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I have read alot of naruto fanfiction this one takes the cake. Mc is a hypocrite, very pragmatic and cautious about what he does always watches for his long term benefits, a puppet master who pulls strings from the back ground, never initiates a fight unless he knows for sure he wont win. I recommend this if u liked Reverend Insanity.
MC is delusional bruh, I ain't reading this bullshit any further. MC wants to pass his pathetic bloodline to powerful Female Ninjas, as a justification to kill his parents. If you like it(don't you dare bish!) then read it
I want to say that this is one of the best fanfic/novel I've ever read please don't drop it and continue it for a long time 🙏
Nothing just a passing abuse to others who gave negative reviews(twice) for the novel for no reason. Let me return the favour. The next time give proper information about content or you would be countered like this
┌∩┐(ಠ_ಠ)┌∩┐ ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\З= ( ▀ ͜͞ʖ▀) =Ε/̵͇̿̿/’̿’̿ ̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ▄︻̷̿┻̿═━一 ( ͡°( ͡° ͜ʖ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ʖ ͡°) ͡°) ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ (▀̿Ĺ̯▀̿ ̿) (ง ͠° ͟ل͜ ͡°)ง ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ ಠ_ಠ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\З=( ͠° ͟ʖ ͡°)=Ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) [̲̅$̲̅(̲̅5̲̅)̲̅$̲̅] ┬┴┬┴┤ ͜ʖ ͡°) ├┬┴┬┴ ( ͡°╭͜ʖ╮͡° ) (͡ ͡° ͜ つ ͡͡°) (• Ε •) (ง'̀-'́)ง (ಥ﹏ಥ) ﴾͡๏̯͡๏﴿ O'RLY? (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻ [̲̅$̲̅(̲̅ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°̲̅)̲̅$̲̅] (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ (☞ﾟ∀ﾟ)☞ | (• ◡•)| (❍ᴥ❍Ʋ) (◕‿◕✿) (ᵔᴥᵔ) (╯°□°)╯︵ ꞰOOQƎƆⱯɟ (¬‿¬) (☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞ ☜(ﾟヮﾟ☜) (づ￣ ³￣)づ Ლ(ಠ益ಠᲚ) ಠ╭╮ಠ ̿ ̿ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\З=(•_•)=Ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿'̿ ̿ /╲/\╭( ͡° ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ͡°)╮/\╱\ (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`) ♪~ ᕕ(ᐛ)ᕗ ♥‿♥ ༼ つ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ༽つ ༼ つ ಥ_ಥ ༽つ (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻ ( ͡ᵔ ͜ʖ ͡ᵔ ) ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ♪ ~(˘▾˘~) ◉_◉ \ (•◡•) / (~˘▾˘)~ (._.) ( L: ) ( .-. ) ( :L ) (._.) ༼ʘ̚ل͜ʘ̚༽ ༼ ºل͟º ༼ ºل͟º ༼ ºل͟º ༽ ºل͟º ༽ ºل͟º ༽ ┬┴┬┴┤(･_├┬┴┬┴ ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ ᕦ(Ò_Óˇ)ᕤ ┻━┻ ︵ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ︵ ┻━┻ ⚆ _ ⚆ (•_•) ( •_•)>⌐■-■ (⌐■_■) (｡◕‿‿◕｡) ♪～(´ε｀ )(＾3＾♪┌(・。・)┘♪♪ヽ(･ˇ∀ˇ･ゞ)₍₍ ◝( ﾟ∀ ﾟ )◟ ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾₍₍◞( •௰• )◟₎₎⁽⁽◝( •௰• )◜⁾⁾\(ϋ)/♩♪┌|∵|┘♪ └|∵|┐♪♪ \(^ω^\ )\(๑╹◡╹๑)ﾉ♬ヾ( ͝° ͜ʖ͡°)ノ♪(＾∇＾)ﾉ♪( /^ω^)/♪♪(*ﾉ・ω・)ﾉ♫┌|o^▽^o|┘♪┏(＾0＾)┛┌(★ｏ☆)┘ヘ(￣ω￣ヘ)♪(┌・。・)┌(｢`･ω･)｢└( ＾ω＾)」 •́ ‿ ,•̀ಥ‿ಥʕ´• ᴥ•̥`ʔ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ(｡ŏ﹏ŏ)( ･ั﹏･ั)(´；ω；｀)( ；∀；)Ó╭╮Ò(っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ(｡•́︿•̀｡)(｡ﾉω＼｡).·´¯`(>▂<)´¯`·.(｡•́︿•̀｡)(´ . .̫ . `)(๑´•.̫ • `๑)ಥ╭╮ಥ(ᗒᗩᗕ)( ≧Д≦).·´¯`(>▂<)´¯`·.
Trash 🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️.................... ..................... . ................ .
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Thanks for reading the novel. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂... .. . keep giving reviews for the story.
This is a really really good novel it’s like a Chinese mtl naruto novel in terms of writing quality but there’s no grammar issues or anything mc is cold and calculating while portraying a kind front all around great novel
Cant rate writing quality because its a translation. But the story itself is about a super generic edge lord villain wannabe who has to make people acknowledged him (whatever that means) and then hope they die so he can get their power ( again it will mean whatever the author wants it to mean) The plot progression is like any other chinese fic, it will take atleast a 1000 chapters to go anywhere so make sure you have alot of patience.
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so what if he is the strongest, the path that mc follows is very dark and cruel. What would he write if he was the strongest? after being alone.
Really good seriously dark fanfic. Mc is a really twisted sociopath not really my cup of tea i prefer a more balanced mc or sympathetic so I don't hate his guts out but that's only to my taste. definitely worth a read. With highlights such as Ruthlessly killing a girl with a twisted crush for power and setting up his parents for death only way the mc can top that is butchering an orphanage. author san if you're not on some kind of watch list someone ain't doing there job. Peace.
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I gotta say this is a well written novel that hooked me into adding gifs to all my comments. I like it that there is no mistake in the sentences as far as I am concerned. This is a true villain novel and I am really recommending this for all to read.
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I have read alot of naruto fanfiction this one takes the cake. Mc is a hypocrite, very pragmatic and cautious about what he does always watches for his long term benefits, a puppet master who pulls strings from the back ground, never initiates a fight unless he knows for sure he wont win. I recommend this if u liked Reverend Insanity.
MC is delusional bruh, I ain't reading this bullshit any further. MC wants to pass his pathetic bloodline to powerful Female Ninjas, as a justification to kill his parents. If you like it(don't you dare bish!) then read it
I want to say that this is one of the best fanfic/novel I've ever read please don't drop it and continue it for a long time 🙏
Nothing just a passing abuse to others who gave negative reviews(twice) for the novel for no reason. Let me return the favour. The next time give proper information about content or you would be countered like this
┌∩┐(ಠ_ಠ)┌∩┐ ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\З= ( ▀ ͜͞ʖ▀) =Ε/̵͇̿̿/’̿’̿ ̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ▄︻̷̿┻̿═━一 ( ͡°( ͡° ͜ʖ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ʖ ͡°) ͡°) ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ (▀̿Ĺ̯▀̿ ̿) (ง ͠° ͟ل͜ ͡°)ง ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ ಠ_ಠ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\З=( ͠° ͟ʖ ͡°)=Ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) [̲̅$̲̅(̲̅5̲̅)̲̅$̲̅] ┬┴┬┴┤ ͜ʖ ͡°) ├┬┴┬┴ ( ͡°╭͜ʖ╮͡° ) (͡ ͡° ͜ つ ͡͡°) (• Ε •) (ง'̀-'́)ง (ಥ﹏ಥ) ﴾͡๏̯͡๏﴿ O'RLY? (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻ [̲̅$̲̅(̲̅ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°̲̅)̲̅$̲̅] (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ (☞ﾟ∀ﾟ)☞ | (• ◡•)| (❍ᴥ❍Ʋ) (◕‿◕✿) (ᵔᴥᵔ) (╯°□°)╯︵ ꞰOOQƎƆⱯɟ (¬‿¬) (☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞ ☜(ﾟヮﾟ☜) (づ￣ ³￣)づ Ლ(ಠ益ಠᲚ) ಠ╭╮ಠ ̿ ̿ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\З=(•_•)=Ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿'̿ ̿ /╲/\╭( ͡° ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ͡°)╮/\╱\ (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`) ♪~ ᕕ(ᐛ)ᕗ ♥‿♥ ༼ つ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ༽つ ༼ つ ಥ_ಥ ༽つ (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻ ( ͡ᵔ ͜ʖ ͡ᵔ ) ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ♪ ~(˘▾˘~) ◉_◉ \ (•◡•) / (~˘▾˘)~ (._.) ( L: ) ( .-. ) ( :L ) (._.) ༼ʘ̚ل͜ʘ̚༽ ༼ ºل͟º ༼ ºل͟º ༼ ºل͟º ༽ ºل͟º ༽ ºل͟º ༽ ┬┴┬┴┤(･_├┬┴┬┴ ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ ᕦ(Ò_Óˇ)ᕤ ┻━┻ ︵ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ︵ ┻━┻ ⚆ _ ⚆ (•_•) ( •_•)>⌐■-■ (⌐■_■) (｡◕‿‿◕｡) ♪～(´ε｀ )(＾3＾♪┌(・。・)┘♪♪ヽ(･ˇ∀ˇ･ゞ)₍₍ ◝( ﾟ∀ ﾟ )◟ ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾₍₍◞( •௰• )◟₎₎⁽⁽◝( •௰• )◜⁾⁾\(ϋ)/♩♪┌|∵|┘♪ └|∵|┐♪♪ \(^ω^\ )\(๑╹◡╹๑)ﾉ♬ヾ( ͝° ͜ʖ͡°)ノ♪(＾∇＾)ﾉ♪( /^ω^)/♪♪(*ﾉ・ω・)ﾉ♫┌|o^▽^o|┘♪┏(＾0＾)┛┌(★ｏ☆)┘ヘ(￣ω￣ヘ)♪(┌・。・)┌(｢`･ω･)｢└( ＾ω＾)」 •́ ‿ ,•̀ಥ‿ಥʕ´• ᴥ•̥`ʔ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ(｡ŏ﹏ŏ)( ･ั﹏･ั)(´；ω；｀)( ；∀；)Ó╭╮Ò(っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ(｡•́︿•̀｡)(｡ﾉω＼｡).·´¯`(>▂<)´¯`·.(｡•́︿•̀｡)(´ . .̫ . `)(๑´•.̫ • `๑)ಥ╭╮ಥ(ᗒᗩᗕ)( ≧Д≦).·´¯`(>▂<)´¯`·.
Trash 🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️.................... ..................... . ................ .
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Very Good Very Good Very Good. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂.. .. ... .... ... .. ..
Thanks for reading the novel. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂... .. . keep giving reviews for the story.
This is a really really good novel it’s like a Chinese mtl naruto novel in terms of writing quality but there’s no grammar issues or anything mc is cold and calculating while portraying a kind front all around great novel
Cant rate writing quality because its a translation. But the story itself is about a super generic edge lord villain wannabe who has to make people acknowledged him (whatever that means) and then hope they die so he can get their power ( again it will mean whatever the author wants it to mean) The plot progression is like any other chinese fic, it will take atleast a 1000 chapters to go anywhere so make sure you have alot of patience.
揭示劇透 so what if he is the strongest, the path that mc follows is very dark and cruel. What would he write if he was the strongest? after being alone.
Really good seriously dark fanfic. Mc is a really twisted sociopath not really my cup of tea i prefer a more balanced mc or sympathetic so I don't hate his guts out but that's only to my taste. definitely worth a read. With highlights such as Ruthlessly killing a girl with a twisted crush for power and setting up his parents for death only way the mc can top that is butchering an orphanage. author san if you're not on some kind of watch list someone ain't doing there job. Peace.
揭示劇透
I gotta say this is a well written novel that hooked me into adding gifs to all my comments. I like it that there is no mistake in the sentences as far as I am concerned. This is a true villain novel and I am really recommending this for all to read.