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Early review but I’ll still do it since I enjoyed it. Well it’s for sure a book for cultured men or woman and I do like the mc’s deceiving nature. Over all I say it’s a good read but I’ll see what happenes in later chapters.
I've read all the available chapters and this book is quite interesting. Though I am curious, I'll Uriel be mothering Jay? Since she's his guide, if so I would love to see her princess carrying him. Taking care of him perhaps? Though this is a good novel so far. I will be reading this novel in great interest.
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Here’s just something that should be noted before you readers start my novel. 1. The Mc will be OP, but there will be a balance. And, of course, he would have some rationality to think cuz he ain’t an idiot. 2. There will be a little harem, fortunately or unfortunately, for some of you. And yes, that means there will be romance. 3. MC is the playful type that almost doesn’t care about what happens, but he’s always thinking seriously inside. 4. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. MY ENTRY TO WPC 320 If you like the story so far, please consider lending me your power stones and maybe a review. :3 I will try my best for regular updates if my novel wins.
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Early review but I’ll still do it since I enjoyed it. Well it’s for sure a book for cultured men or woman and I do like the mc’s deceiving nature. Over all I say it’s a good read but I’ll see what happenes in later chapters.
I've read all the available chapters and this book is quite interesting. Though I am curious, I'll Uriel be mothering Jay? Since she's his guide, if so I would love to see her princess carrying him. Taking care of him perhaps? Though this is a good novel so far. I will be reading this novel in great interest.
揭示劇透
Here’s just something that should be noted before you readers start my novel. 1. The Mc will be OP, but there will be a balance. And, of course, he would have some rationality to think cuz he ain’t an idiot. 2. There will be a little harem, fortunately or unfortunately, for some of you. And yes, that means there will be romance. 3. MC is the playful type that almost doesn’t care about what happens, but he’s always thinking seriously inside. 4. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. MY ENTRY TO WPC 320 If you like the story so far, please consider lending me your power stones and maybe a review. :3 I will try my best for regular updates if my novel wins.