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Story is a little slow paced but it has relevance and shows the growth and background of the character. the story is very enjoyable and after the revenge chapter it might pick up pace a bit or have another time skip. either way its worth the read and I find it enjoyable. give it chance and you might also. keep up the good work.
story is too slow I'm bored to death. mc is weak still. feels likes it's going to take like 70 chapters just to get to canon. ... .... .... ...
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An interesting combined-universe fanfic. So far, we've seen tidbits of all three worlds already. The combination is not too shabby either, it's plausible if you give it the benefits of the doubt. Besides, it's a Grisaia fanfic. What can you ask more?
a really good fic. Please don't drop and update, please 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
Story is a little slow paced but it has relevance and shows the growth and background of the character. the story is very enjoyable and after the revenge chapter it might pick up pace a bit or have another time skip. either way its worth the read and I find it enjoyable. give it chance and you might also. keep up the good work.
story is too slow I'm bored to death. mc is weak still. feels likes it's going to take like 70 chapters just to get to canon. ... .... .... ...
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An interesting combined-universe fanfic. So far, we've seen tidbits of all three worlds already. The combination is not too shabby either, it's plausible if you give it the benefits of the doubt. Besides, it's a Grisaia fanfic. What can you ask more?
a really good fic. Please don't drop and update, please 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖