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I like the story but I think the main character is really a hypocrite he flirts all-day but says he'll only love Hestia which is unreasonable and you nerfed quantum magic so much that it's not a joke
Well, what can I say not every fanfic can turn bell from a boy to giga-chad and it is done beautifully. I would say that if he used energy manipulation as in the author's secound coming of gluttony fanfic it would be on a whole other level. Hoping for updates and please don't drop it.
Is it dropped?????? Mhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Seriously please tell me, I love this fanfic.
I think the best danmachi fan fic that I ever read .. even better than the show itself.. I hope you keep updating it to the end of the story ..
Genial, hubo momentos que casi hacen que deje de leer pero eso es normal ahí cosas o momentos que a uno no le gustan, pero por lo demás es muy bueno.
would have ben one of the top fics but the author made the mc not so special and that his abilities can just be copy pasted to a book then given to someone. this fic was one of the leading ones till he made that mistake and made the mc not so special anymore.
5 from Russia I very bad speak English. This is auto translated. 140 simwols, aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, very hard. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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it's a shme that the mc is not the only special one. you made a supporting character into one of the male leads and always pops up every 2nd half into the chapter.
one of the best danmachi fan fic I've read so far. Nice story development and character. Hope the writer keep up the great work to continue this great story.
I REALLY hope that this is not one of those fics that get dropped between 40 and 70 chapters, because that happens way to often with the best fics, (just look at ghost system, not a fanfic but still, 10/10 novel, ended too soon) and while this isnt on the level of ghost system (yet) its way too good to not have hundreds of chapters. pls author dont burn yourself out and just keep doing your thing.
No harem. Sign me up. Noiceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
THIS. STORY. IS. AMAZING! It's incredibly well written! The story is great, the characters are written amazingly and their interactions are incredible. The best Danmachi fanfic I've read hands down. Its funny at all the right times and serious when it need to be as well. I has an interesting take on the Danmachi world itself and turns a, while classic, somewhat 2 dimensional world into a world that feels 'real'. A round of applause for the author because this is a masterpiece!
honest opinion, it's a well written story with good character design ( even though I don't like his naivety in easily trusting people I find myself unable to dislike him his character is consistent and well thought of). even thought the FF is quite good, I don't find it in myself to continue reading it 😪 especially after the bird turned into a girl 😑 don't know why the whole story feels a little too pink to me.
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Shame it's Not harem... I want Hephaestus😭😭😭 AHHH!!!!!😭?...........why [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] .... ......
well, this is getting better and better .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
I don’t like how he calls her Tia when they first meet. Giving a nickname to a stranger is odd not to mention a god. Bhbuh bhuuhbhubhubhubnjinjibhubhubygvgyvtyvfyvhu injin
la verdad me ha gustado bastante la novela, dejando de lado el problema que se presentó con lo del uso obligatorio de la app para leer los capítulos completos de la novela en Webnovel, he seguido desde que salieron los primero 7 Capítulos en Webnovel. y siempre me ha gustado lo que has hecho. ya me puse al día con los capítulos en scribblehub ahora a ponerme al día.
subes esto en otro sitio? porque aqui ya no lo puedo leer. [img=exp][img=bofetada][img=fp][img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar]
its rly good im wondering if your posting this on other sites i cant be bothered to deal with webnovel telling me to download their app to see the full chapters
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This is really great but please dont make such short chapters...and it looks like an omake! omakes are good but not like this... the longer ones were better!
the sheer elation I felt when I saw the author was Vain-chan... so happy to know you haven't died yet mate.... considering its been a while you updated any of your stories.
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Gonna ask the question a lot of people are gonna wanna know. Is this another useless harem fic? Really hoping you didnt jump on the harem wagon just because the anime had it
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the story is good but it leaves a lot to be desired the chapters go in my opinion leaving a lot to be desired now all the goddesses get children just like that unrequited love op skills from who knows where they come out without context I don't see it continuation the rest will be more one thing on top of the other trying to get hooked on the plot and nothing else and it will end with an ending like this suddenly
揭示劇透 I like the story but I think the main character is really a hypocrite he flirts all-day but says he'll only love Hestia which is unreasonable and you nerfed quantum magic so much that it's not a joke
Well, what can I say not every fanfic can turn bell from a boy to giga-chad and it is done beautifully. I would say that if he used energy manipulation as in the author's secound coming of gluttony fanfic it would be on a whole other level. Hoping for updates and please don't drop it.
Is it dropped?????? Mhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Seriously please tell me, I love this fanfic.
I think the best danmachi fan fic that I ever read .. even better than the show itself.. I hope you keep updating it to the end of the story ..
Genial, hubo momentos que casi hacen que deje de leer pero eso es normal ahí cosas o momentos que a uno no le gustan, pero por lo demás es muy bueno.
would have ben one of the top fics but the author made the mc not so special and that his abilities can just be copy pasted to a book then given to someone. this fic was one of the leading ones till he made that mistake and made the mc not so special anymore.
5 from Russia I very bad speak English. This is auto translated. 140 simwols, aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, very hard. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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it's a shme that the mc is not the only special one. you made a supporting character into one of the male leads and always pops up every 2nd half into the chapter.
one of the best danmachi fan fic I've read so far. Nice story development and character. Hope the writer keep up the great work to continue this great story.
I REALLY hope that this is not one of those fics that get dropped between 40 and 70 chapters, because that happens way to often with the best fics, (just look at ghost system, not a fanfic but still, 10/10 novel, ended too soon) and while this isnt on the level of ghost system (yet) its way too good to not have hundreds of chapters. pls author dont burn yourself out and just keep doing your thing.
No harem. Sign me up. Noiceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
THIS. STORY. IS. AMAZING! It's incredibly well written! The story is great, the characters are written amazingly and their interactions are incredible. The best Danmachi fanfic I've read hands down. Its funny at all the right times and serious when it need to be as well. I has an interesting take on the Danmachi world itself and turns a, while classic, somewhat 2 dimensional world into a world that feels 'real'. A round of applause for the author because this is a masterpiece!
honest opinion, it's a well written story with good character design ( even though I don't like his naivety in easily trusting people I find myself unable to dislike him his character is consistent and well thought of). even thought the FF is quite good, I don't find it in myself to continue reading it 😪 especially after the bird turned into a girl 😑 don't know why the whole story feels a little too pink to me.
揭示劇透 Shame it's Not harem... I want Hephaestus😭😭😭 AHHH!!!!!😭?...........why [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] .... ......
well, this is getting better and better .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
I don’t like how he calls her Tia when they first meet. Giving a nickname to a stranger is odd not to mention a god. Bhbuh bhuuhbhubhubhubnjinjibhubhubygvgyvtyvfyvhu injin
la verdad me ha gustado bastante la novela, dejando de lado el problema que se presentó con lo del uso obligatorio de la app para leer los capítulos completos de la novela en Webnovel, he seguido desde que salieron los primero 7 Capítulos en Webnovel. y siempre me ha gustado lo que has hecho. ya me puse al día con los capítulos en scribblehub ahora a ponerme al día.
subes esto en otro sitio? porque aqui ya no lo puedo leer. [img=exp][img=bofetada][img=fp][img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar]
its rly good im wondering if your posting this on other sites i cant be bothered to deal with webnovel telling me to download their app to see the full chapters
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This is really great but please dont make such short chapters...and it looks like an omake! omakes are good but not like this... the longer ones were better!
the sheer elation I felt when I saw the author was Vain-chan... so happy to know you haven't died yet mate.... considering its been a while you updated any of your stories.
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Gonna ask the question a lot of people are gonna wanna know. Is this another useless harem fic? Really hoping you didnt jump on the harem wagon just because the anime had it
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the story is good but it leaves a lot to be desired the chapters go in my opinion leaving a lot to be desired now all the goddesses get children just like that unrequited love op skills from who knows where they come out without context I don't see it continuation the rest will be more one thing on top of the other trying to get hooked on the plot and nothing else and it will end with an ending like this suddenly
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