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I like this novel of Danmachi. I wish that more chapters for read. bendiciones autor-sama. sigue asi men. Psdttt: ya tiene tus 5 estrellas.
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Is this a rewrite or just a copy from another author? I know I’ve read this book before on here.🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Honest Opinion, this is probably one of the better Danmachi Fanfics I've read. The pacings great, no mistakes grammatically so far, Bell's practically an original character which makes the story more lively, and the characters themselves seem more real than the show. Overall I think this will blow up quickly, keep it up!
I really like this story thx author you have my respect and power stones... I still need to write or else it won't let me post my post...
one of the best danmachi fics ever happy it got posted here by author found with a copier which led to real author I never rate 5 in update release unless it is completely finished sooo full marks
Good story. Very good to be fair, the grammar is on point, the story is developing towards a good path but I dropped it. The reason I dropped it is because of one reason but it's a very annoying thing. The reason being, the MC says and gives unnecessary information to others, as in: (spoiler) He told eina how he got stronger using potions to help her, and she'll use that information by giving it to the guild to help other adventurers and our MC doesn't get anything from it. He did this before as well. No benefits, only another illogical headache. Why give this information when an enemy might use this and why do it if you don't get anything out of it? I don't think I'd like to read a story that stresses me out. Anyway, good luck with this story. Bye
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I like this novel of Danmachi. I wish that more chapters for read. bendiciones autor-sama. sigue asi men. Psdttt: ya tiene tus 5 estrellas.
(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
Is this a rewrite or just a copy from another author? I know I’ve read this book before on here.🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Honest Opinion, this is probably one of the better Danmachi Fanfics I've read. The pacings great, no mistakes grammatically so far, Bell's practically an original character which makes the story more lively, and the characters themselves seem more real than the show. Overall I think this will blow up quickly, keep it up!
I really like this story thx author you have my respect and power stones... I still need to write or else it won't let me post my post...
one of the best danmachi fics ever happy it got posted here by author found with a copier which led to real author I never rate 5 in update release unless it is completely finished sooo full marks
Good story. Very good to be fair, the grammar is on point, the story is developing towards a good path but I dropped it. The reason I dropped it is because of one reason but it's a very annoying thing. The reason being, the MC says and gives unnecessary information to others, as in: (spoiler) He told eina how he got stronger using potions to help her, and she'll use that information by giving it to the guild to help other adventurers and our MC doesn't get anything from it. He did this before as well. No benefits, only another illogical headache. Why give this information when an enemy might use this and why do it if you don't get anything out of it? I don't think I'd like to read a story that stresses me out. Anyway, good luck with this story. Bye