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The story is completely not understandable! The author jumps from one subject to another, not explaining anything in between, characters behaving too illogical to make sense etc. I really can't understand how this fanfic has a total review above four stars. Anyway I'll give it a one-star review and a hot recommendation for the author to rewrite it all over again since the concept was good but the execution horrible...
Like one of the best stories but is this dropped? I mean please answer this it's been 3 months and I'm getting the "dropped but don't care enough to inform the readers feeling."
I love this story very much. It’s amazing and cures boredom. And I want more, please.
good read if you like percy jackson or greek gods or just read and see ..............................................................................................................................................
I like it but I read another story like this and a lot of the idea you have I feel you may be coping I don’t know but I do not care I like it anyway
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I followed it until now and I even got interested because I really like Greek mythology, but only the parts with MC interest me, and this fanfic focuses too much on other characters that, to be honest, don't interest me at all and for me it was like parallel stories, the author said they were important, but for me these stories of these other characters are killing fanfic
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Cringiest fanfiction I ever set my eyes upon, he starts by saying that he's in the Percy Jackson universe which goes nowhere or they forget because he doesn't elaborate on this or mentions it again. Then he adds Naruto characters for some reason and does nothing with them. He goes on to add Minecraft characters to Hades and he renamed Hades(The Realm) to the END. I kid you not the cringiest thing you'll ever read It started off strong and ended up so weak it started to resemble a wet noodle best words I can describe it as.
Lovely little book, so far fun read, some side stories are not my main focus, but a good change up. Seems to be going very good so far. Percy Jackson was one of my more favorite storys, and this holds the world of several different things such as minecraft and potentially GOW series wich would be cool
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I love this story but I have a question, is it a kind of harem or will you focus on a future character to develop a relationship?🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔👀👀
OK, so I like the overall idea of this fiction but the Execution of it is just really bad. Please take this review with a grain of salt and read it to the end. CHARACTERS: None of the characters (especially the gods that aren't Hade's siblings) were truly introduced, barely even given any character. Just thrown in here and there with what seemed like little thought. The whole war against Kronos was the best time to flush out the character's of Hades, his siblings and the subordinates. To show their strengths and there weaknesses and how they become estranged to each other. There was barely any banter or conversation between most of these gods before you went straight to conflict. DEVELOPMENT: You could have gone into more detail on basic routines Hades and the other gods did to grow stronger. How Hades guided his few subordinates until they came to trust him. Really just explore a bit of what he could do with all of his powers, or least bring it up in passing. STORY: The first volume of this fiction was horribly rushed but is still the best volume of this fiction. Re-written again and not rushed, it could be a good 40- 50 chapter long read worthy of 5 stars alone. The second volume should be trashed all together. It's like a cluster of half finished short stories that don't give any background information and is loosely tied together. FINAL THOUGHTS: Has a lot of potential and should definitely be re-written. I truly hope with at least some of my criticism in mind, I would love to see this fan fic succeed. Thank you for your time.
First of all, what? The fic is very confusing and adding a fast-paced style to it without experience just makes it more confusing, I honestly couldn't follow the story. The characters are honestly bland, not bc they lack personality but bc there isn't any justification as to why they act as they act they just do and that's all To add a cherry on top the grammar isn't great and just adds up to this confusing story
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It's a very good story. The overall quality of the story is great and I really enjoyed it.
… very confusing, the premise is interesting, but the story goes at a fast pace where it seems more like a narration, then things happen just like that, for no apparent reason, leading you to a breakdown of perspective that continues to happen, finally , I expected the world to be just Percy Jackson, but when I started adding things at random I lost what little interest I already had, I mean I don't recommend it, but since it has positive comments, I imagine that there are those who like it, anyway… you can give it a try, good luck.
After reading up till chapter 17 i feel that the novel is chaotic. The writing while not the best, is pretty goof for Webnovel standards. I quite like the idea and have read other stories where the Mc is reincarnated into an Olympian, though not many of them are that good, mainly because of there grammar and sentencing. The main thing that draws down the story is the inconsistency of the narrative. Or rather that it is hard to understand what is going on. Some aspects of what happens in the story are not explained properly and lead one to be lost when they continue to read. For example, though it was explained in a reply comment from the author, it was confusing for a little when the betrayal chapter happened. It was basically Hades has woken up, been betrayed, goes and starts his own pantheon. What we find out in the next chapter is that he has been asleep, or was fighting atlas for centuries meaning that Zeus has already had his children, Area, Athena, Apollo ect. I don't personally think there was enough explanation or content to explain this fact. As it was a major fact i feel the readers should have been told as it would give clarity to what is happening. It was played more for shock and drama. But when you think of it as, Hades has been asleep for centuries, though he can rage about being replaced, it does make sense that someone else would be nominated for the position of underworld ruler with him being incapacitated. Doesn't make it right, just makes how this was written worse. To sum up: I hope the criticism can help, I find aspects you have introduced interesting but there is no clarity in the narrative structure and progression of the story, pulling this novel down.
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To be sincerely honest in my humble opinion without being sentimental of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view and without hiding any thoughts in my mind and without lies,to the actual truth with my clear open mind and clean heart,expressing what ever is embedded inside me for a long time which I didn't say just because I was nervous.But Today, by gathering all the courage and motivation, I just want to say that I actually feel and think that I have absolutely nothing to say.
before I had posted a 4 star review because it was not harem but the author still show that it wasn't harem and also it was greek mythology (favorite mythology) but even with that review the author was still nice and not like most people on the app that act like you murdered their entire family if you say you like harem. (I still ain't reading it though)
Yo guys this is the author who just noticed that he did not give himself a 5 stars review. I am a newbie author who is trying to get better, so if you have any tips or recommendations don't hesitate and tell me. You can use this review to ask me any question about the fanfic (if you want to ask me respond directly to this review or one of my comment because else I would not get a notification.) Thank you all for reading this and I hope you will enjoy my story.
The story is completely not understandable! The author jumps from one subject to another, not explaining anything in between, characters behaving too illogical to make sense etc. I really can't understand how this fanfic has a total review above four stars. Anyway I'll give it a one-star review and a hot recommendation for the author to rewrite it all over again since the concept was good but the execution horrible...
Like one of the best stories but is this dropped? I mean please answer this it's been 3 months and I'm getting the "dropped but don't care enough to inform the readers feeling."
I love this story very much. It’s amazing and cures boredom. And I want more, please.
good read if you like percy jackson or greek gods or just read and see ..............................................................................................................................................
I like it but I read another story like this and a lot of the idea you have I feel you may be coping I don’t know but I do not care I like it anyway
great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great
I followed it until now and I even got interested because I really like Greek mythology, but only the parts with MC interest me, and this fanfic focuses too much on other characters that, to be honest, don't interest me at all and for me it was like parallel stories, the author said they were important, but for me these stories of these other characters are killing fanfic
Скучно!!!! аоалвдалалвлвдвдвдвддвлвлвлвлвлвлвлвлалвлвлвлвлвллвлвлвлвлвлвлалвлвлвллвладвддвдвдвдвдвллалвльувллалаллулулвшшашвллклклалала аоалвдалалвлвдвдвдвддвлвлвлвлвлвлвлвлалвлвлвлвлвллвлвлвлвлвлвлалвлвлвллвладвддвдвдвдвдвллалвльувллалаллулулвшшашвллклклалала
Cringiest fanfiction I ever set my eyes upon, he starts by saying that he's in the Percy Jackson universe which goes nowhere or they forget because he doesn't elaborate on this or mentions it again. Then he adds Naruto characters for some reason and does nothing with them. He goes on to add Minecraft characters to Hades and he renamed Hades(The Realm) to the END. I kid you not the cringiest thing you'll ever read It started off strong and ended up so weak it started to resemble a wet noodle best words I can describe it as.
Lovely little book, so far fun read, some side stories are not my main focus, but a good change up. Seems to be going very good so far. Percy Jackson was one of my more favorite storys, and this holds the world of several different things such as minecraft and potentially GOW series wich would be cool
Next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next
I love this story but I have a question, is it a kind of harem or will you focus on a future character to develop a relationship?🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔👀👀
OK, so I like the overall idea of this fiction but the Execution of it is just really bad. Please take this review with a grain of salt and read it to the end. CHARACTERS: None of the characters (especially the gods that aren't Hade's siblings) were truly introduced, barely even given any character. Just thrown in here and there with what seemed like little thought. The whole war against Kronos was the best time to flush out the character's of Hades, his siblings and the subordinates. To show their strengths and there weaknesses and how they become estranged to each other. There was barely any banter or conversation between most of these gods before you went straight to conflict. DEVELOPMENT: You could have gone into more detail on basic routines Hades and the other gods did to grow stronger. How Hades guided his few subordinates until they came to trust him. Really just explore a bit of what he could do with all of his powers, or least bring it up in passing. STORY: The first volume of this fiction was horribly rushed but is still the best volume of this fiction. Re-written again and not rushed, it could be a good 40- 50 chapter long read worthy of 5 stars alone. The second volume should be trashed all together. It's like a cluster of half finished short stories that don't give any background information and is loosely tied together. FINAL THOUGHTS: Has a lot of potential and should definitely be re-written. I truly hope with at least some of my criticism in mind, I would love to see this fan fic succeed. Thank you for your time.
First of all, what? The fic is very confusing and adding a fast-paced style to it without experience just makes it more confusing, I honestly couldn't follow the story. The characters are honestly bland, not bc they lack personality but bc there isn't any justification as to why they act as they act they just do and that's all To add a cherry on top the grammar isn't great and just adds up to this confusing story
Wonderful fan fic but could you plzzz add more chapter 👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍❤️❤️👍❤️❤️👍❤️❤️👍👍❤️❤️❤️👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
👍🏼 kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkajjakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakakakakakakakkaakakkakahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhahahaha
It's a very good story. The overall quality of the story is great and I really enjoyed it.
… very confusing, the premise is interesting, but the story goes at a fast pace where it seems more like a narration, then things happen just like that, for no apparent reason, leading you to a breakdown of perspective that continues to happen, finally , I expected the world to be just Percy Jackson, but when I started adding things at random I lost what little interest I already had, I mean I don't recommend it, but since it has positive comments, I imagine that there are those who like it, anyway… you can give it a try, good luck.
After reading up till chapter 17 i feel that the novel is chaotic. The writing while not the best, is pretty goof for Webnovel standards. I quite like the idea and have read other stories where the Mc is reincarnated into an Olympian, though not many of them are that good, mainly because of there grammar and sentencing. The main thing that draws down the story is the inconsistency of the narrative. Or rather that it is hard to understand what is going on. Some aspects of what happens in the story are not explained properly and lead one to be lost when they continue to read. For example, though it was explained in a reply comment from the author, it was confusing for a little when the betrayal chapter happened. It was basically Hades has woken up, been betrayed, goes and starts his own pantheon. What we find out in the next chapter is that he has been asleep, or was fighting atlas for centuries meaning that Zeus has already had his children, Area, Athena, Apollo ect. I don't personally think there was enough explanation or content to explain this fact. As it was a major fact i feel the readers should have been told as it would give clarity to what is happening. It was played more for shock and drama. But when you think of it as, Hades has been asleep for centuries, though he can rage about being replaced, it does make sense that someone else would be nominated for the position of underworld ruler with him being incapacitated. Doesn't make it right, just makes how this was written worse. To sum up: I hope the criticism can help, I find aspects you have introduced interesting but there is no clarity in the narrative structure and progression of the story, pulling this novel down.
揭示劇透 To be sincerely honest in my humble opinion without being sentimental of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view and without hiding any thoughts in my mind and without lies,to the actual truth with my clear open mind and clean heart,expressing what ever is embedded inside me for a long time which I didn't say just because I was nervous.But Today, by gathering all the courage and motivation, I just want to say that I actually feel and think that I have absolutely nothing to say.
before I had posted a 4 star review because it was not harem but the author still show that it wasn't harem and also it was greek mythology (favorite mythology) but even with that review the author was still nice and not like most people on the app that act like you murdered their entire family if you say you like harem. (I still ain't reading it though)
Yo guys this is the author who just noticed that he did not give himself a 5 stars review. I am a newbie author who is trying to get better, so if you have any tips or recommendations don't hesitate and tell me. You can use this review to ask me any question about the fanfic (if you want to ask me respond directly to this review or one of my comment because else I would not get a notification.) Thank you all for reading this and I hope you will enjoy my story.