it did have a choppy start it got better nicely, and the main problem i have with it is that how "detached" the mc is, everything is mostly from a general pov rather than the MCs, and things move way too fast for us to delve into the mc's thoughts and personality, as of now, i have not once read about the mc's personal thought/ past lives/ and personal emotions, in fact, if not for the first few paragraphs of the story telling us, i would have never known that the mc had the memory of his past lives and their memories, for example, his life as a witcher, he never once talked about it, he never had thoughts about using runes or magic for example, instead of a fancition about an mc in the world house of the dragon, it feels more like a faction about house of the dragon with the mc in it, which makes it harder for us to relate to him, after all much of his personal life and thoughts have been skipped, the only other thing that people may dislike is how "perfect" the mc is and how everyone praises him, which leaves no room for actual character development, and again, this makes it even harder for us to relate to him and see him as a person with his own thoughts and emotions.
Great writing and the use of different POVs were well executed. The pacing is on point, no chapters wasted focusing too much on MC's infancy. Characters have their own personalities, not just some brainwashed 2D characters. Updates were meh, World Background was accurate and no asspulls so far.
Have him destroy the citadel with wildfire and make it seem the masters were experimenting with it. but before have Baelon and Otto talk about the power the citadel brought to Otto family and what would happen if it went away you know taut him a little. Then build a royal citadel but in control of the royal family or something like that.
You’re a cruel man Mr Niflheim, you make absolute banger stories but you never seem to finish them. It’s like you give water to a thirsty man in the desert and then you leave him there without any more. Why! Why! Must you do this to me?!?!