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this is really good fanfiction for an for an underrated isekai like wise men grandchild the plot is really good, the characters are really likeable and the pace is not to fast nor to slow I really like this fanfic I hope you continue the good work author I appreciate good work when I see one.[img=gift][img=strong][img=update]
character is overly cringe and makes stupid decisions for someone that is meant to know the original story.
Well for starters: _ The MC isn’t truly a villain, and he is a bit childish _ He say he isn’t talented in magic but can one shot multiple midlle~low high demonic beasts _ Low pace, like please dont waste multiple chapters on buisness _ Romance is meh, in his first encountrance with the og fm and her best friend they lowkey fell in love with him. Like mariah is helping him seducing her bf _ the author said the mc is talented in martial arts but apart from some swordmanship witch is lowkey mid or even bad he doesn’t due anything _ Finnaly i give it a 5, it’s a good read but don’t expect anything special
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This book sucks, the author has done nothing good except the good writing and update stability, and everything else is literal trash, i would say another example of great idea but trash execution. He did the same with his last novel and fcked it up.
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Other than writing quality and updates this story has nothing else going on. Author writes about mc, as if it's a likable character. Well he's not, he won't be and nobody wants to be like him. This is the reason everyone hates on this ff, no wonder author is afraid of comments, sigh...
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What I'll say is that if you liked the show, you'll most likely enjoy this ff even though the MC is not really similar the the original mc at all. I'm enjoying it a lot so far personally.
I'm sorry guys, i can't do this. The mc is not of my liking in my opinion. I get it that the mc is supposed to be like someone who got what they wanted but don't know what to do with it, so much potential but terrible execution, not to say that I'm a professional but this irritates me.~this is all in my opinion
the villain tag should be remove the mc is not even a villain and the author seems to not know that kurt is not even bad to begin with its been stated that he was a dutiful and good child but due to the pressure of responsibilityas the heir of his house, manipulation and experimentation of the main villain he became what he is in the start of canon
Author, please fix chapter 23, instead of being chapter 23 it is a future chapter that should not even have been released yet.
no magic talent? thats stupid he had good talent in anime........................................................................................
Why? MC is typically Asian protagonist xianxia [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Pese al mundo y los personajes, fue bueno para pasar el rato, pero lo sentí muy lento para mí gusto, aún así vale la pena para leer teniendo en cuenta de dónde es el fanfic!!!
Hasta ahora me parece bien ya que algunas idea son buena y la reacción del mc está bien para alguien que no es perfecto ya que tiene el mundo un poco en contra por el prota (original ) ya que es muy roto 😁👍
__.,.,?,!,;,;!,!!""?";*!*:";"!"!"?""?*.,..,!,;*:";*?""?";!*,/,!;,:"":;*!*"!"!"/*!,;;_;";"!"_,,__,,,__,,_,,,,,/,.,/,.,!,;,!,,!/,,!,!;,;,!,.,.,_/,!,;:,:!'!";:":*!"";;"&$-$;$;"!-";"!"+"-""!*!*?/,//__!!*;";";";"!!,-;,!,;,;":"+"-"&"-"!*!*!*//,/,!,;_:""!"+-""!;""?*(-"!'!';"?"("!"!!"!*("-"+'';"!"+"+!'+'+'!";'!'+'-"++'!'(''-'-;'+"!""!+"*?/,/,!;"'!''+-'!'';'+!''!;''+!'+'?""))"-''+'((""!'("?";"(""!*!**!?,//,/,!";"!"?"(*,!,! Cringe
it's not bad.I gave 5 stars to this work because i really like the idea. And yeah i read it whis the translater that's why can't rate your writing abilities. But i saw that the total score was lower then 4, and i think it must be higher. So, take it as an advance
Excellent (Chapter 16)..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it was cringe in the beginning, not gonna lie, but from chapter 7 onwards, it's been pretty good.💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
Although I love the novel. But your chapters are a bit short and the waiting period for your chapters are 3 days long. Hope you can improve it and maybe do a mass release.
Interessante, estou gostando bastante dessa Fanfic, principalmente de uma Light Novel que não é muito famosa!!👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
the protagonist is not a villain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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this is really good fanfiction for an for an underrated isekai like wise men grandchild the plot is really good, the characters are really likeable and the pace is not to fast nor to slow I really like this fanfic I hope you continue the good work author I appreciate good work when I see one.[img=gift][img=strong][img=update]
character is overly cringe and makes stupid decisions for someone that is meant to know the original story.
Well for starters: _ The MC isn’t truly a villain, and he is a bit childish _ He say he isn’t talented in magic but can one shot multiple midlle~low high demonic beasts _ Low pace, like please dont waste multiple chapters on buisness _ Romance is meh, in his first encountrance with the og fm and her best friend they lowkey fell in love with him. Like mariah is helping him seducing her bf _ the author said the mc is talented in martial arts but apart from some swordmanship witch is lowkey mid or even bad he doesn’t due anything _ Finnaly i give it a 5, it’s a good read but don’t expect anything special
揭示劇透 This book sucks, the author has done nothing good except the good writing and update stability, and everything else is literal trash, i would say another example of great idea but trash execution. He did the same with his last novel and fcked it up.
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Other than writing quality and updates this story has nothing else going on. Author writes about mc, as if it's a likable character. Well he's not, he won't be and nobody wants to be like him. This is the reason everyone hates on this ff, no wonder author is afraid of comments, sigh...
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What I'll say is that if you liked the show, you'll most likely enjoy this ff even though the MC is not really similar the the original mc at all. I'm enjoying it a lot so far personally.
I'm sorry guys, i can't do this. The mc is not of my liking in my opinion. I get it that the mc is supposed to be like someone who got what they wanted but don't know what to do with it, so much potential but terrible execution, not to say that I'm a professional but this irritates me.~this is all in my opinion
the villain tag should be remove the mc is not even a villain and the author seems to not know that kurt is not even bad to begin with its been stated that he was a dutiful and good child but due to the pressure of responsibilityas the heir of his house, manipulation and experimentation of the main villain he became what he is in the start of canon
Author, please fix chapter 23, instead of being chapter 23 it is a future chapter that should not even have been released yet.
no magic talent? thats stupid he had good talent in anime........................................................................................
Why? MC is typically Asian protagonist xianxia [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Pese al mundo y los personajes, fue bueno para pasar el rato, pero lo sentí muy lento para mí gusto, aún así vale la pena para leer teniendo en cuenta de dónde es el fanfic!!!
Hasta ahora me parece bien ya que algunas idea son buena y la reacción del mc está bien para alguien que no es perfecto ya que tiene el mundo un poco en contra por el prota (original ) ya que es muy roto 😁👍
__.,.,?,!,;,;!,!!""?";*!*:";"!"!"?""?*.,..,!,;*:";*?""?";!*,/,!;,:"":;*!*"!"!"/*!,;;_;";"!"_,,__,,,__,,_,,,,,/,.,/,.,!,;,!,,!/,,!,!;,;,!,.,.,_/,!,;:,:!'!";:":*!"";;"&$-$;$;"!-";"!"+"-""!*!*?/,//__!!*;";";";"!!,-;,!,;,;":"+"-"&"-"!*!*!*//,/,!,;_:""!"+-""!;""?*(-"!'!';"?"("!"!!"!*("-"+'';"!"+"+!'+'+'!";'!'+'-"++'!'(''-'-;'+"!""!+"*?/,/,!;"'!''+-'!'';'+!''!;''+!'+'?""))"-''+'((""!'("?";"(""!*!**!?,//,/,!";"!"?"(*,!,! Cringe
it's not bad.I gave 5 stars to this work because i really like the idea. And yeah i read it whis the translater that's why can't rate your writing abilities. But i saw that the total score was lower then 4, and i think it must be higher. So, take it as an advance
Excellent (Chapter 16)..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it was cringe in the beginning, not gonna lie, but from chapter 7 onwards, it's been pretty good.💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
Although I love the novel. But your chapters are a bit short and the waiting period for your chapters are 3 days long. Hope you can improve it and maybe do a mass release.
Interessante, estou gostando bastante dessa Fanfic, principalmente de uma Light Novel que não é muito famosa!!👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
the protagonist is not a villain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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